HSEEN HADISA

by shakeel shan on January 22, 2012, 03:54:20 PM
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aj shab phir wohi hadisa hogaya
jo hua so hua be wajah hogaya

ek armaan nigahon mein tha muztarib
ek aansu gira aur woh beh gaya

ishq ki tashnagi ka ajab raasta
umr bhar chal ke phir fasla hogaya

meri khaabon se raghbat bahot barh gai
tujh se milne ka yun silsila hogaya

yu na mangi na thi meri barbadiyan
khud ba khud Rab ka yeh faisla hogaya

dasht mein humsafar tha mere karwan
shore o ghul mein magar main hi main reh gaya

tum na mayoos ho tera shikwa nahi
dil hi dil mein kisi se gila hogaya
(SHAKEEL SHAN)
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2012, 07:09:34 PM »
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bht bht khoob Shan ji--
dher saari daad kubul karen
khus rahen
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shakeel shan
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2012, 11:53:36 PM »
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bohat bohat shukriya Sarfira ji..
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2012, 09:19:46 AM »
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 :love4:Khawaabon ka Manzar bohat acha hy.
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2012, 04:57:35 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2012, 01:50:25 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Umda Shakeel ji.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2012, 02:36:10 PM »
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nawazish apki..bohat shukrya..Nysha ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2012, 03:33:53 PM »
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Mahutram Shakeel Shan Sahab salam

Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh Kya hi khoob ghazal kahi hai ..Wah Wah ..Ek nahi balke hazarah dad apki is ghazal pe khubool kare.N ,,Ek baat bus apse ye kaheni hai ke Akhir sher me Tum aur Tu ke seghe se Shutur-Gurbah Ka Ayeb Dar Aya hai Usse dekh le.N ,,,Allah Apko hamesha khush rakhe ..

Dua go

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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2012, 05:26:48 PM »
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bahut khoob, qadeer ke mutabiq dekh lain aur sath hi 4 aur 5 shair ko shaid nazre sani ki zarrurat hai ya nahin ghaur ferma lain.
bahut hi umda ashhar hain


wassalam



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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2012, 05:49:00 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2012, 07:01:26 PM »
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apne karam farmauo'n se muaafi ka khwasgar ho'n..its typing error..paanchve'n shair mein sahi yeh hai ki"tu ne maangi na thi meri barbadiya'n...aur maqta is tarah ki"yu'n na mayoos...
baharhaal Javaid sahab aur Qadeer sahab...sahi waqt par ap ki islah ne mujhe apka mamnoon kardiya..tah e dil se shukriya..
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