Haal Ab Pooch Ke Karoge Kya? - R. Rangila

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Haal Ab Pooch Ke Karoge Kya?
Gham Se Daman Mera Bharoge Kya?

Yaad Unki Dilake Phir Se Mujhe
Zakhm Saare Hare Karoge Kya?

Dastan Unki Phir Se Dohra Ke
Ankhon Ko Ashkon Se Bharoge Kya?

Unki Har Baat Dard Deti Hai
Sunke Channi Jigar Karoge Kya?

Ishq Ki Raah Aag Ka Dariya
Is Mein Jal Bhun Ke Maroge Kya?

Main Jahan Thak Ke Haar Baetha Hoon
Raasta Tum Wohi Chaloge Kya?

Meri Hi Tarha Pyar Mein Lut Kar
Apna Bhi Kala Mun Karoge Kya?

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«Reply #1 on: January 28, 2016, 09:57:59 AM »
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Haal Ab Pooch Ke Karoge Kya?
Gham Se Daman Mera Bharoge Kya?

Yaad Unki Dilake Phir Se Mujhe
Zakhm Saare Hare Karoge Kya?

Dastan Unki Phir Se Dohra Ke
Ankhon Ko Ashkon Se Bharoge Kya?

Unki Har Baat Dard Deti Hai
Sunke Channi Jigar Karoge Kya?

Ishq Ki Raah Aag Ka Dariya
Is Mein Jal Bhun Ke Maroge Kya?
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Main Jahan Thak Ke Haar Baetha Hoon
Raasta Tum Wohi Chaloge Kya?

Meri Hi Tarha Pyar Mein Lut Kar
Apna Bhi Kala Mun Karoge Kya?
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaah rau aap ki nazr janaab   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 28, 2016, 10:10:35 AM »
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waaaaaaah waaaaaaah bahut khub Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 28, 2016, 10:17:00 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaah rau aap ki nazr janaab   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Adil bhai sahib As’salaam alaekum
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JazakAllah...
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waaaaaaah waaaaaaah bahut khub Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: January 28, 2016, 01:44:23 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut hee khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 28, 2016, 02:53:14 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut hee khoob

Bahot bahot shukriya Sir Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: January 28, 2016, 10:51:16 PM »
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Haal Ab Pooch Ke Karoge Kya?
Gham Se Daman Mera Bharoge Kya?                   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yaad Unki Dilake Phir Se Mujhe
Zakhm Saare Hare Karoge Kya?                            Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Applause
Dastan Unki Phir Se Dohra Ke
Ankhon Ko Ashkon Se Bharoge Kya?                      icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause

Unki Har Baat Dard Deti Hai
Sunke Channi Jigar Karoge Kya?                             icon_flower Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ishq Ki Raah Aag Ka Dariya
Is Mein Jal Bhun Ke Maroge Kya?                            icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Main Jahan Thak Ke Haar Baetha Hoon
Raasta Tum Wohi Chaloge Kya?                               icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause Applause

Meri Hi Tarha Pyar Mein Lut Kar
Apna Bhi Kala Mun Karoge Kya?                            Kyaa tumh bhi rooyaa karo gey kyaa?

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bahut bahut umdah waah with RAU.                       Yeh aakhree line mujhey itnee pasand nahin iss liye ke pyaar mein kuchh bhi ho saktaa hai magar munh kaa kaalaa honaa munaasib nahin, munh kaalaa to sangeen jurm ke liye hee hotaa hai aur pyaar jurm nahin.
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«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2016, 04:57:43 AM »
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Haal Ab Pooch Ke Karoge Kya?
Gham Se Daman Mera Bharoge Kya?
haal puchhne ki wajah ye hai janaab k aapki gazal ne fir dikha diya ye raasta... bht khubbbb sher Applause Applause Applause

Yaad Unki Dilake Phir Se Mujhe
Zakhm Saare Hare Karoge Kya?
waahhhhh wahhhh wahhhhh.... gazal hi aisi likhi hai aapne rangila ji... zakhm to hamare hare nahi lahooluhaan ho gaye.... tearyeyed tearyeyed

Dastan Unki Phir Se Dohra Ke
Ankhon Ko Ashkon Se Bharoge Kya?
bhtttttttt pyara sher... bas utar gaya dil me.... Crying Crying Crying

Unki Har Baat Dard Deti Hai
Sunke Channi Jigar Karoge Kya?
uffffff..... fir kyun suna rahe hain aap ye daastaan .....dil to chhalni ho hi gaya ...

Ishq Ki Raah Aag Ka Dariya
Is Mein Jal Bhun Ke Maroge Kya?

bestttttttttt sher of this gazallll...... kaash pehle kehte to sambhal jate deewane....

Main Jahan Thak Ke Haar Baetha Hoon
Raasta Tum Wohi Chaloge Kya?
aksar yahi hota hai ... hamara sahara lekar chalne wale log .. isi tarah aage badhte hain.... glasses7 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Meri Hi Tarha Pyar Mein Lut Kar
Apna Bhi Kala Mun Karoge Kya?
uffffffffffffff............. zindagi kaali ho gai babu... ab muh ka kya.... sad7 DOH

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behadddddd khubsurat gazal rangile ji.....
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2016, 06:15:47 PM »
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waaah waaaah waah bahoot khooob
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2016, 05:40:52 AM »
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bahut bahut umdah waah with RAU.                       Yeh aakhree line mujhey itnee pasand nahin iss liye ke pyaar mein kuchh bhi ho saktaa hai magar munh kaa kaalaa honaa munaasib nahin, munh kaalaa to sangeen jurm ke liye hee hotaa hai aur pyaar jurm nahin.

Bhai Surindarn ji bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
main aapki baat se itefaqh karta hoon ke pyar mein munh kaala nahi hota...
par kya hai na ke 'angoor na milento khatte'  Crying
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2016, 05:43:47 AM »
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Haal Ab Pooch Ke Karoge Kya?
Gham Se Daman Mera Bharoge Kya?
haal puchhne ki wajah ye hai janaab k aapki gazal ne fir dikha diya ye raasta... bht khubbbb sher Applause Applause Applause

Yaad Unki Dilake Phir Se Mujhe
Zakhm Saare Hare Karoge Kya?
waahhhhh wahhhh wahhhhh.... gazal hi aisi likhi hai aapne rangila ji... zakhm to hamare hare nahi lahooluhaan ho gaye.... tearyeyed tearyeyed

Dastan Unki Phir Se Dohra Ke
Ankhon Ko Ashkon Se Bharoge Kya?
bhtttttttt pyara sher... bas utar gaya dil me.... Crying Crying Crying

Unki Har Baat Dard Deti Hai
Sunke Channi Jigar Karoge Kya?
uffffff..... fir kyun suna rahe hain aap ye daastaan .....dil to chhalni ho hi gaya ...

Ishq Ki Raah Aag Ka Dariya
Is Mein Jal Bhun Ke Maroge Kya?

bestttttttttt sher of this gazallll...... kaash pehle kehte to sambhal jate deewane....

Main Jahan Thak Ke Haar Baetha Hoon
Raasta Tum Wohi Chaloge Kya?
aksar yahi hota hai ... hamara sahara lekar chalne wale log .. isi tarah aage badhte hain.... glasses7 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Meri Hi Tarha Pyar Mein Lut Kar
Apna Bhi Kala Mun Karoge Kya?
uffffffffffffff............. zindagi kaali ho gai babu... ab muh ka kya.... sad7 DOH

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behadddddd khubsurat gazal rangile ji.....

Thanks Kasak ji Usual Smile
Sach kahon to mujhe ye poetry likh kar utna maza nahi aaya, jitna aapke comments padh kar Usual Smile
Thanks ke aapne itna waqt nikala...
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«Reply #12 on: January 31, 2016, 05:44:56 AM »
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waaah waaaah waah bahoot khooob
Shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2016, 01:12:31 PM »
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