Hoke reh Gaye

by sunilastin on September 08, 2008, 06:07:02 AM
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Aankhon ke khaaw dil mein armaan hoke reh gaye;
Jinko samjha tha khuda insaan hoke reh gaye .
khudko jo tera khasam khas manker chale ;
wo aake teri bajm mein awaam hoke reh gaye.
Hum to apna farz nibhate chale gaye ;
jo na hue humare hum unhee k hoke reh gaye.
Apne hi aks humse karte rahe sawal;
Hum aayino ki bheed mein khamosh hoke reh gaye.
Ab apna haal dekhke bara afshos hota hai;
Dil ki chand khahishon mein hum barbaad hoke reh gaye .
Jub lut gaya chupchap ek roj aashyaan ;
Hum apne hi shehar mein gumnaam hoker reh gaye.
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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2008, 06:43:33 PM »
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sunilastin ..bohat khoob likha hai aapne... Thumbs UP Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2011, 09:40:22 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2011, 09:57:43 AM »
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excellent 1 sunilastin ji..ek behad dil ko lubhati peshkash rahi ye aapki....bht bht achche ji...
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2012, 05:50:42 PM »
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very very beautiful........  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2012, 09:49:09 PM »
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Sunilastin ji Its a grat composition. Congratulations.
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