Haal-e-Dil Yun Hi Ghazlon Mein Bolun...

by HUM_DUM on August 09, 2010, 09:40:46 PM
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               Tere Hi  Khayalon  Mein  Jaagu  ,  Aur  Solun
               Is Qadar Teri  Yaadon Se  ,  Khud Ko Bhigolu

               Na Jaane  Toot  Jaaye Kab Yahaan Sapna Koi
               Jee  Karta Hai Aankhen Kabhi Bhi Na Kholun          

               Bhool Paaye  Na Tujhey Ek Pal Ko Bhi Sanam
               Tere  Ehsason  Mein  Dil Ko , Yun  Doobolun.
                
               Kaash  Ki Aa  Jaaye Achanaak , Tu  Kabhi To
               Bakhuda Tujhko Main , Phoolon  Mein Tolun.

               Sun  Jo Le Tu Kabhi To  Aey , HumDum Mere
               Haal-e-Dil Apna Yun Hi Ghazlon Men Bolun .


                          
                               Hum Dum
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 09, 2010, 09:48:03 PM »
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Mohobat bhari iss ghazal ko wahi wahi pesh karta hoon..Bahaut khubsoorati se lavzon ko sajaya hai ehsaason main..Yun likte rahiye..!
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«Reply #2 on: August 09, 2010, 10:25:40 PM »
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Wah wah Hum dum ji very romantic and lovely gazal.great creation.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 11:12:37 AM »
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Wah bahot khoob takhleeq hai Hum Dum ji. Padhkar bahot achha laga. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2010, 11:39:29 AM »
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wah ji bahut achhe ...

apne shabdo me:

dil se rooh tak jam gaye "Abhi" mere,
Kisi katil nazar ne nashila koi teer chhoda he~
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«Reply #5 on: August 10, 2010, 01:50:18 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on August 09, 2010, 09:48:03 PM
Mohobat bhari iss ghazal ko wahi wahi pesh karta hoon..Bahaut khubsoorati se lavzon ko sajaya hai ehsaason main..Yun likte rahiye..!
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Nawaazish

Bohat Shukariya Janaab Rahim Saheb Hausla Afzaii Ke Liye.

Aap Bhi Khush Rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 12:32:43 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Hum_Dum ji... bahut sundar kavita pesh ki hai apne... mohabbat se bharpoor aapki ye kavita humein bahut pasand aayi... hamaare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita... abhi to bas aapka hi geet gunguna raha hoon main... bahut achcha likha hai aapne ....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2010, 03:47:58 AM »
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bht pyari gazal humdum ji...

jo tu har baat apni gazal me kahe
main teri kalam ban tere hathon me saji rahun......
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 08:55:43 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 09, 2010, 10:25:40 PM
Wah wah Hum dum ji very romantic and lovely gazal.great creation.excellent icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks For Appreciation Madhuwesh Sahiba Ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2010, 08:57:50 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on August 10, 2010, 11:12:37 AM
Wah bahot khoob takhleeq hai Hum Dum ji. Padhkar bahot achha laga. Daad hazir hai.

Nawazis...
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Janaab Riyaz Saheb Himmat Afzaii Ke Liye
Aapki Dad Ne Hauslon Ko Aur Majbut Kar Diya.
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2010, 09:11:37 PM »
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Aadaab Janab.... achchi kalaam se nawaaza hai...... Daad.... 

Lkhate rahiye....
Khush rahiye......
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2010, 10:00:16 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai aap ne
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«Reply #12 on: September 08, 2010, 09:06:12 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on August 10, 2010, 11:39:29 AM
wah ji bahut achhe ...

apne shabdo me:

dil se rooh tak jam gaye "Abhi" mere,
Kisi katil nazar ne nashila koi teer chhoda he~

Bahut Bahut Shukariya Janaab Abhi Saheb Pasand Farmane Ke Liye
Aur Khub Kaha Aapne Bhi...

Naa Koi Teer, Na Koi Talwaar, HumDum Dil Ke Paar Gaya
Hume To Bas Unki Nazron Ka Woh Ek Ishara Hi Maar Gaya.
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«Reply #13 on: September 08, 2010, 09:09:34 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Hum_Dum ji... bahut sundar kavita pesh ki hai apne... mohabbat se bharpoor aapki ye kavita humein bahut pasand aayi... hamaare dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye kavita... abhi to bas aapka hi geet gunguna raha hoon main... bahut achcha likha hai aapne ....!!!

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Bahut Bahut Shukariya Janaab Klaskar Ji
Aapne Jis Anzaad Men Tahsin Ki Hai Ussey
Parhkar Bahut Hi Hausla Mila Hume...
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Is Qadar Pasand
Farmane Ke Liye...Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2010, 02:17:14 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 11, 2010, 03:47:58 AM
bht pyari gazal humdum ji...

jo tu har baat apni gazal me kahe
main teri kalam ban tere hathon me saji rahun......

Bahut Bahut Shukariya Pasand Farmane Ke Liye Kasak Ji
Aur Bahut Achhi Line Kahi Aapne Bhi.

Jo Tu Banke Kalam Mere Haathon Mein Sajh Jaayegi
Phir Kahan Ungaliyan Aey Sanam Khata Kar Paayegi.
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