iltiza.....

by punam on March 19, 2008, 02:29:26 PM
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punam
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Aaj kuch aisa karde
yeh rab mujhe unse mila de

udaas bebas iss zindagi me
phir se koi khwaab saja de

veeran andheri rah pe
mujhe kahi ek chirag toh dikha de

yeh khuda Aaj kuch aisa kar de
meri hath ki lakiron me uska naam likh de...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2008, 02:36:12 PM »
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Punam bohat acha likhe hai dear..Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2008, 03:14:37 PM »
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Nice one Punam...
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2008, 03:18:49 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam!! bahoot hi bhawnao se bharpoor likha hai!!!
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2008, 06:24:08 AM »
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Thanx Honey di...Talat di and pooja di..
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2008, 06:29:01 AM »
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waah punam bahoot hi sunder.....

Humm bhi kis kader dewaane nikle
Jo purane jakhm sehlaane nikle
jise mile the hum ajnabi ki tarah
woh dost hammare purane nikle

Harash
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2008, 05:45:08 PM »
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Thanx Harsh ji...bahot khoob likha aap ne..
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punam
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2008, 05:45:31 PM »
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Na raaton ko nind..na din ko chain..
tadapta hai dil jis ke liye
yeh rab kuch aisa karde
mujhe usse milade...

toofanon k caravan dil mein samaye
bhatak rahe kadam edhar udhar
yeh khuda mujhe sahi raha dikha de
mujhe untak pahancha de...

kat rahi hai yeh raten aahen bhar bhar ke
ab reha nahi jata tanha
mere dil ka sada un tak pahncha de
mujhe unse milade...
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: March 20, 2008, 05:55:12 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam and Harsh ji!!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2008, 05:58:27 PM »
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Ek achhi peshkash punam......lekin rawaanagi ki kami mehsoos hui....koshish kerta hooN bina ahsaas change hue...use poori ker sakooN.....

Na raaton ko nind..na din ko chain..
tadapta hai dil jis ke liye bechain
yeh rab kuch aisa karde usse milade...
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2008, 05:59:16 PM »
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Shukriyaa^h Pooja ji....
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