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tabassum shakeel
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ik din jab tumne ye kaha tha
main tumko achhi lagti hun
us din se main apne aap ko
bhi kuchh achchi lagti hun
usase pahle socha nahii tha
ki main kaise lagti hun
tumne kaha tha rang gulabi
mujh par alag hi lagta hai
usake baad se rang gulbi
aksar main pahnati hun
choodi tumko pasand bahut hai
isiliye pahnati hun
inki khan khan se tum khush ho
main bas tumko takti hun
khud ko dekha nazar se teri
tab hi kuchh main achchi lagi
verna socha kabhi nahi tha
ki main kaise lagti hun
tum mujhko bas jaise ho
vaise hi achche lagte ho
khoi khoi aankhen tumhari
unme main kho jaati hun
laparvah si hansi tumhari
mujhko himmat deti hai
ek nazar jo mujhko dekho
phool si main khil jaati hun
aur kya kya main batalaun
kyon tum mujhko achche lagte ho
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2006, 02:10:52 PM » |
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very nice tabassum ji...........
teri choodiyi ki khan khan se,teri payal ki chan chan se
sunke ruh machal jaati hai hai meri tez raftaar dhadkan se
................@fahi@.................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2006, 02:18:38 PM » |
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thanx fahi and veri nice you wrote
har khan khan bas usake liye hai
har dhadkan bhi usake liye hai
saanse usko chhune ko hi
shayed chalti rahti hain...................
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2006, 02:26:31 PM » |
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aap acha likhti hai .....main tu bus yu hi......
nice work.......
dil mera aaj dhadak raha badi joro se
zaroor kahi choodiya khanki hongii unki
.................@fahi@.................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2006, 02:52:52 PM » |
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nice one fahi
hamari chudiyan khanktin hain sirf unke liye
ye dil bhi unko hi har pal bas yaad karta hai
vo door hain meri nazaaron se to koi baat nahi
mujhe yaqeen hai main unke dil me rahti hun
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«Reply #5 on: June 27, 2006, 03:23:50 PM » |
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Kya baat hai wakayi main bahut accha likhahai Tabassum ji.....and fahi
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«Reply #7 on: June 27, 2006, 04:48:29 PM » |
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bahut khub tabassum ........and fahi u are alwyas good
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TOUCHY
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«Reply #8 on: June 27, 2006, 09:46:32 PM » |
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ik din jab tumne ye kaha tha
main tumko achhi lagti hun
us din se main apne aap ko
bhi kuchh achchi lagti hun
usase pahle socha nahii tha
ki main kaise lagti hun
tumne kaha tha rang gulabi
mujh par alag hi lagta hai
usake baad se rang gulbi
aksar main pahnati hun
choodi tumko pasand bahut hai
isiliye pahnati hun
inki khan khan se tum khush ho
main bas tumko takti hun
khud ko dekha nazar se teri
tab hi kuchh main achchi lagi
verna socha kabhi nahi tha
ki main kaise lagti hun
tum mujhko bas jaise ho
vaise hi achche lagte ho
khoi khoi aankhen tumhari
unme main kho jaati hun
laparvah si hansi tumhari
mujhko himmat deti hai
ek nazar jo mujhko dekho
phool si main khil jaati hun
aur kya kya main batalaun
kyon tum mujhko achche lagte ho Bahut Khoob sis!!!! |
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #9 on: June 28, 2006, 05:34:12 AM » |
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sukriya gaurav bhai ,ranjana ji....& tabassum ji ...again nice 1..........
is bheegi bheegi raat mai,pehli barsaat mai
yaad aa rahe hai woh din ,jab tum kaha karti thi
jayenge hum kahi chand sitaro ke paar
ek aise sunder jahan mai
ishq ke aashiyaa mai
jaha sirf tum aur main honge
aur hongi pyaar ki batein
na koi dukh na koi ranzish,na hi hongi dard ki aahatein....
sirf tum main aur chandni raatein....ishq mai madhosh chandni raatein..........!!!!!!!!!!
...................@fahi@....................
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«Reply #10 on: June 28, 2006, 05:49:52 AM » |
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bahoot khoob Tabu and Fahi
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #11 on: June 28, 2006, 01:55:30 PM » |
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ik din jab tumne ye kaha tha
main tumko achhi lagti hun
us din se main apne aap ko
bhi kuchh achchi lagti hun
usase pahle socha nahii tha
ki main kaise lagti hun
tumne kaha tha rang gulabi
mujh par alag hi lagta hai
usake baad se rang gulbi
aksar main pahnati hun
choodi tumko pasand bahut hai
isiliye pahnati hun
inki khan khan se tum khush ho
main bas tumko takti hun
khud ko dekha nazar se teri
tab hi kuchh main achchi lagi
verna socha kabhi nahi tha
ki main kaise lagti hun
tum mujhko bas jaise ho
vaise hi achche lagte ho
khoi khoi aankhen tumhari
unme main kho jaati hun
laparvah si hansi tumhari
mujhko himmat deti hai
ek nazar jo mujhko dekho
phool si main khil jaati hun
aur kya kya main batalaun
kyon tum mujhko achche lagte ho Bahut Khoob sis!!!! thanx a lot bro tume padha achcha laga |
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #12 on: June 28, 2006, 01:58:34 PM » |
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Kya baat hai wakayi main bahut accha likhahai Tabassum ji.....and fahi thanks a lot bs ji |
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«Reply #13 on: June 30, 2006, 04:32:03 AM » |
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very nice all
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2006, 04:53:07 AM » |
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thanx a lot sd ji
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