-Haseen khawaab-

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Dedicated To Meena[/u][/size]



Mere saanam tu mujh pe itna karam kar de
Apne dewane pe bas tu apni ik nazar kar de

Chahta hoon ik baar tera jalwa e husn dekhna
Jo basi hai nazaron mein raat, tu saher kar de

Julas rhi hai tamn-na meri hijr ki dhup mein
Apne gesuyon ki chao mujh pe magar kar de

Pa lunga mein jaanat e jahaan bas ik pal mein
Parda-e-ruksaar ko tu be-parda  agar kar de

karna chahta hoon aisa nasha jo na tute kabhi
Apni masti-e-nigah mere naam janejigar kar de

Bin dekhe tujhe mein har waqt tera dedaar karu
Adayon ka apni Sanam mujhpe aisa asar kar de

Dil kre tujhe chupa lu duniya ki har buri shai se
Aa mere agosh mein zindgi tamam basar kar de

Barsa ke apne pyar ki barish ko mere humnaseen
Mud'daton ke iss pyase sehra ko samandar kar de

Kab se tadap rha hoon teri saanson ki mehak ke liye
Zamen ke zarre ko aaj chu kar isse ambaar kar de

Dekha hai sapna tere sath pyare se ashiyane ka "Meena"
Mere haseen khwaab ko haqiqat mere dilbhar kar de !!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2006, 12:36:40 PM »
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Humtum ji aapki to shayari ka jawaab nahi... excellent....
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2006, 12:42:25 PM »
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Wah HUM TUM jee....Aapne bulaaya hai wo jaroor ayegi...bahoot hi badiyaa likha hai......!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2006, 12:42:54 PM »
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Oye hoye ! Aaj to bade mood mein ho !  :D

Bahut mast likha hai bhai

Superb......muaaaaaah  :wink:

Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2006, 12:46:32 PM »
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!

bohot ache hum tum ji !!
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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2006, 12:59:13 PM »
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Bah!! Khoob Sundar, Meena Jee kahan hain aap???
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2006, 12:23:40 PM »
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Gesu Ji[/u]

Bahut bahut shukriya aap ka !!

Chitra Ji [/u]

Ji aap ki duyien falak tak cli jaye ...aur falak ke fariste uss ko mere paas le aaye .... to baat bane..... aap ke housle aur duyoon ka shukriya !!


Rajbir Ji[/u]

Veer ji .....   Thanks a Million  :hug:

Roshni Ji[/u]

Thanks a lott Buddy !!

Nirbhay[/u]

Aap ka bahut bahut shukriya !!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2006, 12:34:27 PM »
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Wah..Bohat khoob HumTum...Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2006, 12:52:49 PM »
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[you]Dedicated To Meena[/you][/size]



Mere saanam tu mujh pe itna karam kar de
Apne dewane pe bas tu apni ik nazar kar de

Chahta hoon ik baar tera jalwa e husn dekhna
Jo basi hai nazaron mein raat, tu saher kar de

Julas rhi hai tamn-na meri hijr ki dhup mein
Apne gesuyon ki chao mujh pe magar kar de

Pa lunga mein jaanat e jahaan bas ik pal mein
Parda-e-ruksaar ko tu be-parda  agar kar de

karna chahta hoon aisa nasha jo na tute kabhi
Apni masti-e-nigah mere naam janejigar kar de

Bin dekhe tujhe mein har waqt tera dedaar karu
Adayon ka apni Sanam mujhpe aisa asar kar de

Dil kre tujhe chupa lu duniya ki har buri shai se
Aa mere agosh mein zindgi tamam basar kar de

Barsa ke apne pyar ki barish ko mere humnaseen
Mud'daton ke iss pyase sehra ko samandar kar de

Kab se tadap rha hoon teri saanson ki mehak ke liye
Zamen ke zarre ko aaj chu kar isse ambaar kar de

Dekha hai sapna tere sath pyare se ashiyane ka "Meena"
Mere haseen khwaab ko haqiqat mere dilbhar kar de !!!
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Maan gaye HUMTUM ji......maine yeh ssher 4 baar pada...bahut accha hai.....
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2006, 12:56:34 PM »
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Sameer

Aap ne to sirf 4 baar padha

Duniya ne to ise hazaar baar padha...lol..:D

Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2006, 01:15:35 PM »
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Wow HumTum ur dedication is really nice
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2006, 01:18:45 PM »
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isme to koi sahq nahi hai
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2006, 02:26:04 PM »
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Yeh haseen khawabb mere......
Jaise bandh ankho ke door hote andhere.......
Zindgi ki raat ke ho jaye jaise savere........
Dil ko bandhe hai umeedo ke sath jaise.........

Esey haseen khawab mere...........
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2006, 02:51:51 PM »
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[you]Dedicated To Meena[/you][/size]



Mere saanam tu mujh pe itna karam kar de
Apne dewane pe bas tu apni ik nazar kar de

Chahta hoon ik baar tera jalwa e husn dekhna
Jo basi hai nazaron mein raat, tu saher kar de

Julas rhi hai tamn-na meri hijr ki dhup mein
Apne gesuyon ki chao mujh pe magar kar de

Pa lunga mein jaanat e jahaan bas ik pal mein
Parda-e-ruksaar ko tu be-parda  agar kar de

karna chahta hoon aisa nasha jo na tute kabhi
Apni masti-e-nigah mere naam janejigar kar de

Bin dekhe tujhe mein har waqt tera dedaar karu
Adayon ka apni Sanam mujhpe aisa asar kar de

Dil kre tujhe chupa lu duniya ki har buri shai se
Aa mere agosh mein zindgi tamam basar kar de

Barsa ke apne pyar ki barish ko mere humnaseen
Mud'daton ke iss pyase sehra ko samandar kar de

Kab se tadap rha hoon teri saanson ki mehak ke liye
Zamen ke zarre ko aaj chu kar isse ambaar kar de

Dekha hai sapna tere sath pyare se ashiyane ka "Meena"
Mere haseen khwaab ko haqiqat mere dilbhar kar de !!!
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how sweeett!!
awesome work hum tum ji !!! Puzzled !  Puzzled !

meena ji ur so lucky!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2006, 06:11:16 PM »
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that was really very sweet hum tum ji... Usual Smile
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