ghazlon ka hunar

by abeera on March 11, 2006, 05:52:17 PM
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Ghazlon ka hunar apni ankhon ko sikhaen gey

roien gey buhat lekin aansoo nahin aein gey

 

keh dena samandar sey hum oas k moti hein

darya ki tarah tujh sey milney nahin aein gey

 

wo dhoop k chapper hon ya chaao'n ki deewarein

ab jo bhi uthayen gey mil jul k uthayein gey

 

jab sath na dey koi awaz humein dena

hum phool sahi lekin patthar bhi uthayein gey
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«Reply #1 on: March 11, 2006, 06:03:25 PM »
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Ghazlon ka hunar apni ankhon ko sikhaen gey

roien gey buhat lekin aansoo nahin aein gey

 

keh dena samandar sey hum oas k moti hein

darya ki tarah tujh sey milney nahin aein gey

 

wo dhoop k chapper hon ya chaao'n ki deewarein

ab jo bhi uthayen gey mil jul k uthayein gey

 

jab sath na dey koi awaz humein dena

hum phool sahi lekin patthar bhi uthayein gey


wonderfulll  Abeera.........   bahot  acchi ghazal  aap ne  likha.....   very  touching  words.........
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abeera
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2006, 12:36:46 PM »
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asalam alikum waheed  thaks for liking and appreciating


ek pathar kafi hai sisha thodnae ke liye
ek baath kafi hai dil thodnae ke liye
aur ek dost kafi hai zindagi jee lene ke liye!!


take care ALLAH HAFIZ
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2006, 12:59:58 PM »
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Walaikumasslam........ur  always  welcome........nice  again.........

Jisne chot hi na khayee ho woh chehra kya pehchanega,
dilke jakham  to  koi  dilwala hi jaanega.........
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«Reply #4 on: March 12, 2006, 01:02:13 PM »
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Abeera aur Waheed

Mashallah !

Bahut khoob...

Keep it up

Rajbir
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roshni246
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«Reply #5 on: March 12, 2006, 01:05:12 PM »
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waheed bro awesum......abeera great...!!!
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abeera
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2006, 02:36:20 PM »
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THANK S ALOT ROSHNI WAHEED AND RAJBIR

kuch nasha apki baton ka hai,
kuch nasha dheemi barsat ka hai,
hamne aap yunhi sharabi math kahiyae
yeh dil par asar apkae mulaqat ka hai!!

take care ALLAH HAFIZ
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Aryaan
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2006, 02:41:51 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abeera.... & Good One Waheed...
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nikki
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2006, 03:00:49 PM »
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too gud Abeera n Waheed!!!!
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mehek
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2006, 03:07:12 PM »
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bohat khoob likha hai abeera and nice one
waheed Usual Smile
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abeera
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«Reply #10 on: March 13, 2006, 08:07:11 AM »
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thanks all of u

main jaanta hoon kee yeh khawaab juthe hain aur,
yeh kusheeyaan adhuree hai,
magar zindaa rahane ke leeye mere dost,
kuchch galat fahamiyan zaruree hain.
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