Har Khushi Jis Pe Luta Di Humne

by Deewana29 on August 08, 2004, 10:12:59 PM
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Aab ke dil ko yoon saza gi humne
uski har baat bhula di humne
Ek, Ek phool bahut yaad aaya
Shakh-e-gul jab woh jala di humne
Aaj tak jispe woh sharmatey hain
Baat woh kab ki bhula di humne
Shehar-e-jahan rakh se abad hua
Aag jab dil ki buja di humne
Aaj woh phir yaad bahut aaye woh
Aaj phir usko dua di humne
Koi toh baat hai uss mien 'VIRK'
Har Khushi jispe Luta di Humne

                                                  Virk (Deewana29)
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2008, 08:43:24 AM »
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BOHAT KHOOB BIGDI HUI BAAT BANA DI TUMNE.
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2008, 08:47:08 AM »
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wah wah deewana ji aapne bahoot achcha likha  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2008, 03:33:41 AM »
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Very good.Pehla four lines hame bahut accha laga. Nice sharing.
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2008, 11:30:36 AM »
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Aab ke dil ko yoon saza gi humne
uski har baat bhula di humne
Ek, Ek phool bahut yaad aaya
Shakh-e-gul jab woh jala di humne
Aaj tak jispe woh sharmatey hain
Baat woh kab ki bhula di humne
Shehar-e-jahan rakh se abad hua
Aag jab dil ki buja di humne
Aaj woh phir yaad bahut aaye woh
Aaj phir usko dua di humne
Koi toh baat hai uss mien 'VIRK'
Har Khushi jispe Luta di Humne
                                                    Virk (Deewana29)

Bohot achchi sharing hai..... Applause

Lekin, achcha hota agar aap ne aakhiri sher main original poet ka naam hata kar apna naam na daala hota !!!!

Ye ghazal Faiz Sahab ki hai.....Agar aap shayari ke kadardaan hai to please shayari ke saath itna bada zulm na karen, ye bhi ek gunah hai.
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