Hamsafar Saath Ho Phir Kam Kya Hai

by Ghulam Haider on April 22, 2010, 11:44:30 AM
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Hamsafar Saath Ho Phir Kam Kya Hai.
Jab Khushi Paas Ho Phir Gham Kya Hai.

Kya Kisi Ko Meri Haalat Ki Khabr ,
Kaun Jaane Mera A'alam Kya Hai.

Raat Bhar Rehti Hain Aankhen Meri Nam,
Dekh Lo Phoolon Pe Shabnam Kya Hai.

Gar Koyi Khush Hai Mere Jeene Se,
To Ye Din-Raat Ka Maatam Kya Hai.

Dard e Dil Kehta Hai Mujh Se Haider
Zakhm Ko Ashkon Ka Marham Kya Hai
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2010, 02:42:17 PM »
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bahut khoob Haider ji... bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 10:11:42 PM »
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bahot khoob janab .wah wah khas kar yeh shair bahot pasand aya

Gar Koyi Khush Hai Mere Jeene Se,
To Ye Din-Raat Ka Maatam Kya Hai.

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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2010, 12:26:30 AM »
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bahot khoob janab .wah wah khas kar yeh shair bahot pasand aya

Gar Koyi Khush Hai Mere Jeene Se,
To Ye Din-Raat Ka Maatam Kya Hai.


She'r Ka Maza Ba Zauq afraad Hi Lete Hain. Har Insaan Apne Shuo'or Ke Mutaabiq Hi Dark Karta Hai.
She'r Pasand Karne Ke Liye Shukriya Janaab
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2010, 12:30:21 AM »
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wah wah ........bhut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2010, 12:41:03 AM »
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bahut khoob Haider ji... bahut khoob...!!!
Bas Isi Tarah Nazar e Karam Farmaate Rahiye Aur Lazzat Paate Rahiye. Hamaar Khushi Aap Ki Khushi Se Hai.
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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2010, 03:45:30 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Haider ji,lovely poem,marvelous creation,bahut achi lagi.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2010, 03:50:13 AM »
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Wah! Haider Ji, Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #8 on: June 08, 2010, 11:31:55 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Haider ji,lovely poem,marvelous creation,bahut achi lagi.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
Shukriya Aap Ki Pazeerayi Ka.Intihaie Mamnoon O Mutshakkir Hon.
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«Reply #9 on: June 08, 2010, 12:32:21 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Haider Bhai..

Bahut Acha Likhte Hai Aap!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2010, 07:54:11 AM »
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Wah Janab! Kya kahne! Bahut achchha kahte haiN. Qaafiye ko khoob nibhaya hai, wah bhai wah. HazaaroN daad qubul kijiye is aik matle k saath:

"MaiN" kahiN hai kahiN ye "Tum" kya hai
Aur iske siwaaye ghum kya hai

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Hamsafar Saath Ho Phir Kam Kya Hai.
Jab Khushi Paas Ho Phir Gham Kya Hai.

Kya Kisi Ko Meri Haalat Ki Khabr ,
Kaun Jaane Mera A'alam Kya Hai.

Raat Bhar Rehti Hain Aankhen Meri Nam,
Dekh Lo Phoolon Pe Shabnam Kya Hai.

Gar Koyi Khush Hai Mere Jeene Se,
To Ye Din-Raat Ka Maatam Kya Hai.

Dard e Dil Kehta Hai Mujh Se Haider
Zakhm Ko Ashkon Ka Marham Kya Hai
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2010, 08:27:15 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Haider Ji
Bohat Achha Likha Hia Aapne
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2010, 02:41:57 PM »
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Wah Janab! Kya kahne! Bahut achchha kahte haiN. Qaafiye ko khoob nibhaya hai, wah bhai wah. HazaaroN daad qubul kijiye is aik matle k saath:

"MaiN" kahiN hai kahiN ye "Tum" kya hai
Aur iske siwaaye ghum kya hai

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Mujhe Is Web Par Apna Kalaam post Karke Koi Khas Khushi Nahin Hoti Thi, Lekin Jis Andaaz Se Aap ne Mujhe Saraaha Hai Us Se Mujhe Ye Yaqeen Hua Ke Abhi Ba Zauq Afraad Hain Jo Kalaam Ki Qadr Karte Hain.
      Intehai Shukr Guzaar Hon Aap Ka
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2010, 02:59:12 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Haider Ji
Bohat Achha Likha Hia Aapne

Aapko Achha Laga To Yaqqinan Achha Hai.
Shayeri Shauq Hai Aapna Lekin.
Daad se aur bhi baRh Jata Hai.
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«Reply #14 on: June 17, 2010, 07:21:44 AM »
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Wah Ghulam Haider Sb. Kya khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne. Bahut achha likhte hain aap. Har sher apne aap mein misaal hai. Hazaron daad hazir hain. Aapki agli takhleeq ka intezaar rahega.
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