HOSH UDA LE GAYA ....................PWFS

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Hosh Uda le gaya tera lehrata Anchal.
Qahar sa dhagaya teri Ankh ka kajal.

Nigah-e-khanjar ka nishana bana dil.
Khumar-e-ishq me hun, na samajh pagal.

FizaoN me bhi rang kai tairne lage.
Ghata sa cha gaya Gesu hai ya badal.

PalakeN utheN to GumaaN ho sehar ka.
JhukeN gar to lage hai Shab ki Shakal.

Bijli gir pade gar wo guzre qarib se.
Zahn-o-jism me howe ajab si hulchul.

Hosh Uda le gaya tera lehrata Anchal.
Kahar sa dhagaya teri Ankh ka kajal.

(PWFS - 20/03/12)  Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 05:12:07 AM »
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Bahut sunder bahut khoob badee dikash dheron daad pankaj
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2012, 05:14:43 AM »
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thanks Sir bas aap ka ashirwad hai sir thanks
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2012, 11:48:33 AM »
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khub pankajji
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2012, 01:10:57 PM »
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thanks mann ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2012, 01:19:34 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on March 20, 2012, 05:08:07 AM
Hosh Uda le gaya tera lehrata Anchal.
Kahar sa dhagaya teri Ankh ka kajal.

Nigah-e-khanjar ka nisana bana dil.
Khumar-e-isq me hun, na samajh pagal.

FizaoN me bhi rang kai tairne lage.
Ghata sa cha gaya Gesu hai ya badal.

PalakeN utheN to GumaaN ho sehar ka.
JhukeN gar to lage hai Shab ki Sakal.

Bijli gir pade gar wo guzre karib se.
Jehno-o-jism me howe ajib si hulchul.

Hos Uda le gaya tera lehrata Anchal.
Kahar sa dhagaya teri Ankh ka kajal.

(PWFS - 20/03/12)  Usual Smile
  wah wah wah ...kya baat hai hamein bhi apne beete hue lamhe yaad aa gaye ,,,,,good one   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on March 20, 2012, 01:19:34 PM
  wah wah wah ...kya baat hai hamein bhi apne beete hue lamhe yaad aa gaye ,,,,,good one   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut bahut sukriya Sunil ji post pe apna kimti samay aur comment ke liye.
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2012, 02:10:18 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pankaj ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2012, 02:12:51 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on March 20, 2012, 02:10:18 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Pankaj ji... bahut bahut khoob....!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Bahut Sukriya Hriday ji apna kimti samay aur comment dene ke liye.
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2012, 03:15:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Pankaj ji.Alfaaz ko sahi talaffuz ke saath likhein  to  kalaam  ki  khubsurti  aur bhi  barh jaayegi e.g.Qahar,Nishana,Ishq,Shakal,qarib,zahn,Hosh.Likhte rahiye.Duago,Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2012, 05:08:19 PM »
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good one
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2012, 05:08:42 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2012, 07:02:13 PM »
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vry nyc
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«Reply #13 on: March 21, 2012, 02:57:25 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on March 20, 2012, 03:15:22 PM
Bahut khoob , Pankaj ji.Alfaaz ko sahi talaffuz ke saath likhein  to  kalaam  ki  khubsurti  aur bhi  barh jaayegi e.g.Qahar,Nishana,Ishq,Shakal,qarib,zahn,Hosh.Likhte rahiye.Duago,Hasan





Bahut bahut sukriya Hasan sahab is peskash pe gaur farmane ke liye. correction kar liya hai ap ke mutabik.
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«Reply #14 on: March 21, 2012, 03:01:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob Pankaj..
acchi peshkash hai..
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hasan sahab ki adv par bhi dhyaan diljiye..insah allah.. kalaam nikhar jaayega. keep writing.
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