------------------Humsafar-----------------

by BeNam on May 06, 2005, 09:07:37 AM
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Jo humsafar ban ke Tum sath chal diye,
Toh Andheron main roshani ke diye jal gaye,
Tum jo her kadam sath nibhane ka vada karo,
Toh Hum bhi rukne ka naam nahi lenge Paro!
Chaho toh Is Devdas ki kahani badal do,
Mujhe umra bhar ke liye bahon main bhar lo!

--- BeNam ---
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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2005, 09:12:41 AM »
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Quote from: "BeNam"
Jo humsafar ban ke Tum sath chal diye,
Toh Andheron main roshani ke diye jal gaye,
Tum jo her kadam sath nibhane ka vada karo,
Toh Hum bhi rukne ka naam nahi lenge Paro!
Chaho toh Is Devdas ki kahani badal do,
Mujhe umra bhar ke liye bahon main bhar lo!

--- BeNam ---


wow.....BeNam..........

very  nice  line........

Mujhe umra bhar ke liye bahon main bhar lo!

bahot  khoob.........
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dhadkan
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2005, 10:23:22 AM »
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Very nice benam............................................ ............. :lol:
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nice_off_me
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2005, 10:43:54 AM »
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nce wording benam jee really very nice
keep writing.......................................... .
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BeNam
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2005, 10:47:32 AM »
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Thanks waheedji , Dhadkanji & nice_off_me! Usual Smile zara nawazi ke liye shukriya!
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2005, 11:31:05 AM »
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ur  welcome  ........benam................:lol:...............
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2005, 05:07:58 PM »
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Good one BeNaam!!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2005, 02:22:35 AM »
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Nice written benaam ji! :D

Roya karenge aap bhi pahron isi tarah!
Atka kahin jo aap ka dil bhi meri tarah!

Na taab hizr mein hai na araam wasl mein,
Kambakht dil ko chain nahin hai kisi tarah!

Gar chup rahein to gham-e-hizran se chhoot jayein,
Kahte to hain bhale ki woh lekin buri tarah!

Na jaye wahan bane hai na bin jaye chain hai,
kya keejiye humein to hai mushkil sabhi tarah!



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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2005, 03:03:44 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai AKS JI!! Bahoot khoob!!!

payar ke intzaar ko khumar kahty hai
jo na kabhi utare, ya rub, hum to isse payar kahty hai!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #9 on: October 04, 2005, 06:46:05 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai AKS JI!! Bahoot khoob!!!

payar ke intzaar ko khumar kahty hai
jo na kabhi utare, ya rub, hum to isse payar kahty hai!!!


Thanks a lot Pooja ji!!! :D
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«Reply #10 on: October 04, 2005, 06:49:08 PM »
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shukariyan AKS ji!!!!

Aise julam na dhaya karo
bina likhy app na jaya karo!!!
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vitasta
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2005, 12:18:15 AM »
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bahut khoob everyone keep up the good work!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: October 10, 2005, 03:45:49 PM »
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Phir aayenge woh din yaad,
Woh Beete lamhe, woh pyaar bhari baat,
Gujare he jo hamne aapke sath,
Woh roothna wo manana,
Kabhi bahlana- fuslana,
Jaise bhi ho woh PAL the apne,
Ab lagte he jo sundar se sapne.
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BeNam
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«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2005, 06:49:20 AM »
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Mana ke tumase dur sahi,
Meri chahat magar majboor nahi,
Tumhe humsafar banaya hai humaney,
Toh manalo such honge sare sapaney!

---BENAM---
Teri mahobaat khinch layi hai mahefil main teri,
Kaise chup rahun ke bol deti hai her shayari yeh meri!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2005, 09:10:37 AM »
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Nice Jugalbandi!!! Poojaji and Benam ji!!
Pls Keep it up!!!
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