HAMEY APNI JINDAGI KA KATA BANA LOH ........ (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on January 27, 2009, 08:49:27 AM
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GULAB KEY SAATH KAATEY HOTEY HAI
GULAB KOH YEH NA KUCH KARTEY HAI
DUNIYA KI NAZROH SEY YEH BACHATEY HAI
CHU LEH GULAB KOH TOH YEH KAAT JATEY HAI


HAMEY BHI APNI JINDAGI KA KATA BANA LOH
SAYA BANAKAR JINDAGI MEH HAMEY APNA LOH
DOOR RAKHENGEY HAR BURI NAZAR SEY TUMHEY
DHADKANOH MEH HAMEY BHI APNEY SAMA LOH




JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2009, 09:07:36 AM »
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Wah yara wah kya baat hain lekin tere title ne to meri jan nikal di thi, main dar gaya Hamey apni zindagi ka kata bana loh......  DOH woh to puri post padhi to suspense khula  Giggle yaar bada ustad hain tu Title itna zabardast rakha hain ke nahi dekhne wala bhi dekhne pe majboor ho jayega.  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2009, 09:10:15 AM »
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GULAB KEY SAATH KAATEY HOTEY HAI
GULAB KOH YEH NA KUCH KARTEY HAI
DUNIYA KI NAZROH SEY YEH BACHATEY HAI
CHU LEH GULAB KOH TOH YEH KAAT JATEY HAI


HAMEY BHI APNI JINDAGI KA KATA BANA LOH
SAYA BANAKAR JINDAGI MEH HAMEY APNA LOH
DOOR RAKHENGEY HAR BURI NAZAR SEY TUMHEY
DHADKANOH MEH HAMEY BHI APNEY SAMA LOH




JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com




Bahoth Bahoth Qoob Janab kya ahesaas rakha hai nazam me apne jasbir sahab !! kya kahene !!

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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2009, 09:22:27 AM »
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gulab ke saath kaatey hote hai,
isliye ki yeh hi gulab ko chahete hote hai.

duniya ki nazron se yeh bachaatey rahete hai,
jis gulab se un ka jeebar jaata hai,wo hi gulab ouron ke haath lagne dete hai.

hamey bhi apni zindagi ka kata bana loh,
pahele hamare katon ka chata kha loh.

door rakhege har buri nazar se tume,
apne kate bhi tuje dur rakhege,buri nazar se tere.

jasbir ji...... aajkal kya horaha hai.
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2009, 10:34:40 AM »
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Bohat Achche Jasbir Bhai,.

Title To Dard Bhara Laga,.
Magar Shayari Mashallah Achchi Hai,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2009, 03:03:45 PM »
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bahut acha likha apney
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2009, 05:51:19 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 27, 2009, 09:07:36 AM
Wah yara wah kya baat hain lekin tere title ne to meri jan nikal di thi, main dar gaya Hamey apni zindagi ka kata bana loh......  DOH woh to puri post padhi to suspense khula  Giggle yaar bada ustad hain tu Title itna zabardast rakha hain ke nahi dekhne wala bhi dekhne pe majboor ho jayega.  Clapping Smiley


Thanks Ghayel and you really made me laugh too

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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2009, 05:51:52 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 27, 2009, 09:10:15 AM
Bahoth Bahoth Qoob Janab kya ahesaas rakha hai nazam me apne jasbir sahab !! kya kahene !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Thanks Qadeer

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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2009, 07:51:22 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 27, 2009, 08:49:27 AM

GULAB KEY SAATH KAATEY HOTEY HAI
GULAB KOH YEH NA KUCH KARTEY HAI
DUNIYA KI NAZROH SEY YEH BACHATEY HAI
CHU LEH GULAB KOH TOH YEH KAAT JATEY HAI


HAMEY BHI APNI JINDAGI KA KATA BANA LOH
SAYA BANAKAR JINDAGI MEH HAMEY APNA LOH
DOOR RAKHENGEY HAR BURI NAZAR SEY TUMHEY
DHADKANOH MEH HAMEY BHI APNEY SAMA LOH




JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com




 Applause Applause Applause

Wah bohat khoob Jasbir ji...
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 06:48:08 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on January 27, 2009, 07:51:22 PM
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Wah bohat khoob Jasbir ji...

Thanks Honey Partner


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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 06:49:05 PM »
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Thanks Honey Partner


Jasbir Singh

Shukriya Jasbir ji aap aaye khushi hue ji... Usual Smile
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Quote from: gurinder on January 27, 2009, 03:03:45 PM
bahut acha likha apney

thanks gurinder

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«Reply #12 on: September 03, 2009, 02:37:43 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Cara ji.
excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Wah wah bahut khoob Jasbir ji wonderful creation,beautiful lines by Cara ji.
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thanks madhu ji

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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2009, 04:54:26 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 27, 2009, 08:49:27 AM

GULAB KEY SAATH KAATEY HOTEY HAI
GULAB KOH YEH NA KUCH KARTEY HAI
DUNIYA KI NAZROH SEY YEH BACHATEY HAI
CHU LEH GULAB KOH TOH YEH KAAT JATEY HAI


HAMEY BHI APNI JINDAGI KA KATA BANA LOH
SAYA BANAKAR JINDAGI MEH HAMEY APNA LOH
DOOR RAKHENGEY HAR BURI NAZAR SEY TUMHEY
DHADKANOH MEH HAMEY BHI APNEY SAMA LOH




JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com




Bohot Khoob Jasbir Ji
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