HOSH

by kamal aggarwal on February 10, 2011, 03:00:33 PM
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Choot jate hain jo pal,wo tammam umr yaad rehte hain,
gumshudgi me unki kuch alfaz junba par rehte hain,
kyal  tazavur  me  aata  hai  jab  waqt  ka,
samajh aata hai ki hosh jawani me kab rehte hain,
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«Reply #1 on: February 10, 2011, 03:03:24 PM »
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Nice Kamal Ji
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nirala
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«Reply #2 on: February 10, 2011, 04:07:13 PM »
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nice--
lekin kamal ji mujhe last ke 2 line samjh me nahi aaye:(
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kamal aggarwal
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2011, 02:11:21 PM »
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nirala ji charo lines beete huye waqt ko yaad karte huye likhi hai .

last do line me maine ye kaha hai ki gujre waqt ki apni nadan mohbt ke wo pal yaad karen to jawan  umr ki nadaniyan yaad aati hai.
i hope u understand
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2011, 12:59:28 AM »
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Choot jate hain jo pal,wo tammam umr yaad rehte hain,
gumshudgi me unki kuch alfaz junba par rehte hain,
kyal  tazavur  me  aata  hai  jab  waqt  ka,
samajh aata hai ki hosh jawani me kab rehte hain,

Good One ... Kamal Ji !
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kamal aggarwal
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2011, 09:38:49 AM »
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thanks anshumali ji
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