Ikrar-e-mhbt...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on December 08, 2010, 02:59:54 PM
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Ho kar khafa vo mujhse door jane laga tha,
kar k ikrar-e-mhbt maine unki narazgi mita di,

jo baat ek saal se dabi thi merre sine mein,
vo ho kar bebak maine use bata di,

aaj jab maine apni mhbt ka izhaar kiya,
tou sharm se merre ajnabi ki nigahe jhuk gyi,

awaaz uski kuch sehem si gyi,
aur sanse uski ek pal ko ghabra k ruk gyi,

uski khushi ka thikana na tha,
merre jazbaat k rang bhi ek arse baad khil gye,

bhula k har bandhish aur dard ka mausam,
ek bar phir se hamare dil mil gye,

har din uske saaye mein aur har raat uski baaho mein guzarna chahti hu,
paa k uski mhbt ka aasma main apni zindgi sanwarna chahti hu.........
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2010, 03:02:56 PM »
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hmmm bahut achhe geet ji badhiya hai dil ka ehsaas aapka...

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2010, 03:03:32 PM »
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Wah! Geet Ji
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2010, 03:08:26 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya intezar ji aur rajesh ji..maine apni rachna mein kuch tabdiliye ki hai kripya ek baar zara gaur kar le..shukriya ji...
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2010, 05:35:51 PM »
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ji bilkul Geet ji is baar poem ki laiy aur khubsurat kar di aapne... bahut badhiya...

Intezar !
Bahut bahut shukriya intezar ji aur rajesh ji..maine apni rachna mein kuch tabdiliye ki hai kripya ek baar zara gaur kar le..shukriya ji...
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2010, 05:46:05 PM »
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Brokenbyluv ji---
ye itni jaldi kyun khatam ho gaya--mujhe or padhna tha..
Bahut khubsurat hai Geeta ji--
direct dil se likhti ho aap.
Bas ek hi baat kahunga iss geet par---Aameen
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2010, 03:33:34 AM »
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ji bilkul Geet ji is baar poem ki laiy aur khubsurat kar di aapne... bahut badhiya...

Intezar !
Shukriya intezaar ji..Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2010, 03:34:28 AM »
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Brokenbyluv ji---
ye itni jaldi kyun khatam ho gaya--mujhe or padhna tha..
Bahut khubsurat hai Geeta ji--
direct dil se likhti ho aap.
Bas ek hi baat kahunga iss geet par---Aameen
Bahut bahut shukriya killbill ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2010, 03:18:15 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji..apki duao ka bhi tahe dil se shukriya...maaf kijiyega main abhi unse sirrf izhaar kiya hai hamare milan mein tou abhi bahut lamba arsa baaki hai...bus jo kehna chahti thi keh diya na kehti tou taa umar afsos rehta ki itne pyare shakhs se vo nhi keh paayi jo kehna chahti thi...shukriya apka ek baar phir se...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: December 10, 2010, 08:11:52 AM »
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Wah Geet Ji Bahut Bahut Khooooooooob..... Aapka Yeh Iqraar-e-Mohabbat waqai Behad Khubsoorat Hai....!!! Aakhiri Jumla to such me jaan hi le gaya..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Dil Se Daaad Hi Daad...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #10 on: December 10, 2010, 08:45:12 AM »
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wowww ab ye to partyy wql bat hai geet dii..

chalo lines par aate he..

bade achhe shabd likhe he apne..

ek naya rang he ..thodi masti..thoda pyaar
sabse jyada pyaar ka khumaar..

dher saari daaad~

haan wo pic wali ladki cute he...hahahaah
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«Reply #11 on: December 10, 2010, 05:03:51 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya mann ji n abhi..abhi naughty ho bahut tum...sudhar jao...anywayz thnx..Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 29, 2011, 07:29:44 AM »
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