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by nirala on May 28, 2011, 09:14:07 AM
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ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga
dard tere mita kar mai
palkon par bithaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

jara sa kadam badha apni
kadam se kadam mila lunga
jo thak jaye tu jo kahin
baanho me tujhko uthaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

gar han kah de jo ek baar
saara jahan bhula dunga
teri ek muskurahat ko
saari khushiyan lutaa dunga

tujhe apna bana lunga
ik sapna saja lunga

““
uff…khumaar par likhna bhi mere bas ka nahi
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2011, 09:18:35 AM »
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ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga
dard tere mita kar mai
palkon par bithaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

jara sa kadam badha apni
kadam se kadam mila lunga
jo thak jaye tu jo kahin
baanho me tujhko uthaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

gar han kah de jo ek baar
saara jahan bhula dunga
teri ek muskurahat ko
saari khushiyan lutaa dunga

tujhe apna bana lunga
ik sapna saja lunga

““
uff…khumaar par likhna bhi mere bas ka nahi



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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2011, 09:21:18 AM »
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NICE
Tumne to gairo ko bhi apna bana liya
ek hum hai jo apno ko apna na bana sake  (NM)
ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga
dard tere mita kar mai
palkon par bithaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

jara sa kadam badha apni
kadam se kadam mila lunga
jo thak jaye tu jo kahin
baanho me tujhko uthaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

gar han kah de jo ek baar
saara jahan bhula dunga
teri ek muskurahat ko
saari khushiyan lutaa dunga

tujhe apna bana lunga
ik sapna saja lunga

““
uff…khumaar par likhna bhi mere bas ka nahi

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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2011, 11:57:44 AM »
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Dil me sajaya tha ..khwaboon ki tarah
apni zuban banaya tha lafzon ki tarah
teri hi talab me na soya main raat din
Z.akh.M tune b dil tod diya gairon ki tarah
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«Reply #4 on: May 28, 2011, 12:11:45 PM »
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nice nirala ji Applause
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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2011, 12:17:11 PM »
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achha likha hai.
Shabdo ko bahut achhi tarah sajaya hai aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2011, 12:34:01 PM »
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Lo ji itna khubsurat likha bhi aur keh rahe ho ki khumar pe likhne merre bus ka nhi...
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«Reply #7 on: May 29, 2011, 03:32:41 PM »
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khoob. khoob.khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanx re…
mere masti ko pasand krne ke lie thanx ab Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: May 29, 2011, 03:34:40 PM »
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NICE
Tumne to gairo ko bhi apna bana liya
ek hum hai jo apno ko apna na bana sake  (NM)
thanx manoj and nice sharing by u
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«Reply #9 on: May 29, 2011, 06:06:09 PM »
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Muhabbat Se Bharpur Aapki Yeh Peshkash
Humey Bahut Pasand Aayai Nirala Ji
Bahut Achhey...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

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sukriya shihab ji…
mere is pagalpanti ko sarahne ke lie behad sukria ji…
khus rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: May 29, 2011, 06:11:01 PM »
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Good poem Neeeraaalaaajeeeeeeeee...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause




ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga
dard tere mita kar mai
palkon par bithaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

jara sa kadam badha apni
kadam se kadam mila lunga
jo thak jaye tu jo kahin
baanho me tujhko uthaa lunga

ik sapna saja lunga
tujhe apna bana lunga

gar han kah de jo ek baar
saara jahan bhula dunga
teri ek muskurahat ko
saari khushiyan lutaa dunga

tujhe apna bana lunga
ik sapna saja lunga

““
uff…khumaar par likhna bhi mere bas ka nahi

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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2011, 06:28:29 PM »
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Dil me sajaya tha ..khwaboon ki tarah
apni zuban banaya tha lafzon ki tarah
teri hi talab me na soya main raat din
Z.akh.M tune b dil tod diya gairon ki tarah
bht khoob ji
thanx
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«Reply #12 on: May 30, 2011, 08:43:08 AM »
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thanx kamal
nice nirala ji Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 30, 2011, 08:45:51 AM »
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veri naaaaice nirala ji. keep writing

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«Reply #14 on: May 30, 2011, 08:53:08 AM »
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achha likha hai.
Shabdo ko bahut achhi tarah sajaya hai aapne.
thanx ji
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