Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Vo najarey humsey churane lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Sharmo haya ki hai chadar audhi
Surat sanam ki bari hi bholi
Laj ki murat bane se khare hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Sapno khayalo mein chhaye hain aksar
Aahat pe har chaunk jate hain har pal
Ghungat pe mukhra chhipane lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Jharokhe se kabhi takte hain humko
Parde ki oat se chhupa lete khudko
Mahobbat key zajbat umarney lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Aalingan mein lene ki masti hai chhayee
Gagar pyar ki chhalakney ko aayee
Hriday mein sailab umarney lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Bahon ke ghery pasarey khare hain
Pyar ke geet gungunaney lage hain
Doori mitane ko tatpar huye hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain


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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2015, 09:12:52 AM »

behtreen peshkash nandbahu sir ji dherooooooooooo daaaaaaaaadddddddddddddddd


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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2015, 09:48:16 AM »

Quote from: jeet jainam on May 03, 2015, 09:12:52 AM

behtreen peshkash nandbahu sir ji dherooooooooooo daaaaaaaaadddddddddddddddd

thanx jeet ji


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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2015, 02:48:16 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on May 03, 2015, 06:35:58 AM

Vo najarey humsey churane lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Sharmo haya ki hai chadar audhi
Surat sanam ki bari hi bholi
Laj ki murat bane se khare hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Sapno khayalo mein chhaye hain aksar
Aahat pe har chaunk jate hain har pal
Ghungat pe mukhra chhipane lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Jharokhe se kabhi takte hain humko
Parde ki oat se chhupa lete khudko
Mahobbat key jazbaat umarney lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Aalingan mein lene ki masti hai chhayee
Gagar pyar ki chhalakney ko aayee
Hriday mein sailab umarney lage hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

Bahon ke ghery pasarey khare hain
Pyar ke geet gungunaney lage hain
Doori mitane ko tatpar huye hain
Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

wonderful creation,sir


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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2015, 05:34:20 PM »

Behad khubsurat


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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2015, 12:43:08 AM »

waah waah waaahhhhhhh nihaayat hee khoobsurat Janaab, dherooooooooN daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad.
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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2015, 12:22:15 PM »

Nyc one.


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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2015, 02:39:18 PM »

श्री नंदबाहु जी बहुत ही सुंदर आपने जजबात पेश किये है पेश है - --मोहब्बत के गीत जब से गाने लगे
हमे आप बहुत याद आने लगे है

अगर आप उचित समझे तो कुछ शब्दों में संशोधन कर लीजियेगा, जैसे
घूँघट पे मुखड़ा के स्थान पर,घूंघट से मुखड़ा .
जज्बात उमरने के स्थान पर जज्बात उभरने
सैलाब उमरने के स्थान पर सैलाब उठने लगे
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Re: Hum unke kareeb jabse aane lage hain

«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2015, 07:15:56 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on May 03, 2015, 06:35:58 AM

achi nazm likhi hai nandbahu !


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