Gila rahiii... - Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on March 04, 2011, 06:36:58 AM
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mere dil me pyar tha magar mann me ek sada rahi

mai usse door tha bahut wo akeli mere paas rahi~

 
meri ankhon me nahi dikhati tasveer koi,

mere dilbar ko mujhse ye gila rahi~

 
mai use apna pyaar na de saka magar,

mere paas bas meri wafa rahi~


jab dekhun bas wo hi dikhe mujhko,

In nazaron ki bas itni khata rahi~
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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2011, 07:30:03 AM »
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bht khoob abhi ji.....
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2011, 10:43:32 AM »
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ye to thoda thoda sa Dard shayri lagi mujhe.
badhiya hai ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2011, 06:30:55 PM »
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Bahut Khub Abhi JI
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2011, 07:47:55 PM »
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Bahaut thorre main sab kuch kehgaye..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: March 05, 2011, 06:23:06 AM »
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aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya ~
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«Reply #6 on: March 05, 2011, 06:30:28 AM »
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bahut khub abhiji....
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«Reply #7 on: March 05, 2011, 08:34:03 AM »
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excellent 1 abhi ji......bht mast mast likha hai aapne....
kuch meri taraf se bhi yahanlikh dun....

Akele chata raha tu apne kathin safar me na thaka kyunki
Baanh thaame teri parchhai ki main hamesha tere sath rahi

Talaashti rahi teri nazron me jhaankar teri ruuh ko
Par apne liye mahobbat ki na  tere dil me koi parchhai rahi


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«Reply #8 on: March 05, 2011, 12:18:33 PM »
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mast poem abhi ji…...
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2011, 08:48:16 AM »
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aap dono ka bh shukriya anu ji or anaam ji~
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2011, 11:29:10 AM »
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Wah wah Abhi ji bahut khoobsurati se likha aapne,great creatio,hats off,keep it up icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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