gum ab na rulayenge

by saaz_haldwanvi on April 22, 2009, 02:32:44 PM
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 Pehle ye tay ho hizr-e-gum na ab rulayenge
 Ba-khushi hum tum bichhad tab jayenge,

 Ab khoo_n tapke ya na rahe tab-e-deed baa_ki
 Aankh to royegi khat tere jab-jab aayenge
 
 Koi gar puchhega wafa ka sila hum se
 Kham-e-abrou kar faqat hans jayenge
 
 Rahe khudai pe nahi sirre-hayat aye dana
 Kisi muskurate bachche ke jere-lab payenge,
 
 Ye sunke utare hain kaiyon ke chehre ke"saaz"
 Abhi aur jiyenge abhi aur khayenge   [SAAZ HALDWANVI]
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2009, 02:40:07 PM »
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Bohat Achche Saaz Bhai, Once Again,.
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2009, 03:05:34 PM »
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Subhan_allah Saaz subhan_allah karodo dad kabul ho..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har waqt meri aakho me nami ka sabab hain bas itna

Unki zid thi jab bhi royega GHAYEL hum muskurayge...

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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2009, 03:50:31 PM »
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 Pehle ye tay ho hizr-e-gum na ab rulayenge
 Ba-khushi hum tum bichhad tab jayenge,

 Ab khoo_n tapke ya na rahe tab-e-deed baa_ki
 Aankh to royegi khat tere jab-jab aayenge
 
 Koi gar puchhega wafa ka sila hum se
 Kham-e-abrou kar faqat hans jayenge
 
 Rahe khudai pe nahi sirre-hayat aye dana
 Kisi muskurate bachche ke jere-lab payenge,
 
 Ye sunke utare hain kaiyon ke chehre ke"saaz"
 Abhi aur jiyenge abhi aur khayenge   [SAAZ HALDWANVI]
                                      [COPY RIGHT RESERVED]

tabe-deed  : aakhon ki taqat
kahme-abro : eye brow ko teda karna
sirre-hayat: jindgi ka secret


Bohot Khoob Saaz Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2009, 03:52:08 PM »
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bahoot khoob Saaz ji!!

Sajid apki do line ... bahoot gahri baat kah rahi hai!! Good work!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2009, 03:55:35 PM »
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Subhan_allah Saaz subhan_allah karodo dad kabul ho..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har waqt meri aakho me nami ka sabab hain bas itna


Unki zid thi jab bhi royega GHAYEL hum muskurayge...

-SG-
 khoob kaha sajid
          shukriya
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2009, 03:58:47 PM »
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shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2009, 04:02:50 PM »
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Bohat Achche Saaz Bhai, Once Again,.
shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2009, 04:05:29 PM »
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kya khub likhte h ap saaj ji...bahut bahut behtrin
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2009, 05:03:29 PM »
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Achchha kalam hai,
lage raho,
Future bright hai,
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2009, 02:19:40 AM »
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Koi gar puchhega wafa ka sila hum se
 Kham-e-abrou kar faqat hans jayenge
 I love these lines.saaz kataraake nikalneki baatpe yaad aaya.
voh tera katrake nikal jana pasase,
jaise koi ajanabi gujar jaata hai rahse.
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«Reply #11 on: April 23, 2009, 02:48:21 AM »
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 Pehle ye tay ho hizr-e-gum na ab rulayenge
 Ba-khushi hum tum bichhad tab jayenge,

 Ab khoo_n tapke ya na rahe tab-e-deed baa_ki
 Aankh to royegi khat tere jab-jab aayenge
 
 Koi gar puchhega wafa ka sila hum se
 Kham-e-abrou kar faqat hans jayenge
 
 Rahe khudai pe nahi sirre-hayat aye dana
 Kisi muskurate bachche ke jere-lab payenge,
 
 Ye sunke utare hain kaiyon ke chehre ke"saaz"
 Abhi aur jiyenge abhi aur khayenge   [SAAZ HALDWANVI]
                                      [COPY RIGHT RESERVED]

tabe-deed  : aakhon ki taqat
kahme-abro : eye brow ko teda karna
sirre-hayat: jindgi ka secret


gud gud haldwani jee..
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«Reply #12 on: April 23, 2009, 03:03:55 AM »
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Koi gar puchhega wafa ka sila hum se
 Kham-e-abrou kar faqat hans jayenge
 I love these lines.saaz kataraake nikalneki baatpe yaad aaya.
voh tera katrake nikal jana pasase,
jaise koi ajanabi gujar jaata hai rahse.
WELCOME TO YOU SAPNA! TUMHARI SH_ER NE KUCHCH PURANA YAD DILA DIYA HAI, IS AJNABI KIBAAT PER EK GHAZAL KAHI HAI MAINE ,DAAD CHAHUNGA! BY THE WAY THANKS A LOT FOR HONSLA AFJAI
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 03:05:20 AM »
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gud gud haldwani jee..
SHUKRIYA PANDIT JI
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2009, 03:06:29 AM »
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kya khub likhte h ap saaj ji...bahut bahut behtrin
THANK U POP
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