haway mujh sy asi chip ki kuch b zarorat nhi rahi

by FArah on December 06, 2006, 02:26:03 PM
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haway mujh sy asi chip ki kuch b zarorat nhi  rahi
dakh ker tujh ab kuch dakhnaie ki  zarorat nhi rahi

hoi batay ankho hi ankhoo mai
din raat ki kuch khaber nhi rahi

woh hum sy milay kuch is terha sy
shikwa aur sakayat ki zarorat nhi rahi

dor ho ker b woh itnay kareeb ayie
k ab dor janay ki  zaroorat nhi rahi

unki khamoshi naie mara chain aisa luta
ab hont halanaie ki zarorat nhi  rahi

mohabat k nasay mai do shager asay dobay
samander  ko sahil sy milnaie ki zarorat nhi rahi

ankhoo sy ashk bahtay rahie farah k
khush ho ja ab tu hijar aur wasal ki zarorat nhi rahi
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2006, 01:57:00 PM »
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osay dakh ker kasi madhoshi chayi ha
tab sy dil ma ik halchal si payi ha
ankho sy nam nikalty haie on ko yaad ker k
hum tu bas itna janty haie zindge on k bina kuch b
nhi
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«Reply #2 on: December 10, 2006, 02:20:09 PM »
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very  nice Farah......aap ki  ghazal acchi lagi.....

mujhe lagta hai ki  aap ko  likhne mein  thodi  problem ho  rahi hai.....kuch  miss  typing  ho  gayee hai......

unki  khamoshi  ne mera chain aisa luta.....

i think  aise hona chahiye.....
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«Reply #3 on: December 10, 2006, 02:30:42 PM »
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thank a lot
waheed

ap naie bilkul theek kaha ha
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«Reply #4 on: December 10, 2006, 02:37:18 PM »
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osay dakh ker kasi madhoshi chayi ha
tab sy dil ma ik halchal si payi ha
ankho sy nam nikalty haie on ko yaad ker k
hum tu bas itna janty haie zindge on k bina kuch b
nhi


ur  welcome  Farah......

aap ki  yeh sher  bhi bahot acchi hai........agar aap is tarah  se likhti  to aur acha lagta......

Usay dekhkar  kaisi  madhoshi chaayi hai
tab se dil mein ik halchal si paayi hai
ankhon se naam nikalte hain unko yaad karke
hum to jaante hain zindagi unke bina kuch bhi nahi.....
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