Ibadat ki nazar...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 24, 2011, 05:31:43 PM
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Maikhane mein rakhi sharab ki tarah,
pani k behte sailab ki tarah,

merri ruh mein utar gye ho,
lahu ban jism mein bikhar gye ho,

mhbt mein kisi rubab ki tarah,
sitaro k beech aftab ki tarah,

sanso mein tum bhar gye ho,
ban merra dil jigar gye ho,

falak k us mahtab ki tarah,
nigaho mein kisi khwab ki tarah,

tum hi tum nikhar gye ho,
merri adao mein sanwar gye ho,

baagiche mein mehekte gulab ki tarh,
gul k us shadaab ki tarah,

mujhe apna diwana kar gye ho,
tum ban merre humsafar gye ho,

parde mein chhupe hijaab ki tarah,
adab se kiye adaab ki tarah,

mujhme kahiin theher gye ho,
ibadat ki ban nazar gye ho.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 06:32:52 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 07:02:43 PM »
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Lovely, geet
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 07:48:49 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: February 25, 2011, 08:53:48 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
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«Reply #5 on: February 25, 2011, 02:58:02 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya rahiim,rishi ji,diya ji n priya ji...
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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2011, 11:00:51 AM »
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Ap se ek farmaish hai geet ji agar ap puri kar sake to mujhe boht khushi hogi..apke reply k baad bataungi..
With best wishes
Diya
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2011, 02:52:36 PM »
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Quote from: Rooh-e-ibadat on February 26, 2011, 11:00:51 AM
Ap se ek farmaish hai geet ji agar ap puri kar sake to mujhe boht khushi hogi..apke reply k baad bataungi..
With best wishes
Diya




Ji kahiye diya ji kya farmaish hai apki merre bus mein hua tou zarur poori karungi...
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2011, 01:48:10 PM »
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Geet ji im in love with a guy, uska naam fahim hai, agle mahine use aur mujhe ek saal ho jayega is khubsurat rishte mein aur boht jald shaadi bhi hai hamari, meri guzarish thi k agar is ek saal pura hone ke awsar par ap mere liye 4 line mhbt bhari likh de jo mai fahim ko bhej saku to mai apki shukar guzaar rahungi.
Diya
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2011, 03:15:58 PM »
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Quote from: Rooh-e-ibadat on February 27, 2011, 01:48:10 PM
Geet ji im in love with a guy, uska naam fahim hai, agle mahine use aur mujhe ek saal ho jayega is khubsurat rishte mein aur boht jald shaadi bhi hai hamari, meri guzarish thi k agar is ek saal pura hone ke awsar par ap mere liye 4 line mhbt bhari likh de jo mai fahim ko bhej saku to mai apki shukar guzaar rahungi.
Diya
Geet di apki farmaish insh'Allah puri karengi..
Filhal apne mohobat kay 4 lines ki baat ki toh dil woh
lines kehne laga jo kisi kay liye maine kabhi likhi aur aj
woh 4 chaar lines bas 4 lines hi hai.. tearyeyed

Aj ka dinn ek nayapan laya hai,
Kal ki tarha khud ko tanha nahin paya hai,
Ab toh zindagi muskurati rahegi sada 'Rahim',
Kyun ki Khuda ne Jannat se mere liye ek pari ko bhijwaya hai..!
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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2011, 04:40:28 PM »
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Quote from: Rooh-e-ibadat on February 27, 2011, 01:48:10 PM
Geet ji im in love with a guy, uska naam fahim hai, agle mahine use aur mujhe ek saal ho jayega is khubsurat rishte mein aur boht jald shaadi bhi hai hamari, meri guzarish thi k agar is ek saal pura hone ke awsar par ap mere liye 4 line mhbt bhari likh de jo mai fahim ko bhej saku to mai apki shukar guzaar rahungi.
Diya

Ji bus itni si baat main zarur apke liye ek pyari si kavita likh dungi...Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 27, 2011, 05:49:00 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 27, 2011, 03:15:58 PM
Geet di apki farmaish insh'Allah puri karengi..
Filhal apne mohobat kay 4 lines ki baat ki toh dil woh
lines kehne laga jo kisi kay liye maine kabhi likhi aur aj
woh 4 chaar lines bas 4 lines hi hai.. tearyeyed

Aj ka dinn ek nayapan laya hai,
Kal ki tarha khud ko tanha nahin paya hai,
Ab toh zindagi muskurati rahegi sada 'Rahim',
Kyun ki Khuda ne Jannat se mere liye ek pari ko bhijwaya hai..!

Waah rahiim bahut khoob dear thnx i hope diya ji ko tumhare mhbt k alfaz pasand ayenge...
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«Reply #12 on: February 27, 2011, 05:50:37 PM »
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ek flow me padhte chali gai tumhari post geet......aur pata hi na chala k kb khtm hui......
excellent words and feelings...tooo good....
aur ye mat sochna tumhari dant khakar ye reply dia hai...samjhi...wakai me bht khrab mud me thodasa freshness feel hua ye post padhkar...thnx re
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«Reply #13 on: February 27, 2011, 05:59:20 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on February 27, 2011, 05:50:37 PM
ek flow me padhte chali gai tumhari post geet......aur pata hi na chala k kb khtm hui......
excellent words and feelings...tooo good....
aur ye mat sochna tumhari dant khakar ye reply dia hai...samjhi...wakai me bht khrab mud me thodasa freshness feel hua ye post padhkar...thnx re

Apna waqt dene k liye shukriya kasak ji...
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«Reply #14 on: February 27, 2011, 06:07:15 PM »
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Ek aur mast poem Geet-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tum jaane kya mere ho gaye ho
Mere Raat aur Din tum ho gaye ho

Kya kahu main tumse tum mere kya ho
Meri jeevan naiyaa k patvaar ban gaye ho






Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 24, 2011, 05:31:43 PM



Maikhane mein rakhi sharab ki tarah,
pani k behte sailab ki tarah,

merri ruh mein utar gye ho,
lahu ban jism mein bikhar gye ho,

mhbt mein kisi rubab ki tarah,
sitaro k beech aftab ki tarah,

sanso mein tum bhar gye ho,
ban merra dil jigar gye ho,

falak k us mahtab ki tarah,
nigaho mein kisi khwab ki tarah,

tum hi tum nikhar gye ho,
merri adao mein sanwar gye ho,

baagiche mein mehekte gulab ki tarh,
gul k us shadaab ki tarah,

mujhe apna diwana kar gye ho,
tum ban merre humsafar gye ho,

parde mein chhupe hijaab ki tarah,
adab se kiye adaab ki tarah,

mujhme kahiin theher gye ho,
ibadat ki ban nazar gye ho.........
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