Hum unse hai....

by chitra on March 07, 2006, 04:20:06 PM
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Raat ki  baicheni   mein "chain" unse hai
aur is chain mein khud se kareeb unse hai
baaho  mein samet lene ki chahat unse hai
in "julfo" ka  andhera chhaya hai
isme  dubone  ki chahat unse hai
in saanso mein ajeeb se "bekaraari" hai
is bekaraari ko saanso pe mitane ki hasrat unse hai
tufaan bekabu sa seene mein udha hai
isme kho  jane ki "hasrat" unse hai
meri dhadkano mein barso se aanch hai
is anch mein pighlane ki fariyaad unse hai

           "  ab  utre hai unki ruh mein "
           "ab hum ,hum nahi ,hum unse hai"
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2006, 04:36:31 PM »
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waah ....  Chitra ( Sen ) ji !!

chayya madhoshi ka allam sansson se saansien takrane lagi
chu ke mere laboo se apne laboo ko meri pyaar tu bujhane lagi

huye dono madhosh kuch iss kadar ke kya khey
mere badan ki khushu teri saansoon se aane lagi

lipat gaye ik dujjey se "Hum Tum" kuch iss trah
yun tere jism ki tapish mere badan ko jlane lagi !!
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2006, 04:28:57 AM »
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Beautiful Chitra! Humtum ka andaze bayan kuchh aur hai!

Chitra kabhi aapke unse bhi milvayega, Bahot khush nasib hai koi!

Khush naisb hai woh jiska tu intazaar kare,
Mukaddar pe naaz ho usey, jise tu pyaar kare,
Tuhi rasta hai uska, manzil bhi tuhi,
Kyun na koi tujh per jaan nisar kare!
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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2006, 05:26:26 AM »
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gr8 work chitra ji.. bahut khoob humtum ji and benam ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2006, 05:49:06 AM »
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Bhut hi badiya , likha hai,, gr88 goings :D

Akhon mein jaam ,hothon pe gulab aur chehre pe aftaab
Baitha hai Intezar main  koi,sajjaye huye shabaab...
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2006, 01:17:49 PM »
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Thanks Gesu ji....

khuch rista hai apka humse ke
apke labz lahoo mein utar jate hai
apke banaye un ashiyaane ke
saaye mein hum nazar aate hai
baraso se talaash mein thi jinke
wo sher apke nagmo mein hai
dafan jo arman mere seene ke
apke laboo pe chhalak aate hai

Sirf  ek koshish ki hai_~~~~
apko pad kar laga ke humare khyaalo ko
khoobsurti aap bayaan kar jate ho !!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 09, 2006, 12:08:36 AM »
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Great going Chitra, HumTum, BeNam and Jeet
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«Reply #7 on: March 09, 2006, 01:58:32 AM »
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bahoot khoob Chitra, HumTum, BeNam and Jeet!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2006, 10:50:51 AM »
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Thanks a million Benam Ji, Pooja Ji, Gesu Ji, Big B, BD ji

Nice one Chitra Ji !!


yeh kya ke ab aap humse sharmane lage
dhika ke apni adyien aur humey tadpane lage

ghayaal karne lagi humey teer e nigaah aap ki
aur aap yun palke jukha ke musskurane lage

dekhiye ! yun apne ashiq ko stana acha nhi
jee na paoge "sanam" gar hum stane lage !!
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2006, 03:52:18 PM »
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Thanks.............Pooja ji... rajbir ji...apki koshisho ne ye shamaa baandha hai
 
"Hum Tum"  ji Humne aisa kiya......? karte bhi kya ....majboori thi karna padaa

apki Nazro mein ajab shararat thi
dekha to hum sharmaane lage

Ada mein to humari sharaafat thi
aap to yun hi tadpane lage

negaah-E-teer ghayal kyo na kare
aap mere jahan me ghoosne jo lage

aji sataa lijiye ji bhar ke ......!
Kya hoga jab HUM TUM mein nazdeek ane lage
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«Reply #10 on: March 09, 2006, 03:57:40 PM »
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ha ha ha nice reply chitra!!
HumTum ji kamal ka likha hai apne!!! bahoot khoob

jee na paogy "sanam" gar hum satane lage... wah kaya andaaz hai... kaya Zazbaat hai.... bahoot khoob!!

Sataye app hume, humne kab inkaar kiya
Dekhein sirf app hume, issi liye to solah shingaar kiya!!

Apki muskuraht hi, to dil mera dharkaati hai
pass khich lo app hume, be-karaari barati jaati hai

adaye hamari, apko ishare se samjhati hai
ab barra bhi lo kadam, haya yahin to kahe jaaty hai!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2006, 03:58:06 PM »
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Chitra, Pooja aur HumTum

Bahut mast :D

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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2006, 04:04:01 PM »
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Thanks.............Pooja ji... rajbir ji...apki koshisho ne ye shamaa baandha hai
 
"Hum Tum"  ji Humne aisa kiya......? karte bhi kya ....majboori thi karna padaa

apki Nazro mein ajab shararat thi
dekha to hum sharmaane lage

Ada mein to humari sharaafat thi
aap to yun hi tadpane lage

negaah-E-teer ghayal kyo na kare
aap mere jahan me ghoosne jo lage

aji sataa lijiye ji bhar ke ......!
Kya hoga jab HUM TUM mein nazdeek ane lage


waah Chitra ji !!


E Husn waloon suno zra sambal bhi jao tum
Yun nigaahon se qatal ishq ka acha nhi hota

Yeh to ishq ka jazba hai ke ufff tak nhi karta
Aseey dilbhar ko tadpana acha nhi hota

Jab lagti hai aag ishq ki dilo mein to "Sanam"
to "HumTum" mein koi bhi bacha nhi hota !!!
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«Reply #13 on: March 09, 2006, 04:08:47 PM »
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ha ha ha nice reply chitra!!
HumTum ji kamal ka likha hai apne!!! bahoot khoob

jee na paogy "sanam" gar hum satane lage... wah kaya andaaz hai... kaya Zazbaat hai.... bahoot khoob!!

Sataye app hume, humne kab inkaar kiya
Dekhein sirf app hume, issi liye to solah shingaar kiya!!

Apki muskuraht hi, to dil mera dharkaati hai
pass khich lo app hume, be-karaari barati jaati hai

adaye hamari, apko ishare se samjhati hai
ab barra bhi lo kadam, haya yahin to kahe jaaty hai!!!!!



Pooja ji .... ShukriyaaN !!!

Aji chah kar bhi hum aap ko sta na payegey
Aap lakh zulm dhalo hum ik na dha payegey

Ishq ki fitrat hai husn ki nazo adda uthana
Hum bhi ishq hai so nazzo ada uthate jayegey

Karegey hum has has ke aap ki har adda ko salam
Seh ke hazaaro sitam, aap ke kuchey ko hi aaygeey !!
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«Reply #14 on: March 09, 2006, 04:15:44 PM »
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wah HumTum@lajawaab ji, maan gaye apko...bahoot hi acha reply Chira ji ko Pooja ki shayari ko diya hai.... bahoot khoob!!!

yah shayad last hoga..iske baad kuch office ka kaam bhi kar lu.. Usual Smile

Apka yahi andaaz to, dil husan ka le gaya
her husan ka nakhara, Ishaq hans kar sah gaya

Husan ki bekraari, Ishaq ki wafadaari
husan per chane lagi hai...ishaq ki khumari

salam nahi, ab to husan ko tham lijiye
ayya hai chal kar khud, Ishaq ki chah mai panah dijiye!!!!
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