~~"HAR ADAA ME JAAL HAI"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 15, 2009, 10:25:30 AM
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Rakhna chehre pe parda aur tirchi nigaah se dekhna kamal hai,
Maathe pe athkheliyan karti julf aur kaan ki bali bemisaal hai..

Iss kadar gujarti hai gali se meri teri payal ki chanak kya kahoon,
Dekh ke husn tera ek pal ke liye ho jaata har dil malamaal hai..

Teri churri ke diwaane bahut se, bahut hai tujhe chahne wale,
Par teri ek hassi ko pane ke liye macha rakha diwano ne bawal hai..

Jaane kyun kehte hai sab teri baatein loot.ti hai aashiqo ko,
Tu hothon se gujarish kyun kare teri to har ada me jaal hai..

Maloom hai hame khubsurat shai hai tu duniya ki Shally,
Par dil me dard, aankhon me ye udaasi kyun poochna sawal hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2009, 10:31:39 AM »
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Wah wah Shally Ji
Kya khubsurat ghazal likhi hai, wah
Dil khush hua
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2009, 10:39:29 AM »
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Haaye!!! Kya Baat Hai Shally...

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Bahut Hi pyaari Aur Dil Ko Lubaane Wali Rachna Rachi Hai Aapne..

Toooo Goooooood Hai Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 10:41:06 AM »
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Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat Hai.. Aaj Shally Ishq Me.. Suraj Kahan se Uga aaj.. ? Hahahaha

Bahut Bahut Bahut Pyara Likha hai Shally.. Baali Payal Jhumke Sab Ka Zikra Is Rachna Ko aur Khubsoorat Bana raha hai.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause

Daad Kubool Kariye Mohtarma..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapke Likhi Rachna par Khud Ki Likhi Kuch Line Yaad aa gain.. Usual Smile



Hatheli Pe Mehandi Dilbar, Pairon Me Jhanakti Payal Hai,
Paazeb Jhankaa Ke Bulane Ka, Kya Khoob Tera Andaaz Hai........

Ishq Karta Hoon Tujhse, Marta Hoon Har Ada Pe Teri,
Phir Sooni Teri In Kalaiyon Ko, Kis Baat Ka Etraaz Hai........

Pahanaaunga Ek Din, Laal-Hari Yeh Choodiyan Tujhe,
Bas Dulhan Tujhe Banaane Ka, Besabri Se Intzaar Hai......!!



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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2009, 10:43:19 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on July 15, 2009, 10:31:39 AM
Wah wah Shally Ji
Kya khubsurat ghazal likhi hai, wah
Dil khush hua
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji, Aapne ghazal ko pada aur saraha, aapka dil khush ho gaya ise pad kar isse jyada hame aur kuch nahi chahiye..

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: July 15, 2009, 10:44:46 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 15, 2009, 10:39:29 AM
Haaye!!! Kya Baat Hai Shally...

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!! Bahut Hi pyaari Aur Dil Ko Lubaane Wali Rachna Rachi Hai Aapne..

Toooo Goooooood Hai Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Khwaish Ji..Aapko ghazal pasndh aayi jankar khushi hui, aur ghazal ne aapka dil lubha liya matlab keemat mil gayi ghazal ki..

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: July 15, 2009, 11:15:45 AM »
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Wah Shally ji,bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne,kitna dard bhara hua sher hai,
excellent,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2009, 11:18:10 AM »
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shally bahutttt khoob..bahut hi acha laga padh ke...
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2009, 11:34:03 AM »
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Shallyji badi lajawab rachna hai aapki.....
Nari ki adaaon ka achha khasa jaal buna hai aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
MAN KIYA TOU CHAND LINE LIKH GAYA SO PESH HAIN

Tere hushn ki kya tariff karu main
Cehra tera Chand sa,wo bhi bedaag

Bindiya jaise khila ho chand pe koi chand
Julfain jaise ghir aai badariya kali-kali

Daant jaise jheel mai khila koi swet kamal ho
Honth jaise pankhuriye ho do gulab ki

Gaal gulabi jaise do kashmiree sev hon
Aankhen jaise gehri neeli jheel hon

Bhohein jaise dhanush,nigahein jaise khicha teer
Bata gauri fir kyu dil mai peer aur naino mai neer

Quote from: k.shael on July 15, 2009, 10:25:30 AM
Rakhna chehre pe parda aur tirchi nigaah se dekhna kamal hai,
Maathe pe athkheliyan karti julf aur kaan ki bali bemisaal hai..

Iss kadar gujarti hai gali se meri teri payal ki chanak kya kahoon,
Dekh ke husn tera ek pal ke liye ho jaata har dil malamaal hai..

Teri churri ke diwaane bahut se, bahut hai tujhe chahne wale,
Par teri ek hassi ko pane ke liye macha rakha diwano ne bawal hai..

Jaane kyun kehte hai sab teri baatein loot.ti hai aashiqo ko,
Tu hothon se gujarish kyun kare teri to har ada me jaal hai..

Maloom hai hame khubsurat shai hai tu duniya ki Shally,
Par dil me dard, aankhon me ye udaasi kyun poochna sawal hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: July 15, 2009, 12:05:50 PM »
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WAH SHALLY JI......BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI.....

HAR ADAA TERI, CHODA HUA TEER SE KAMAN HAI,
KI SABKO KAR DETI GAYAL,TERI ADAA KAMAL HAI.

TERI AANKHE HAI QATILLANA,
HAR EK KO KAR DETI HAI TERA DIWAANA.

LATAKTI-MATAKTI DEKH KAR,TERI YEH KAMAR,
 CHAHETE HAI MAR JAAYE YAHIN,BANJAAYE YAHIN INKI KABAR.

MADH-BARE DEKH KAR TERE YEH HOTH,
LAG JAATA HAI INKO,KHAAS JAGAA PE CHOT.

HAR ADAA ME JAAL HAI,
TU HUSN KAMAL HAI.
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2009, 01:18:36 PM »
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Ishq aur parde ki koi aisi misaal de

Jise dekha nahi deewana uska hua Majnu......
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«Reply #11 on: July 15, 2009, 01:44:55 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally, Vicky, Smardia Ji & Cara.....bohot khoobsurat mehfil sajayi hai aapne  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: July 15, 2009, 06:46:57 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Shally jee, Smardia jee, Vikas bhaijan aur Cara bhaijan... Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 15, 2009, 10:00:51 PM »
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very nice stuff shally
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«Reply #14 on: July 16, 2009, 03:55:27 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat Ji & Rahim Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


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