ILTIJAH

by shab on January 10, 2010, 08:19:16 PM

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PAAS AAO EK ILTIJAH SUNLO
USKE JIWAN ME KHUSHIYO KA BASERA KARDE
EK TUMHI KO KHUD SE MAANGI HU,
JAB BHI KOI DUA MAANGI SUNLO,
IBTIDA ISHK KI HO TUMSA,
TUMKO CHAHAT KI IMTEHA SUNLO,
BIN TERE JI NAHI SAKUNGI MAI,
LAUT AAO MERE SADAA SUNLO,
DEKHLO ZINDAGI ADHURI HAI,
NA RAHO AUR AB JUDA SUNLO....


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Re: ILTIJAH

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Re: ILTIJAH

«Reply #2 on: January 10, 2010, 08:28:08 PM »

SHUKRIYA...


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Re: ILTIJAH

«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2010, 01:24:58 AM »

Quote from: shab on January 10, 2010, 08:19:16 PM

Bahut accha likha hai aapne shab jee. aapka ye shayri padkar ek gana yad aya. "Pass aao zara tabiyat beheljayegi.." Accha laga aapko padkar.


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Re: ILTIJAH

«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2010, 03:27:07 AM »

wah bohot khoob likha hai aap ne shab Clapping Smiley


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shab

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Re: ILTIJAH

«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2010, 04:40:47 AM »

shukriya Zakram aur Sonia ji


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Re: ILTIJAH

«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2010, 06:11:21 AM »

Wah Shab ji bahut khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. Behr ke hisaab kahin kahin thoda farq nazar aaya. Maine kuchh corrections kiye hain . Shayad aapko ye tarmeem achhi lage.

PAAS AAO YE ILTIJA SUN LO
KYA MERE DIL MEIN HAI ZARA SUN LO
EK TUMHI KO KHUDA SE MAANGA HAI
JAB BHI MAANGI KOI DUA, SUN LO
IBTIDA ISHQ KI TUMHI SE HAI
TUM HO CHAHAT KI INTEHA, SUN LO
BIN TERE JI NAHI SAKUNGI MAIN
LAUT AAO MERI SADAA SUN LO
DEKH LO ZINDAGI ADHURI HAI
NA RAHO AUR AB JUDA, SUN LO