hosh mein aate kyon nahin......

by SURESH SANGWAN on May 04, 2010, 12:44:15 PM
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Har baat ko jo lete ho tum mazaak mein.
tumhen kya pataa mere dil pe kya gujarti hai.

nadaan ho ya zazbaat samajhana nahin chahte.
tumhen kya pataa mohabbat sau sawaal karne lagati hai.

kya jawaab den iske sawaalon ka koi batlataa kyon nahin.
tum hi mere sarkaar kuchh hosh mein aa jaate kyon nahin.
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2010, 12:48:55 PM »
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Wah Wah Suresh bahut achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Ek naya khayal, naye tariqe. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2010, 01:20:02 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob. Mohabbat bhari aapki ye rachna humein bahut pasand aayi. Ye panktiyan seedhe dil ke kamaan se nikal ke aaye hain. Lag raha hai ye mohabbat naam k khoobsurat bimaari k shikaar ho gaye hain aap bhi...

unki to aadat hai ye aapke ehsaason ko hasi me udaane ki,
yahi to zariya hai unka aapse nazdikiyaan badhaane ki,
aap ye na socho ki wo kar rahi hain ye sab behoshi mein,
ye to unki aadat hai sab jaanke bhi aapko sataane ki...
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2010, 02:51:13 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai            Suresh Sangwan ji......


Kyun har waqt iqsha jatate rahete ho mohabbat mein hadd se gujarne ki
kyun har waqt baat taal te rahete ho jab kaheti hun mohabbat ko naam dene ki
kyun nahi teri aadat jaati hai har waqt mohabbat ko masti mein lene ki
aakhir is mohaabat ka anjam kya hoga tum samajhte kyun nahin
kab tak rahoge yun befikar ab "hosh mein aate kyun nahin"
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2010, 02:55:51 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 04, 2010, 12:44:15 PM
Har baat ko jo lete ho tum mazaak mein.
tumhen kya pataa mere dil pe kya gujarti hai.

nadaan ho ya zazbaat samajhana nahin chahte.
tumhen kya pataa mohabbat sau sawaal karne lagati hai.

kya jawaab den iske sawaalon ka koi batlataa kyon nahin.
tum hi mere sarkaar kuchh hosh mein aa jaate kyon nahin.




Waah waah..Suresh ji..Bahut Hi pyaare Ehsaas..

Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Klaskar Ji Aur Caraji..bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2010, 03:13:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji...!!!

Quote from: khwaish on May 04, 2010, 02:55:51 PM
Waah waah..Suresh ji..Bahut Hi pyaare Ehsaas..

Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache Klaskar Ji Aur Caraji..bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2010, 10:03:39 PM »
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Wah Suresh Ji ..........

Bhoot khoob
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2010, 01:45:07 PM »
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Nice suresh ji...acha sath diya hai apne kapil ji n cara ji..
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2010, 01:50:32 PM »
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Shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Quote from: brokenbyluv on May 05, 2010, 01:45:07 PM
Nice suresh ji...acha sath diya hai apne kapil ji n cara ji..
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2010, 04:19:20 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob kaha suresh ji. bohat khoobsoorati se shikayat likhi hai aapne.....nice
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2010, 09:21:08 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Suresh ji,Kapil ji,Cara ji.fantastic creation.excellent work.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2010, 09:24:33 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on May 04, 2010, 12:44:15 PM
Har baat ko jo lete ho tum mazaak mein.
tumhen kya pataa mere dil pe kya gujarti hai.

nadaan ho ya zazbaat samajhana nahin chahte.
tumhen kya pataa mohabbat sau sawaal karne lagati hai.

kya jawaab den iske sawaalon ka koi batlataa kyon nahin.
tum hi mere sarkaar kuchh hosh mein aa jaate kyon nahin.




Bahut khoob Suresh Ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2010, 10:34:04 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 06, 2010, 09:21:08 PM
Wah bahut khoob Suresh ji,Kapil ji,Cara ji.fantastic creation.excellent work.keep it up. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 09, 2010, 06:36:56 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA RIYAZ JI.
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Quote from: riyaz106 on May 04, 2010, 12:48:55 PM
Wah Wah Suresh bahut achhi poem likhi hai aapne. Ek naya khayal, naye tariqe. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #14 on: May 09, 2010, 06:39:19 PM »
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BAHUT BAHUT shukriya klaskar ji. icon_flower icon_flower
 
Aapne bhi bahut achha jawaab diya hai.
bahut khoob kapil ji.
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Quote from: klaskar on May 04, 2010, 01:20:02 PM
Bahut bahut khoob. Mohabbat bhari aapki ye rachna humein bahut pasand aayi. Ye panktiyan seedhe dil ke kamaan se nikal ke aaye hain. Lag raha hai ye mohabbat naam k khoobsurat bimaari k shikaar ho gaye hain aap bhi...

unki to aadat hai ye aapke ehsaason ko hasi me udaane ki,
yahi to zariya hai unka aapse nazdikiyaan badhaane ki,
aap ye na socho ki wo kar rahi hain ye sab behoshi mein,
ye to unki aadat hai sab jaanke bhi aapko sataane ki...
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