Har Pal Maine Apna Tere, Naam Likh Diya....HumDum

by HUM_DUM on February 16, 2012, 07:55:05 AM
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Subho Kabhi To Kabhi, Shaam Likh Diya
Har Pal Maine Apna Tere, Naam Likh Diya.

Bhool Kar Duniyan Ki, Rangattein Sabhi
Tujhse Shuru Khatm Tujhpe, Har Kaam Likh Diya.

Jab Bhi Chhiri Baat, Mahfil Mein Tere Husn Ki
Aankhon Ko May Labon Ko, Jaam Likh Diya.

Kehkar Deewaana Tera, Is Zamaaney Ney
Wallah Kya Khoob Mera, Naam Likh Diya.

Kehna Paayi Jo Zuban Kabhi, Haal Dil Ka Tujhse
Khamoshi Ney  Aaj Woh, Tamaam Likh Diya.

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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2012, 08:00:35 AM »
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Wooow kya andaaz hai Hum Dum ji.bahut khoob very romantic creation.superb. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2012, 08:20:59 AM »
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boht khoob
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«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2012, 08:23:27 AM »
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Bahutttttt Khooob Humdum ji..

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«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2012, 08:51:37 AM »
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Bahut khoob hum dum saheb ek damdaar peshkash ke liye bahut bahut mubarak
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«Reply #5 on: February 16, 2012, 12:15:03 PM »
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waaaaah waaaah
behad khubsurat kalaam
aur janaab alfaazon ka bahot sundar istemaal

iss haseen peshkash par dili daad aur mubarakbaad kubul kijie janaab--

khus rahie
aate rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #6 on: February 16, 2012, 01:33:23 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on February 16, 2012, 12:15:03 PM
waaaaah waaaah
behad khubsurat kalaam
aur janaab alfaazon ka bahot sundar istemaal

iss haseen peshkash par dili daad aur mubarakbaad kubul kijie janaab--

khus rahie
aate rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2012, 05:43:32 PM »
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Applause Applause bhot khub.
terne lage pathar bi pani ki tah par,
jab wanar sena ne un par ram lik diya.
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2012, 06:01:00 PM »
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kya khoob likha hai humdum ji...jo bhi pyar ka deewana ye parrega, mohabbat ki rangin vaadiyon mein ghum ho jaayega....bahut bahuttttttt khoooooob
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2012, 06:09:19 PM »
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on February 16, 2012, 05:43:32 PM
Applause Applause bhot khub.
terne lage pathar bi pani ki tah par,
jab wanar sena ne un par ram lik diya.
do lines mein khoob sanjoya rab ki mahima ko aapne Aatish ji...bahut vadhiya...khuch aur lafj inme saja kar alag se post karege toh aur bhi accha rahega...
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2012, 06:32:46 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on February 16, 2012, 06:09:19 PM
do lines mein khoob sanjoya rab ki mahima ko aapne Aatish ji...bahut vadhiya...khuch aur lafj inme saja kar alag se post karege toh aur bhi accha rahega...
ji thank u. muze thek se likna nai aata mai to aise hi lik diya. thank u ji.
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2012, 06:43:59 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2012, 03:18:21 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2012, 02:34:42 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on February 16, 2012, 08:00:35 AM
Wooow kya andaaz hai Hum Dum ji.bahut khoob very romantic creation.superb. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bohat Bohat Shukariya Madhuwesh Ji
Khoobsurat Aur Pamard Tahsin Ke Liye
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«Reply #14 on: February 18, 2012, 04:07:18 AM »
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Very VEry Nice HUM DUM Ji
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