Hum Muskurate Rahe

by Preet.Dehlvi on April 21, 2010, 11:48:52 PM
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Zakhm Jo Tumne Diye, Pal Pal Sehlate Rahe
Yaad Aati Rahi Tum, Chahe Hum Bhulate Rahe.
Jahan Jaan Na Jaaye Kahin Tumhari Bewafai,
Dil Roya Chahe Zar Zar, Par Hum Muskurate Rahe.
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 11:53:16 PM »
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bahot hi khoobsurat shair ,umda likha hai aap ne.bahot khoob

Jahan Jaan Na Jaaye Kahin Tumhari Bewafai,
Dil Roya Chahe Zar Zar, Par Hum Muskurate Rahe.
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«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2010, 11:54:58 PM »
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Thanks a lot Nazar Ji for your words of appreciation.
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 04:33:05 AM »
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Bahut khoob Preet Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 06:37:33 AM »
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Zakhm Jo Tumne Diye, Pal Pal Sehlate Rahe
Yaad Aati Rahi Tum, Chahe Hum Bhulate Rahe.
Jahan Jaan Na Jaaye Kahin Tumhari Bewafai,
Dil Roya Chahe Zar Zar, Par Hum Muskurate Rahe.


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Yu mohabbat me hum khud ko nisar kar baithe
Ek us ke naam par zindagi tamam kar baithe
Dekhi jo soorat meri us ne ek roz rozan se
Kaha yeh kya tamasha sar-e-aam kar baithe  icon_scratch BangHead

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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2010, 10:29:25 AM »
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Bahot hi achhi poem likhi Preet ji, kya kahne. Andaaz bahot achha hai.
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2010, 02:20:53 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Preet Ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2010, 05:17:43 AM »
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Thankyou everybody for your words of appreciation.
Saba Ji - aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai -
"Yeh kya tamasha sare aam kar baithe" - wah.
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