Har geet pukare Aaja~ "Abhi"

by AbhiTamrakar on September 17, 2010, 11:44:06 AM
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Har saans pukare aaja
is dil ke dware aaaja
tadapti hawaon ko behla rahi jo
us bayar ke sahare aaja

Ghata masti me jhool rahi he
dekh na pawan badal ko choom rahi he
geet naya koi bhavron ne likha he
jispe kaliyan jhoom rahi he
ye bahar pukare aaja

Dil me asmaan gumad raha he
kuchh nayi hulchul si kar raha he
aankhon me bas tera chehra he
dil par bas tera pehra he
saaz ye dhadkan bhi ghol rahi he
mera pyaar pukare aaja

Teri palko ki chhaiyan me
mene jo din gujare the
teri julfo ke saaye jo
mujhe har subah jagate the
wo har geet jo teri yad me likh dala
har geet pukare aaja
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2010, 12:14:56 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on September 17, 2010, 11:44:06 AM
Har saans pukare aaja
is dil ke dware aaaja
tadapti hawaon ko behla rahi jo
us bayar ke sahare aaja

Ghata masti me jhool rahi he
dekh na pawan badal ko choom rahi he
geet naya koi bhavron ne likha he
jispe kaliyan jhoom rahi he
ye bahar pukare aaja

Dil me asmaan gumad raha he
kuchh nayi hulchul si kar raha he
aankhon me bas tera chehra he
dil par bas tera pehra he
saaz ye dhadkan bhi ghol rahi he
mera pyaar pukare aaja

Teri palko ki chhaiyan me
mene jo din gujare the
teri julfo ke saaye jo
mujhe har subah jagate the
wo har geet jo teri yad me likh dala
har geet pukare aaja

Very Nice Poetry.....bahut khoob... dil se daad hazir...

aise hi likhte rahe aage bhi... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2010, 11:39:17 PM »
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Its very beautiful song ................

Very well created .........

Aree mere mind main to dhun bi baz rehi hai ..

Gud work !!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: September 18, 2010, 06:13:07 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on September 17, 2010, 12:14:56 PM
Very Nice Poetry.....bahut khoob... dil se daad hazir...

aise hi likhte rahe aage bhi... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...

dhanyawad anshumali jiii apko pasand aayi bahut achha laga~

Quote from: neelgold on September 17, 2010, 11:39:17 PM
Its very beautiful song ................

Very well created .........

Aree mere mind main to dhun bi baz rehi hai ..

Gud work !!!!!!!

shukriya ji apko achha laga ye song...ab gar dhun ban hi gayi he to hame bhi bataiye..

Quote from: Shihab on September 18, 2010, 02:50:54 AM
Bahut Khub Abhi Saheb...


Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

shihab sahab hosla afjai ka shukriya ...apne apna waqt diya bahut achha laga~
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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2010, 08:54:37 AM »
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Nice work.......
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2010, 09:43:35 AM »
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pasand farmane ke liye shukriya sahab~
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2010, 08:32:51 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Abhi ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2010, 09:25:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob Abhi Ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2010, 10:14:54 PM »
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Abhi jee Aadaab!

achcha geet likhane ki koshish ki hai aapne daad,
kafi achchi wordings bhi rahi...

Likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2010, 11:44:53 AM »
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bahut achhi likhi hai.
padh kar pukar uthati hai
very nice.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: September 20, 2010, 09:18:15 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       ABHITAMRAKAR JI.....


HAR GEET PUKARE AAJA

MAN MEET PUKARE AAJA

MERI PREET PUKARE AAJA

YE REET PUKARE AAJA

SANGEET PUKARE AAJA

HAR GEET PUKARE AAJA......
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2010, 09:25:27 AM »
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nice one cara
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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2010, 07:10:48 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 18, 2010, 08:32:51 PM
Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob Abhi ji...!!!

kapil ji dhanyawad ahusla badhane ke liye~
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«Reply #13 on: September 21, 2010, 07:11:36 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on September 18, 2010, 09:25:51 PM
Bahut khoob Abhi Ji

dhanyawad rajesh jiii..yunhi sath rahiyega
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«Reply #14 on: September 21, 2010, 07:12:40 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 18, 2010, 10:14:54 PM
Abhi jee Aadaab!

achcha geet likhane ki koshish ki hai aapne daad,
kafi achchi wordings bhi rahi...

Likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabaad rahiye....
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         


aji apko ahamri koshish pasand aayi ..bahut achha laga..

hausal badhane ke liye shukriya ~
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