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<<<HASTA CHEHRA>>>
Hasta chehra gulaan hojayee
Too meri hi kitaab hojayee
Choo kay teray haseen hontoon ko
Sadah paani sharab hojayee
Too meri hi kitaab ho jayee
Hansta chehra gulaab hojayee..!!
Umer bhar ka khumaar mil jayee
Palkoon say jo aadaab hojayee
Too meri hi kitaab ho jayee
Hasta chera gulaab hojayee...!!
Chorh di mainay sonch kar dunya
Saath tera janab hojayee
Too meri hi kitaab hojayee
Hasta chehra gulaab hojayee..!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2006, 03:52:51 PM » |
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wah wah!! khoob likha  |
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2006, 09:46:02 AM » |
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very nice Majid ..........
patjhar ke mosam mein phoolo ki khusboo ban ke kaun chhaaya hai
dekhiye aaj chand ne fir se kya apna ghooghat hataya hai..
shabado se aa rahi hai aaj fir se gulaabo.n ki mehak
yeh aaj fir se kisne apna haale- dil hamko sunayaa hai.........
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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2006, 10:02:53 AM » |
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shukriya N gud one.......
abhi dil mein ek gumaan rehne de
karta hai tu bhi mujhse mohabbat
abhi jindagi mein yeh sawaal rehne de
abhi toh shuru hui hai daastaan -A- mohabbat
abhi mere meherbaa.n ise daastaan hi rehne de
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2006, 10:20:36 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Majid.... =D> =D> =D>
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Good Replies Ranju.... =D> =D> =D>
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2006, 10:52:09 AM » |
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shukriya Shikha ............nice majid
iqarar hum teri wafa ka kaise karte
tum aaye bhi nahi hamse vada karke
pata puchte rahe bahar mehfilo mein mera
aaya na tumhe pyaar nibhana hamse karke
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2006, 03:14:46 PM » |
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wah kay abaat hai Majid, bahoot hi acha likha hai, pahli kavita apki dil chu gai,,, bahoot khoob Good reply Ranju.. app to her jagah kamal ka likhati hai....
wo hansta chehra
muje khil khilla jaata hai
jab bhi atta hai pass mere
mujko mujse chura jaata hai
kahta hai kuch nahi
khamosh sab samjha jaata hai
ek wo hansta hua chehra
her pal sath mere atta hai
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2006, 05:12:33 PM » |
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shukriya Pooja ........aapne bahut sunder likha.....
jab bhi zikar hua mehfil mein tera
aankh meri kyu sharmane lagi
sittaro ne jab faliya apna aanchal
toh yaad teri mere jahen mein bhi chhane lagi
raat ko jab chera isaq ke fasaane ko hamne
toh tere rukhsaaro per bhi fiza phool khilane lagi.........
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2006, 02:34:50 AM » |
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wo hansta chehra
muje khil khilla jaata hai
jab bhi atta hai pass mere
mujko mujse chura jaata hai
kahta hai kuch nahi
khamosh sab samjha jaata hai
ek wo hansta hua chehra
her pal sath mere atta hai
wo hasta hua chehra her pal mere saath aata hai. nahi deta sone kabhi neende chura ker jaata hai. us haste hue chehre mein khumar ke rang hai. isiliye wo chehra humko yaad bahut aata hai. |
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2006, 04:23:44 AM » |
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thanks Ranju, Majid and Dost Kavi!!!! wo chehra jaise darpan ban gaya mere her pal ka sathi ban gaya khayalo aor khawabo per ab bas uska haq hai her pal karta rahta wo dil ke sung bak bak hai  kabhi gudgudata sa ahsaas, to kabhi uska khumar bas her pal ek wo chehra, jis se hai Pooja ko payaar |
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2006, 09:34:51 AM » |
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wo chehra jaise darpan ban gaya mere her pal ka sathi ban gaya khayalo aor khawabo per ab bas uska haq hai her pal karta rahta wo dil ke sung bak bak hai kabhi gudgudata sa ahsaas, to kabhi uska khumar bas her pal ek wo chehra, jis se hai Pooja ko payaar wo ek chera jisko dekhe bina chain nhi aata tha. wo ek chera jiske siwa kuch naa bhata tha. wo ek chehra jisse bhondu ka khuda wo gaya. pata nhi kiski nazar lagi aur.. wo mujhse juda ho gaya. |
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2006, 02:54:57 PM » |
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GOOD JOB POOJA AND BONDHU JI thanz majjid per luch likha karo to aacha lagta hai. |
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2006, 06:53:55 PM » |
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wo chehra jaise darpan ban gaya mere her pal ka sathi ban gaya khayalo aor khawabo per ab bas uska haq hai her pal karta rahta wo dil ke sung bak bak hai kabhi gudgudata sa ahsaas, to kabhi uska khumar bas her pal ek wo chehra, jis se hai Pooja ko payaar wo ek chera jisko dekhe bina chain nhi aata tha. wo ek chera jiske siwa kuch naa bhata tha. wo ek chehra jisse bhondu ka khuda wo gaya. pata nhi kiski nazar lagi aur.. wo mujhse juda ho gaya. ekh chehra hai...meri nazar se hath tha nahi mera dilse kabhi juda hota nahi chorgaya woh mujhko akele parh maine ajj bhi uska chehra bholayi nahi :D:D |
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2006, 03:05:53 PM » |
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main usay kabhi yaad aaya nhi
main usay kabhi bhool paya nhi
yadoon mein uski he pal mara main,
usney kaha tumne kabhi dil lagaya nhi.
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2006, 11:50:27 AM » |
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Dil ke armaan jaag uthe;
chehra jo tera dikh gaya;
Dil ke armaan khatm ho gaye;
chehra jo tera dikh gaya; gud one majid ji...... |
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