Hijr-o-visaal

by Brijinder on February 21, 2006, 12:17:32 AM
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Fazaon ko phir vajeh si mil gayee mahakane ki
Afsurda badalon mein se chand phir muskuraya hai
Takhleeq meri mein phir aaney lagey hain shokhion ke dum
Labon pe phir koyee mast nagma ubhar aayaa hai

Phir se gaataa hai malhaar saaz-e-zeest mera
Phir se chayee hai takh_ ul pe aarzuon ke ghata
Jhumti bal khaati hai barq umeedon ki
Phir se wafa ki zard aarizo mein noor bhaa

Meri tanhaee bhi soyee hai aaj umron ke baad
Main bhi khud se mila huin baad muddat ke
Dard ki aankhon mein bhi hein aaj massrrat ke aansoo
Tamanna ko milay phir se pairhan haqeeqat ke

Besood nahin mahabbat ki wus_ ataiN
Dil phir yeh mananay ko karta hai
Khird phir bebus si khari hai
Junoon phir jaagney ko karta hai

Aaj tu aayee hai to pathra gayee hai shikvon ki zbaaN
Kho gyay hain gilon ke bol kahin khalaaon mein
Meetha taanaa sa detaa hai beetee udaasee ka chehra
"Bhool gayaa hai "Sagar" usey vasl ki shuaon mein"

Abhi kuch pal mein toot jayega waqt-e-vasl ka dum
Phir se laut jayengey hum liye majboorion ke daaman
Tu meri ho ke bhi meri na hogi kabhi
Teri majboorian hain yeh duniya ke bemaar aqayud
Main bhi majboor huun in haalaat ke haathon humnufs meri
Aatee rhaa karo milnay jab talak mumkin hai
Kyuon na tab talaq ishq ko apnay
vajah miltee rahey jeeney ki
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Meanings:
Afsurda-udaas,
Takhleeq-creation(my poetry)
aarizon-gaal
barq- bijlee
masarrat-khushi
pairhan-libaas
besood-bematlab(useless)
khirad- aql
shuaon-kiranon(rays)

--------Brijinder"Sagar"
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hi
«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2006, 07:30:45 PM »
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I shall be grateful if the readers post their feedback to my poem.
Brijinder"Sagar"
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«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2006, 09:37:42 PM »
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Brijinder"Sagar" readers will definetly post their veiws only if u write short ones cos seein tht its so lng no one bothers reain. im nt being bad or tryin to b rude bt do keep in mind if its this lng ur nt gonna get ne replies...........newayz i did read it n was really nice
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«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2006, 11:43:07 PM »
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Brijender! Aap ne bahot achhe urdu words ka istemaal kiya hai! Aur aap bahot achha likate ho is main koi do rai nahi!

Jab zindagi ahat sunati hai chahat ki,
Her pal main hoti hai harkat mahobat ki!
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2006, 04:21:02 PM »
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Very Nice Brijinder ji!!
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Brijinder
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hi
«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2006, 07:49:22 PM »
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Conforming just to popular taste is not my style.I write to explore and to find some meaning of life.The readers have to have some time to ponder to enjoy the poem.If you are just looking for small titbits n mere romantic mushyness,u will be ofcourse disappointed.
Brijinder"sagar"
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