Har lafz bezuban ho jayega...

by brokenbyluv on April 23, 2012, 10:39:32 AM
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Asan to kuch bhi nhi per tum sath ho tou sab asan ho jayega,
gamo k dariya se nikal kr khushi ka saahil merra jahan ho jayega,

gir k sambhal to khud hi jati hu,
tum jo thaam lo to waqt humpe meherban ho jayega,

zindagi ki raftar tum bin bhi chalti hai,
sang jo merra tum raho to zindagi pe gumaan ho jayega,

manga h tumhe har sajde har dua mein apni,
mil jao jo tum to khuda ka humpe ehsan ho jayega,

jo likh do tum apni mhbt se merri dastan,
to phir merri shayari ka har lafz bezuban ho jayega.........



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«Reply #2 on: April 23, 2012, 11:11:48 AM »
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very nice boht khub likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: April 23, 2012, 11:21:54 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: April 23, 2012, 01:01:26 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 23, 2012, 02:30:06 PM »
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Sabse pehle to main aapka Yoindia me dil se swaaagat karta hoon... kahaan gayab the aap itne dino se... shukar hai wapas laut ke aaye to sahi... ummeed hai sab achcha chal raha hai... Welcome back Geet ji....!!!

Ab rahi baat aapke post ki... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... miss kar raha tha main aapke posts... bahut din baad aapka itna pyaara sa post padh ke bahut bahut achcha laga ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji....!!!

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har ghum ko apne liye bachaake main tumhe khushiyon se sajaa dunga,
tumhaare har kadam ke saath main tumhaari parchhaayi banke chal lunga,

thaamke tumhaaraa haath main tumhaare sangh sangh chal lunga,
ladkhadaane lago agar kabhi tum to main tumhe sambhaal lunga,

chal chuke ho bahut tum akele zindagi ke safar me,
thaam lo mera haath main tum sangh zindagi bhar chal lunga,

maangte ho mujhe tum apni har duwa me har sajde me,
mil jaaao tum mujhe to main apni har duwaa qubool samajh lunga,

meri saanse bhi tumse hain, meri dhadkan bhi tumsi se hai,
tum mil jaao agar to main apni is zindagi ko safal samajh lunga....

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«Reply #6 on: April 23, 2012, 03:28:51 PM »
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Asan to kuch bhi nhi per tum sath ho tou sab asan ho jayega,
gamo k dariya se nikal kr khushi ka saahil merra jahan ho jayega,

gir k sambhal to khud hi jati hu,
tum jo thaam lo to waqt humpe meherban ho jayega,

zindagi ki raftar tum bin bhi chalti hai,
sang jo merra tum raho to zindagi pe gumaan ho jayega,

manga h tumhe har sajde har dua mein apni,
mil jao jo tum to khuda ka humpe ehsan ho jayega,

jo likh do tum apni mhbt se merri dastan,
to phir merri shayari ka har lafz bezuban ho jayega.........





bahut khoob....
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«Reply #7 on: April 23, 2012, 05:22:16 PM »
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waah waah Geet ji--
bahot dino baad wapis aai lekin wahi khayalat wahi soch ahi dard aur wahi khumaar ke saath aai Usual Smile
iss kalaam ko dili daad--

nd welcome back dear--
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Bahut bahut khoob Geet ji...har lafj mohabbat se bhara hua...dil ki khuch chul-buli si khwaishein.....khuch jaane-pehchaane se alfaaz aur khuch anchhuye se aehsaas...aur unn par aapki ye khoobsurat nazm....sach mein mzaa aa gya...
bahut bahut bahut hi khoob....likhte rahye ..aate rahiye... Usual Smile

Jitna pyara Geet ji ne likha hai utna hi pyara jwaab diya hai aapne Hriday ji....
chaar chaand lga diye aapne toh....bahut h khoob... Usual Smile

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«Reply #9 on: April 23, 2012, 05:42:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Nikhaar ji....!!!

Jitna pyara Geet ji ne likha hai utna hi pyara jwaab diya hai aapne Hriday ji....
chaar chaand lga diye aapne toh....bahut h khoob... Usual Smile

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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2012, 12:01:00 PM »
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bahut sundar brokenbyluv....
Urs also v gud hridayjii....
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2012, 12:04:31 PM »
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thanks a lot Dolly ji...!!!

bahut sundar brokenbyluv....
Urs also v gud hridayjii....
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2012, 11:08:45 AM »
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Nice
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«Reply #13 on: April 25, 2012, 11:09:43 AM »
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