Har Adaa juda hai mere yaar ki !

by Rishi on October 17, 2004, 03:07:24 PM
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #60 on: December 04, 2004, 09:06:25 PM »
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very nice rishi ji!!! n allllzzzz


Jo chal ke aaten hain khud dushamon ke ghere mein,
faraar hone kaa woh raastaa bhee rakhaten hain. .........


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Rishi
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«Reply #61 on: December 04, 2004, 10:27:58 PM »
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sab dost banaye hain khuda ne yahaan,
dushmani to hum insaano ne banayi hai,
kisi kisi ne to dushmano se bhi wafa ki hai,
kisi ne doston se bhi dushmani nibhayi hai....
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«Reply #62 on: December 04, 2004, 10:31:59 PM »
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very nice rishi ji!!!


Kitna kahaa thaa uss sse ki daaman samet le,
ab woh bhi mere saath pareshaneeyon mein hai....



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«Reply #63 on: December 04, 2004, 10:50:14 PM »
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wada kiya tha ke nibhayenge hum saath tera,
ab kaise chhodd dein hum sanam haath tera,
waqt achha ho to sabhi saath dete hain yahaan,
main kaise akela chhoddoon, hoon humsafar tera....
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«Reply #64 on: December 05, 2004, 12:09:38 AM »
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wada kiya tha saath nibhhyenge hum tera
jaha jaaoge wahi bana lenge basera tera-mera

fir chaahe aandhi aaye ya chod de saath bhagwaan mera
yakeen kismat par to nahi par yeh waada hai mera

jahan le chalego pag-pag saath chalenge hamesha
aaj saath ho na ho par dekhenge hum kal naya savera
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #65 on: December 05, 2004, 04:47:51 AM »
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hehehe vvell vvritten both of u....


Har shaam ghar to laut ke aataa rahaa magar
ghar mein kabhi main khud ko mukammal na laa saka....
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Mansi_d_archi
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«Reply #66 on: December 05, 2004, 07:42:55 AM »
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hehehe vvell vvritten both of you....


Har shaam ghar to laut ke aataa rahaa magar
ghar mein kabhi main khud ko mukammal na laa saka....


V nice my_heart! But 'kambal' to suna hai ,'mukammal' kya hota hai? :twisted:
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Rishi
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«Reply #67 on: December 05, 2004, 11:12:50 PM »
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archi, "mukammal" means complete. what heart wanna say here is that every evening he returns home, but he could never bring himself complete, some part of him is always left somewhere.
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bahut waqt guzara hai tere intezaar mein,
ab aur sitam tujh pe na dil-e-yaar karenge,
har lamha rakhenge tumhein nigahon mein,
kabhi na juda tum ko khud se dildar karenge,
saath nibhayenge hum tera har janam mein,
tum se pyaar kiya hai, tum se pyaar karenge....
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«Reply #68 on: December 06, 2004, 05:52:27 AM »
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hehehe vvell vvritten both of you....


Har shaam ghar to laut ke aataa rahaa magar
ghar mein kabhi main khud ko mukammal na laa saka....


wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! lol :twisted:  :wink:
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«Reply #69 on: December 06, 2004, 06:03:23 AM »
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thnx dear!!!



jalte dil ki tapish mein murjha chuke armaan hai
hasraton ko jala kar gam dhooyein mein uda leta hoon
tanhai ko mehfil bana ashkon se saja leta hoon
tere labon ke dhokhe mein paimana utha leta hoon
khata kar baithta hoon yehi madhoshi ke lamhon mein
jheel si aankhon mein safina dil ka duba leta hoon *nm



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«Reply #70 on: December 06, 2004, 08:29:00 AM »
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Ada ki baat chali hai to saaki
mujhe bhi jara mehfil jamane de

Tera daaman hai ye ambar neela,
Apne daaman mein mujhe samaane de

Jee karta hai ki doob jaayoun main
Apne naino ki mai ke paimaane de

Batayoun kaise hai tere badan ki khubshoo
Bas ek hawa ka jhokha aane de

Tre keshon pe gajra laga doon main
Bas taare ambar se tod ke laane de
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«Reply #71 on: December 06, 2004, 12:22:34 PM »
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Quote from: "myheart_ursonly"
hehehe vvell vvritten both of you....


Har shaam ghar to laut ke aataa rahaa magar
ghar mein kabhi main khud ko mukammal na laa saka....


wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! lol :twisted:  :wink:



thnx a lot mansi ji!!



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Rishi
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«Reply #72 on: December 07, 2004, 12:17:01 AM »
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beautiful words Kamal....nd nice one Heart....!
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aa baahon mein, ke tujh ko sanwaaroon main,
pyaar se jee bhar ke tujh ko nihaaron main....

tere hothon pe yun hi saji rahe hansi har pal,
teri har khushi pe, jindagi apni waroon main....

dil mein chupaa loon, dhadkan mein basaa loon,
jaan-e-tamanna, tujh ko jaan apni bana loon main....

apni palko pe bithaoon, bahon mein jhulaoon,
dilbar meri, tujh ko sine se laga loon main....

tere pyaar mein deewana ban gaya hoon jaana,
aa tujhko bhi thodi si deewani bana loon main .....
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KaMaL
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«Reply #73 on: December 07, 2004, 01:42:00 AM »
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Wah bhai Rishi...

Naam mera Kamal hai....Kamaal aapne kar diya
Aisa likha hai kasam se Dhamaal aapne kar diya



Aur haan, bura na maane agar aap bilkul bhi
Rishi, aapke naam ke aage ji laga loon main
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«Reply #74 on: December 08, 2004, 06:01:51 AM »
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nice work all..................................bahot khoob,,,,...........

Agar Jadoo Koyi Sher Wa Sukhn Ka Hum Jaga Sakte
To Duniya Hamey Ahley Hunar Mein Rakh Liya Hota......
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