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by ufaq on September 11, 2013, 01:35:31 PM
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############### GHAZAL ####################

paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho.
zindagii ho to zindagii sii ho.

justajuu ho agar to pahalii ho,
aarzuu ho to aakhrii sii ho.

main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.

subah patto'N pe os kii boo'Nde
raat jhiilo'N me'N chaa'Ndnii sii ho.

mai'N "ufaq" aik adhpakaa shaair,
huu-ba-huu tum to shaairii sii ho.
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 01:42:16 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoobsoorat

paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho.
zindagii ho to zindagii sii ho.

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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 01:46:20 PM »
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So Cute.
############### GHAZAL ####################

paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho.
zindagii ho to zindagii sii ho.

justajuu ho agar to pahalii ho,
aarzuu ho to aakhrii sii ho.

main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.

subah patto'N pe os kii boo'Nde
raat jhiilo'N me'N chaa'Ndnii sii ho.

mai'N "ufaq" aik adhpakaa shaair,
huu-ba-huu tum to shaairii sii ho.
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«Reply #3 on: September 11, 2013, 02:34:37 PM »
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Congrats for an awesome gazal sply the last sher
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2013, 02:41:04 PM »
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main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.

WAAH WAAH UFAQ LAJAWAAB LIKHA HAI
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2013, 02:41:42 PM »
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############### GHAZAL ####################

paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho.
zindagii ho to zindagii sii ho.

justajuu ho agar to pahalii ho,
aarzuu ho to aakhrii sii ho.

main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.

subah patto'N pe os kii boo'Nde
raat jhiilo'N me'N chaa'Ndnii sii ho.

mai'N "ufaq" aik adhpakaa shaair,
huu-ba-huu tum to shaairii sii ho.


Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Ufaq Ji...

lajawaab peshkash................


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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2013, 02:49:03 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 11, 2013, 03:47:59 PM »
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kya baat hai...
justajuu ho agar to pahalii ho,
aarzuu ho to aakhrii sii ho.

main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.
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«Reply #8 on: September 11, 2013, 04:04:06 PM »
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bahut khoob ufaq saheb
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«Reply #9 on: September 11, 2013, 07:01:12 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah ufaq ji..bahut hi pyaari ghazal se nawaza hai aapne.. sabhi ashaar bahut bahut bahut khoob hai.. mujhe aapki yeh kalaam bahut pasand aayi..

justajuu ho agar to pahalii ho,
aarzuu ho to aakhrii sii ho.

main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.

mai'N "ufaq" aik adhpakaa shaair,
huu-ba-huu tum to shaairii sii ho.
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Behadd Khoobsurat aur Bahut Pyaari aapki yeh ghazal, 1000'o Daad qubool farmaiye.
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2013, 09:26:02 PM »
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Welcome back Ufaq ji ... aur waah kya shaandaar wapsi hai .... Exquisite creation ... Naaz o Ada o andaaz o ehsaas labrez ghazal .... Aur saath mein makhmali bayaan ... Dheron dheron daad

uote author=ufaq link=topic=108606.msg1415342#msg1415342 date=1378906531]
############### GHAZAL ####################

paas hokar bhii ajnabii sii ho.
zindagii ho to zindagii sii ho.

justajuu ho agar to pahalii ho,
aarzuu ho to aakhrii sii ho.

main'N charaagho'N tale a'Ndheraa hu
tum charaagho'N me'N roshanii sii ho.

subah patto'N pe os kii boo'Nde
raat jhiilo'N me'N chaa'Ndnii sii ho.

mai'N "ufaq" aik adhpakaa shaair,
huu-ba-huu tum to shaairii sii ho.
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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2013, 10:07:22 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Welcome back Ufaq jee, nihayat hi khoobsoorat ghazal se nawaaza hai aapne bazm ko, dil khush ho gaya padh ke. YuN hi likhte rahiye aur aate rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: September 12, 2013, 05:41:57 PM »
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waah waaah kya baat hai ufaq ji.. behad khubsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne.. Usual Smile

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