GULSHAN MAIN NA JAO JANEJAHAN

by SARVESH RASTOGI on April 09, 2009, 09:32:21 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 14, 2009, 05:56:18 PM »
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wah wah wah, bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

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«Reply #16 on: April 15, 2009, 01:31:20 AM »
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wah wah wah, bahut khoob Sarvesh Ji, bahut hi khoob, wah

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«Reply #17 on: April 15, 2009, 09:51:12 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 14, 2009, 05:06:19 PM
Shukriya Meharbani
Aap wakai Kadradaan hai Azeem,
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Thank U Sarvesh Bhai,.
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«Reply #18 on: April 15, 2009, 10:56:02 AM »
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Waah bahoot hi badiya likha hai... Truly grt piece of work Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: April 15, 2009, 11:31:52 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on April 15, 2009, 10:56:02 AM
Waah bahoot hi badiya likha hai... Truly grt piece of work Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hello Salma wave
Meri shairy ke jawab main aapke comments lagatar mil rahe hain.
Tarif ke liye shukriya.  You are having good knowledge of poetry.
Main aapka shukraguzar hun.  Shukriya Meharbani, all the Best.
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«Reply #20 on: May 03, 2009, 05:52:38 AM »
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Shukriya Azeem Bhai
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«Reply #21 on: May 18, 2009, 07:07:30 AM »
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Shukriya Sophi Ji
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«Reply #22 on: May 18, 2009, 07:20:43 AM »
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Last stanza is conflicting Mr. Sarvesh
Presenting God in such way is unappreciable.
All other stanzas are very nice.
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«Reply #23 on: May 20, 2009, 12:58:21 PM »
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Shukriya Hussain Ji
Suggestion Welcome, Thanks.
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«Reply #24 on: May 20, 2009, 01:11:24 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on April 09, 2009, 09:32:21 AM
GULSHAN MAIN NA JAO JANEJAHAN, GULSHAN PE BAHAREIN AAYEE HAIN
GAR TUMHE DEKH KAR LAUT GAIN, KACHCHI KALION KA KYA HOGA

ZULFEN MAT LAHRAO AISE, BADRI NA KAHIN SHARMA JAYE
CHHUP GAYEE KAHIN JAKAR, SOCHO TO ZARA MOR KA KYA HOGA

KHUDKASHI NA KAR LE CHAND KAHIN, PARDA NA HATAO YUN RUKH SE
DUNIYA TO SOONI HOGI HI, SOCHO CHAKOR KA KYA HOGA

DEKHO NA FALAK PE YUN HANS KE, BIJLI NA KAHIN GASH KHA JAYE
GIR GAYEE ZAMIN PER AGAR KAHIN, DUNIYA WALON KA KYA HOGA

BAKHSHA HAI KHUDA NE HUSN TUMHE, KHUD KO NA KHUDA SAMJHO LEKIN
GAR TUMHI KHUDA BAN JAOGE, US ASAL KHUDA KA KYA HOGA

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Wah wah bahut khoob Sarvesh Rastogi ji  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #25 on: May 21, 2009, 10:07:46 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 20, 2009, 01:11:24 PM

Wah wah bahut khoob Sarvesh Rastogi ji  Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut Shukriya Roja Ji
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«Reply #26 on: May 22, 2009, 10:32:17 AM »
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bahut khoob Sarvesh ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #27 on: May 24, 2009, 06:07:16 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 22, 2009, 10:32:17 AM
bahut khoob Sarvesh ji Applause Applause

Bahut bahut Shukriya Diya Ji
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«Reply #28 on: June 11, 2009, 02:11:34 AM »
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गुलशन में न जाओ जानेजहाँ गुलशन में बहारें आयी हैं
गर तुम्हे देख कर लौट गईं कच्ची कलिओं का क्या होगा

जुल्फें मत लहराओ ऐसे बदली न कहीं शरमा जाये
छुप गई कहीं जाकर सोचो तो ज़रा मोर का क्या होगा

खुदकशी न कर ले चाँद कहीं परदा न हटाओ यूँ रुख से
दुनियां तो सूनी होगी ही सोचो चकोर का क्या होगा

देखो न फलक पर यूँ हंस के बिजली न कहीं गश खा जाये
गिर गई ज़मीं पर अगर कहीं दुनिया वालों का क्या होगा

बख्शा है खुदा ने हुस्न तुम्हे खुद को न खुदा समझो लेकिन
गर तुम्ही खुदा बन जाओगे उस असल खुदा का क्या होगा

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«Reply #29 on: June 17, 2009, 01:42:55 AM »
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Quote from: -Kashish- on May 22, 2009, 10:32:17 AM
bahut khoob Sarvesh ji Applause Applause

Many many Thanks Kashish Ji
Krapaya isi tarah hausala badhate rahen
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