~~"HAR ADAA ME JAAL HAI"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on July 15, 2009, 10:25:30 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 16, 2009, 04:28:49 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Mann ji,wonderful lines by you,Smardia ji and Cara ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: July 16, 2009, 07:23:57 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 15, 2009, 10:41:06 AM
Aaye Haye.. Kya Baat Hai.. Aaj Shally Ishq Me.. Suraj Kahan se Uga aaj.. ? Hahahaha

Bahut Bahut Bahut Pyara Likha hai Shally.. Baali Payal Jhumke Sab Ka Zikra Is Rachna Ko aur Khubsoorat Bana raha hai.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorati se Likha hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause

Daad Kubool Kariye Mohtarma..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapke Likhi Rachna par Khud Ki Likhi Kuch Line Yaad aa gain.. Usual Smile



Hatheli Pe Mehandi Dilbar, Pairon Me Jhanakti Payal Hai,
Paazeb Jhankaa Ke Bulane Ka, Kya Khoob Tera Andaaz Hai........

Ishq Karta Hoon Tujhse, Marta Hoon Har Ada Pe Teri,
Phir Sooni Teri In Kalaiyon Ko, Kis Baat Ka Etraaz Hai........

Pahanaaunga Ek Din, Laal-Hari Yeh Choodiyan Tujhe,
Bas Dulhan Tujhe Banaane Ka, Besabri Se Intzaar Hai......!!



**~** Mann **~**

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mann Ji, Taarif aur daad ke liye, aur waqai kya khubsurat alfaaz diye hai aapne hamari ghazal ko wah wah.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley aap jaisa to nahi par phir bhi aapke samne kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..gaur farmayiyega..


Mohabbat ke dastoor yaar hame bhi sikha do,
Thoda sa aayash thoda mashhoor hame bhi bana do..

Kab se rehte hai dil ki band kodhdi me kaid ho ke,
Zara parwaaj-e-ishq ki udaan bharna hame bhi bata do..

Kya pata aa hi jaaye hansi hothon pe arse baad,
Dil ko khush karde jo aaj koi aisi baat suna do..

Shally.
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«Reply #17 on: July 16, 2009, 07:42:26 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 16, 2009, 04:28:49 AM
Wah bahut khoob Mann ji,wonderful lines by you,Smardia ji and Cara ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Madhu Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #18 on: July 16, 2009, 07:48:40 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on July 15, 2009, 11:15:45 AM
Wah Shally ji,bahut khoobsurti se likha aapne,kitna dard bhara hua sher hai,
excellent,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley love4

Shukriya Madhu Dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #19 on: July 16, 2009, 07:49:31 AM »
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Quote from: punam on July 15, 2009, 11:18:10 AM
shally bahutttt khoob..bahut hi acha laga padh ke...

Shukriya Poonam didi, Itne busy time me bhi aapne waqt nikal kar meri ghzal ko pada aur saraha shukriya..

Shally.
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«Reply #20 on: July 16, 2009, 07:53:56 AM »
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Quote from: smardia on July 15, 2009, 11:34:03 AM
Shallyji badi lajawab rachna hai aapki.....
Nari ki adaaon ka achha khasa jaal buna hai aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
MAN KIYA TOU CHAND LINE LIKH GAYA SO PESH HAIN

Tere hushn ki kya tariff karu main
Cehra tera Chand sa,wo bhi bedaag

Bindiya jaise khila ho chand pe koi chand
Julfain jaise ghir aai badariya kali-kali

Daant jaise jheel mai khila koi swet kamal ho
Honth jaise pankhuriye ho do gulab ki

Gaal gulabi jaise do kashmiree sev hon
Aankhen jaise gehri neeli jheel hon

Bhohein jaise dhanush,nigahein jaise khicha teer
Bata gauri fir kyu dil mai peer aur naino mai neer


Shukriya Smardia Ji, Bahut Dino baad aapko apni kisi thread me dekha, bahut aacha laga aur wah kya khoob jawab likha hai aapne, pad ke aacha laga..

Shally.
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«Reply #21 on: July 16, 2009, 07:54:46 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on July 16, 2009, 07:23:57 AM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Mann Ji, Taarif aur daad ke liye, aur waqai kya khubsurat alfaaz diye hai aapne hamari ghazal ko wah wah.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley aap jaisa to nahi par phir bhi aapke samne kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai..gaur farmayiyega..


Mohabbat ke dastoor yaar hame bhi sikha do,
Thoda sa aayash thoda mashhoor hame bhi bana do..

Kab se rehte hai dil ki band kodhdi me kaid ho ke,
Zara parwaaj-e-ishq ki udaan bharna hame bhi bata do..

Kya pata aa hi jaaye hansi hothon pe arse baad,
Dil ko khush karde jo aaj koi aisi baat suna do..

Shally.


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Is Hausla Afzaai ka Shally.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aapne Behad Khubsoorat Aur Mohabbat se Bhare Alfaaz Likhe hain.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


Aa Leke Chalun Tujhe, Mohabbat-e-Mayekhaane Me,
Jahan Nazar Ka Milna, Aankhon Ka Takraana Hota hai..

Yahan Paimaano Me Nahi Parosi Jaati hai Sharaab,
Yahan to Lab se Lab Takra ke, Bahak Jana Hota Hai.....

Gir Jaate Hain Nashe Me Jahan Jhoom Ke Aashiq,
Wo Mehboob Ki Baahon Ka Dilkash Sahaara Hota hai…

Har Shaye Se Tapakte Hain, Jahaan Ishq Ke Jharne,
Bassss Apna To “Mann”, Wahi Thikaana Hota Hai….

Aa Leke Chalun Tujhe, Mohabbat-e-Mayekhaane Me,
Jahan Nazar Ka Milna, Aankhon Ka Takraana Hota hai…!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #22 on: July 16, 2009, 07:55:09 AM »
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Quote from: cara on July 15, 2009, 12:05:50 PM
WAH SHALLY JI......BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI.....

HAR ADAA TERI, CHODA HUA TEER SE KAMAN HAI,
KI SABKO KAR DETI GAYAL,TERI ADAA KAMAL HAI.

TERI AANKHE HAI QATILLANA,
HAR EK KO KAR DETI HAI TERA DIWAANA.

LATAKTI-MATAKTI DEKH KAR,TERI YEH KAMAR,
 CHAHETE HAI MAR JAAYE YAHIN,BANJAAYE YAHIN INKI KABAR.

MADH-BARE DEKH KAR TERE YEH HOTH,
LAG JAATA HAI INKO,KHAAS JAGAA PE CHOT.

HAR ADAA ME JAAL HAI,
TU HUSN KAMAL HAI.



Shukriya Cara Ji, Bahut Aacha laga aapko apni thread me dekhkar, aur kya khoob jawab likha hai aapne bhi..waqayi ye thread pyaar ke lafzo se bhar gaya hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #23 on: July 16, 2009, 08:18:46 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 16, 2009, 07:54:46 AM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Is Hausla Afzaai ka Shally.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aapne Behad Khubsoorat Aur Mohabbat se Bhare Alfaaz Likhe hain.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


Aa Leke Chalun Tujhe, Mohabbat-e-Mayekhaane Me,
Jahan Nazar Ka Milna, Aankhon Ka Takraana Hota hai..

Yahan Paimaano Me Nahi Parosi Jaati hai Sharaab,
Yahan to Lab se Lab Takra ke, Bahak Jana Hota Hai.....

Gir Jaate Hain Nashe Me Jahan Jhoom Ke Aashiq,
Wo Mehboob Ki Baahon Ka Dilkash Sahaara Hota hai…

Har Shaye Se Tapakte Hain, Jahaan Ishq Ke Jharne,
Bassss Apna To “Mann”, Wahi Thikaana Hota Hai….

Aa Leke Chalun Tujhe, Mohabbat-e-Mayekhaane Me,
Jahan Nazar Ka Milna, Aankhon Ka Takraana Hota hai…!!



**~** Mann **~**





Wah Wah Bhuat khoob Mann Ji, Aapke aage sach me kuch likh hi nahi paa rahi mein, phir bhi koshish hai..

Chahe jo mujhko be-inteha uss shaks ki talash hai,
Aabhi to sirf dil me aur udaasi hounsle niraash hai..

Aaye koi leke khushiyon ki sougaat mere liye,
Ho jaaye mere dil me bhi ishq-e-rango ki barsaat hai..

Ek baar jataye to sahi koi haq mujh pe pyaar se,
Koi to apna le mujh ishq se gair insaan ko dil ki aawaj hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: July 16, 2009, 08:54:02 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shally.. Lajawab Jawab diya hai Shally.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat bhare alfaaz Likhe hain.. Applause Applause



Be-tahasha Hum Teri, Har Ek Ada Ko Chaahte Hain,
Dil Ki Qalam Se Har Raat Teri Tasveer Banaate Hain....

Sajaate Hain Phir Tujhe, Mohabbat-e-Ehasaason Se,
aur Poori Kayenaat Tere Husn Par Lutaate Jaate Hain...

Kabhi Kano Me Phool, To Kabhi Maathe Pe Chaand,
Kabhi Apne Labon se, Lab Tere Surkh Kar Jaate Hain...

Naam Likhte Hain Khud Ka, Kabhi Teri Maang Par,
To Kabhi Lipat Us Tasveer se Mohabbat Kar Jaate Hain..!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #25 on: July 16, 2009, 09:02:30 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Bhaut Umda kya khayal hai kya khumaar hai wah.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Kabhi khawabo me ho mulaqat to tujhe jaane le,
Aa jaye agar haqeeqat me samne tujhe apna bana le,

Iss kadar chah hai teri mujhe e mere dilbar,
Ki likh kar tera naam haathon me kismat saja le,

Bahut garoor karta hai chand apni chandni pe,
Aa aaj raat tujhse ro-b-ro kara kar use chida le..

Ek arse se ho raha tha tere pyaar ka intzaar,
Aab tu bhi mujhe apni rooh me basa le..!!..

Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: July 16, 2009, 09:17:54 AM »
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Oye Hoye..Kya baat Hai Shally.. Bahut Hi Kamaal Dhamaal Likha Hai.. Ek ek Lafz Mohabbat me Bheega hai.. Bahut Khoooob..Applause


Raat Bhar Tanhaai Me, Dil-e-Haal Bataate Rahe,
Khayaalon Me Hi Tujhpe, Mohabbat Lutaate Rahe.....

Kabhi Haathon Ki Hatheli Pe, Kabhi Chaand Par,
Tera Naam Likh Likh Kar Baar-Baar Mitaate Rahe.....

Aarzoo Thi Sirf Tujhe Ek Baar Gale se Lagaane Ki,
isi Tamanna Me Har Lamha Raat Ka Teri Yaad Pe Lutaate Rahe...!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #27 on: July 16, 2009, 10:17:06 AM »
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bahut khoob Shally dear Applause Applause Applause
kamaal likha hai aapne
aur vicky ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: July 16, 2009, 10:22:03 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kashish.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2009, 02:56:44 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Kaash Bhai.. Usual Smile Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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