Hum unke ghar kee gali se guzar gaye

by karndhar on October 21, 2008, 08:15:54 AM
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Hum unke ghar kee gali se guzar gaye
Magar kahin unka deedaar ho na paaya !

Hum mohabbat mein unkee had se guzar gaye
Magar kabhi unhe humse pyaar ho na paaya !

Unhe dikhane ko hum beintehan sanwar gaye
Par unke chaheeton mein shumaar ho na paaya !

Woh bhool kar har waada juban se mukar gaye
Magar phir bhi unka tiraskaar ho na paaya !

Pyar paane ko jinka jee jee ke mar gaye
Unko chahat se meri sarokaaar ho na paaya !

Yaad karte hue unko barson guzar gaye
Par "Karndhar" unhe yaadgaar ho na paaya !
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2008, 08:21:53 AM »
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tere jane ka gum nahi, par yeh dekh hum ghabra gaye
sath tere chal diya muje chod kar mera saya

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good work karndhar jee keep it up  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2008, 08:23:14 AM »
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bohut khoob karndhr  Applause  happy3   Clapping Smiley
welcome to yoindia
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2008, 09:49:59 AM »
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Welcome to Yoindia Karndhar Ji
First step is really good   Applause Applause
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karndhar
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2008, 05:47:01 AM »
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Sajid ji, Kaushik ji & Rajesh ji !

Thanks a lot for apreciating my work.
Though it is not my first creation but it is my first post on yoindia.com
I have posterd a few creations earlier on some other shayri blogs.

I'll be sharing all those with our yoindia friends.

Thanks once more to all of you !
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