Hein jo apka intezar...:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

Rosh

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Hein jo apka intezaar aaj bhi,
Takti hein nighahein apki raahein aaj bhi...

Hein dil mein apse milne ki tamanna aaj bhi..
Hein apki bahon mein aane ki chahat aaj bhi...

Kaise samjhaun is dil ko ki intezaar karna chod de..
Kaise samjhaun ki is khushi ki aas chod de...


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Re: Hein jo apka intezar...

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Re: Hein jo apka intezar...

«Reply #2 on: October 31, 2014, 05:11:27 PM »

Quote from: Rosh on October 31, 2014, 12:12:17 PM

Bahut khoob.


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Re: Hein jo apka intezar...

«Reply #3 on: November 01, 2014, 01:19:06 AM »

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Hein jo apka intezaar aaj bhi,
Takti hein nighahein apki raahein aaj bhi...

Hein dil mein apse milne ki tamanna aaj bhi..
Hein apki bahon mein aane ki chahat aaj bhi...

Kaise samjhaun is dil ko ki intezaar karna chod de..
Kaise samjhaun ki is khushi ki aas chod de...
waaaaaaaaH bahut umdah. icon_flower

This just a suggestion: the last 2 lines repeat "Kaise samjhaun" it will better if it is changed as follows.

Kaise samjhaun is dil ko ke intezaar karnaa chorh de...
Yeh kushee nahin milne waalee iss khushee kee aas chorh de...


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Re: Hein jo apka intezar...

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Rosh

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Re: Hein jo apka intezar...

«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2014, 01:46:44 PM »

Quote from: surindarn on November 01, 2014, 01:19:06 AM

Quote from: Rosh on October 31, 2014, 12:12:17 PM


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