"haal e dil tumko sunaya"

by aaina on August 11, 2009, 09:56:23 AM
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Apni bechaini ka aise meine hul paaya
Haal e dil tumko sunaya to qaraar aaya

Ye diwaana hai samjhna hi nahi chahta
Tum milogi zaroor kitna isko samjhayaa

Har chehra isse anjaan dikhaaii daita hai
Ik tere chehre se jo issko milwaayaa

Ye roshni ki teergi thi ya ke koi manzar
jo meri aankho mai aa ke dhundlaya

mera safar bhi ajab hai ke humsafar mera
naseeb banke mera mujhse hi sharmaaya
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2009, 10:03:12 AM »
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Wah wah Aslam ji bahut khoob,very beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2009, 11:42:55 AM »
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bahut achche aslam bhai

ishq tera mere sar chad k bolta hai
ab chen aaye mujhe kaise. iska pata de
tujhse nahin poochhta kii kya hai teri marzi
magar kya main hoon tere dil main, itna bata de
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2009, 11:48:44 AM »
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Bahut khoob Saahil ji.wonderful lines. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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aaina
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2009, 02:37:08 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 11, 2009, 10:03:12 AM
Wah wah Aslam ji bahut khoob,very beautiful creation, icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent

thnxxxxxxx so much madhu ji.....................
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2009, 02:38:00 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 11, 2009, 11:42:55 AM
bahut achche aslam bhai

ishq tera mere sar chad k bolta hai
ab chen aaye mujhe kaise. iska pata de
tujhse nahin poochhta kii kya hai teri marzi
magar kya main hoon tere dil main, itna bata de

bhut shukriya saahil..........

bhut acha laikha hai dear
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2009, 05:08:14 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 11, 2009, 09:56:23 AM
Apni bechaini ka aise meine hul paaya
Haal e dil tumko sunaya to qaraar aaya

Ye diwaana hai samjhna hi nahi chahta
Tum milogi zaroor kitna isko samjhayaa

Har chehra isse anjaan dikhaaii daita hai
Ik tere chehre se jo issko milwaayaa

Ye roshni ki teergi thi ya ke koi manzar
jo meri aankho mai aa ke dhundlaya

mera safar bhi ajab hai ke humsafar mera
naseeb banke mera mujhse hi sharmaaya


Mashallah Aslam Ji...aap ki qalam ka ek aur jaadu sar chadh ke bol raha hai !!

Bohot bohot khoob  Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2009, 05:29:58 PM »
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wah bahoot khoob Aaina ji and Saahil bro!!
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aaina
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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2009, 12:19:49 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on August 18, 2009, 02:39:35 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahot khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji



bhut bhut skhukriya kaash
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aaina
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2009, 12:20:49 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 18, 2009, 05:29:58 PM
wah bahoot khoob Aaina ji and Saahil bro!!


shukriya pooja youn hi hosla badhaati rahiyega
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«Reply #10 on: August 28, 2009, 12:22:31 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 18, 2009, 05:08:14 PM
Mashallah Aslam Ji...aap ki qalam ka ek aur jaadu sar chadh ke bol raha hai !!

Bohot bohot khoob  Applause Applause Applause



thnxxxxx alot talat aapki nazar ka kamaal hai jo har sheh aapko achi hi lagti hai thnxxxxxx for ur appriciation, youn hi saaath daiti rahiye, god bless u
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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2009, 07:49:26 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Aslam Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon aur Ehasaason se Saja Hai aapka Yeh Qalaam.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2009, 11:11:04 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on August 29, 2009, 07:49:26 AM
Wah Kya Baat hai Aslam Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon aur Ehasaason se Saja Hai aapka Yeh Qalaam.. Bahut Khoooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**


thnxxx so much mann thnxx alot for ur appriciation
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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2009, 03:40:14 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 11, 2009, 09:56:23 AM
Apni bechaini ka aise meine hul paaya
Haal e dil tumko sunaya to qaraar aaya

Ye diwaana hai samjhna hi nahi chahta
Tum milogi zaroor kitna isko samjhayaa

Har chehra isse anjaan dikhaaii daita hai
Ik tere chehre se jo issko milwaayaa

Ye roshni ki teergi thi ya ke koi manzar
jo meri aankho mai aa ke dhundlaya

mera safar bhi ajab hai ke humsafar mera
naseeb banke mera mujhse hi sharmaaya


Wah wah.... Aslam ji...bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: August 31, 2009, 09:00:05 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 30, 2009, 03:40:14 AM
Wah wah.... Aslam ji...bahut khoob  Applause Applause



thnxxx so much roja
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