Hamare Jaese Diwaane...

by Iqtedar on September 15, 2013, 08:06:43 PM
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Hamare Jaese Diwaane Jahan May Kam Nikle
Unhen Hayat Banate Hain Jin Pe Dam Nikle

Bahot Hasin To Na They Wo Magar Na Jaane Kyon
Unhi Ke Konche Se Masroor Ho Ke Ham Nikle

Dua Ab Rab Se Yehi Har Ghadi Hamaari Hai
Unhi Ke Ishq May Uljhe Rahen Ta Dam Nikle

Wo Jisko Caudhwin Ka Chand Ham Samajhte They
Hatey Jo Pardey Nigahon Se To Sanam Nikle

Nigahen Milte Hi Ham Se Wo Yon Lajjate Hain
Ke Jaese Bhanwre Ki Banhon Se Phool Nam Nikle

Huwa Deedar Jo Unka To Bas Usi Din Se
Hamari Duniya Se Ek Ek Saarey Gham Nikle

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2013, 08:29:16 PM »
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Hamare Jaese Diwaane Jahan May Kam Nikle
Unhen Hayat Banate Hain Jin Pe Dam Nikle

Bahot Hasin To Na They Wo Magar Na Jaane Kyon
Unhi Ke Konche Se Masroor Ho Ke Ham Nikle

Dua Ab Rab Se Yehi Har Ghadi Hamaari Hai
Unhi Ke Ishq May Uljhe Rahen Ta Dam Nikle

Wo Jisko   Chaudhwin    Ka Chand Ham Samajhte They
Hatey Jo Pardey Nigahon Se To Sanam Nikle

Nigahen Milte Hi Ham Se Wo Yon Lajjate Hain
Ke Jaese Bhanwre Ki Banhon Se Phool Nam Nikle--this MISRA is not clear to me,sir

Huwa Deedar Jo Unka To Bas Usi Din Se
Hamari Duniya Se Ek Ek Saarey Gham Nikle

Written by Syed Iqtedar Hussain.


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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2013, 08:40:04 PM »
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ek rau dene ham nikle
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2013, 08:59:26 PM »
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Waaqayee .... Bahaut khoobsurat ghazal kahi Iqtedaar sahab ... Dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2013, 10:41:33 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Iqtedar ji.....!!!
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ek rau dene ham nikle
Dr. Sahab ab kaese aapka shukriya aada karon, aapki waah hi hamare liye kai Rau ki ahmiyat rakhti hai Usual Smile
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Zarraa ji bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2013, 02:03:30 AM »
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nice one , iqtedar saheb . bht mubarak baad.
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«Reply #11 on: September 16, 2013, 01:15:36 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waaaaaaah kya kehne bahut bahut bahut khoob iqtedar.. khumar se bhari is khoobsurat ghazal ke liye dheron dheron daad..

Dua Ab Rab Se Yehi Har Ghadi Hamaari Hai
Unhi Ke Ishq May Uljhe Rahen Ta Dam Nikle

Wo Jisko Caudhwin Ka Chand Ham Samajhte They
Hatey Jo Pardey Nigahon Se To Sanam Nikle
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Siddiqui sahab shukriya Usual Smile
Aqsh bahot bahot shukriya Usual Smile
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Ravi ji shukriya Usual Smile
You'er Welcome ji.
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You'er Welcome ji.
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