Ijazat naa rahi...

by brokenbyluv on August 19, 2010, 08:10:40 PM
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Ab zindgi se sirrf kuch umeede baaki hai,
tujhe pane k baad koi shikayat naa rahi,

jane kaun si dargah mein kubul hui thi merri dua,
jo terre merre darmiya k har ehsas ki koi kefiyat naa rahi,

jo gharonda terri maujudgi se har pal jhilmilata tha,
terre jane k baad uski pehle jaisi hesiyat naa rahi,

har lamha umadte jazbaato ko jab tune pyar se chhua,
merre armaano ko tadpati aur koi hasrat naa rahi,

tujhe kuch iss kadar chaha hai merre dil ne merre ajnabi..
ki terre baad iss dil mein kisi aur k aane ki ijazat naa rahi.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 08:32:02 PM »
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Aadaab Janab.....
Khayaal achche hai.... kuch expression's uljhe huye se hai.. per kafi achche lage aapke khayaal...
Keep it up..
 
Woh chahate the jaise hume hum waise ho gaye
Itna badal gaye ke khud apni shanakhat na rahi
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2010, 08:41:37 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji..aur do line bahut khoob likhi hai apne....
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2010, 04:36:22 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     BROKENBYLUV JI....

TUJHKO PAANE KI HI TAMANNA KI THI
TUJHKO PAANE KE BAAD KOI HASRAT NA THI
TERE JAANE KE BAAD TERE YAADON KE SAHARE JEETI RAHI
TERI JAGAH KISI AURKO AANE KI IJAZAT NA RAHI....
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2010, 09:55:17 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2010, 06:15:13 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya cara ji n kapil ji n cara ji nice lines....
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2010, 01:09:14 PM »
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Very Nice poetry.... Very Nice Creation... !
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2010, 01:16:15 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Geet Ji.. Chaahat Aur Mohabbat Bhare Lamhaaton Ko Behad Hi Khubsoorati ke Saath Lafzon Me Utaara hai aapne.. Har ek Jumla Bahut hi Lajawab tha.. Applause Applause

Daaaaad Khubool Karen Din Se..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2010, 01:19:18 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya anshu ji aur mann ji...
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2010, 04:02:58 PM »
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bht hi pyari gazal geet ji....
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«Reply #10 on: September 02, 2010, 07:15:48 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji...
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2010, 02:38:17 PM »
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very nice.........keep it up


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«Reply #12 on: September 04, 2010, 02:55:07 PM »
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Bhaut Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Ehsaas Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2010, 03:17:09 PM »
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aadab ,

mahutrama bahoth khoob .. dad khubol karen..


dua go

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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2010, 02:01:08 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji,aslam ji n qadeer ji...
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