Internet Love

by khalidrawat on August 02, 2008, 07:18:50 AM
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E-mail tujhe rooz jo kerta tha wo mai.N tha
Jo shakhs tere hijr mai.N jalta that wo mai.N tha

Ratoo.N ki udaasi mai.N kisi saye ki manind
Google pe tujhe search jo kerta tha wo mai.N tha

Chatting ke liye tujh se aye gumnaam hasina
Betaab messanger pe jo phirta tha wo mai.N tha

Na tujh ko khaber the na zamane ko yaqee.N tha
Be tarha tujhe piyaar jo kerta tha wo mai.N tha

Ashkoo.N se kabhi khon-e-jigar se kabhi dil se
Rangee.N jo tere husn ko rakhta tha wo mai.N tha

Tujh ko ye khaber he na hue sham-e-faroozaa.N
Parwana tere lo mai.N jo jalta tha wo mai.N tha

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2008, 07:26:15 AM »
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Waah Waah... Masha-Allah... Applause

Bahut khoob.. Bahut alag andaaz aur soch..
Kamaal likha hai aapne Khalid J.Rawat ji..
Yun hi likhte rahiyega...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2008, 08:02:36 AM »
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title padh-kar andaaza tha ki hogi koi ghazal..thodi funny si...lekin jab padha..to kahna padega...khalid sahab...bahoot badiya tareeke se likha hai aapne...bahoot behtreen....kamal ki soch aur shabdon ka satik mishran...aane wale yug me birha ke geet ab kuch aise hi hua karenge shayad...21vin sadi ki ghazal hai ye..badhai.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2008, 08:11:10 AM »
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Wow.... Bahut achha likha hai Khalid J.Rawat ji....  Keep it up..
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2008, 09:22:23 AM »
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rawat  ji bahot achcha likha hai .....
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«Reply #5 on: August 02, 2008, 02:53:21 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2008, 02:56:04 PM »
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Internet Ka Sath To Modam Hi Deata Hai,
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2008, 02:59:03 PM »
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Quote from: rehaan on August 02, 2008, 02:53:21 PM
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«Reply #8 on: August 02, 2008, 03:00:33 PM »
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wow bahoot khoob khalidrawat
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«Reply #9 on: August 02, 2008, 03:43:43 PM »
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Ashkoo.N se kabhi khon-e-jigar se kabhi dil se
Rangee.N jo tere husn ko rakhta tha wo mai.N tha

Kahna padega "aap ke yeh post kamaal hai, bahut hi dilchasp aur haqiqat se labrez."
Khalid Saahib bahut badhiya, zabardast. -
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2008, 04:14:43 PM »
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Ratoo.N ki udaasi mai.N kisi saye ki manind
Google pe tujhe search jo kerta tha wo mai.N tha

Bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne Khalid ji.
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2008, 05:12:27 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on August 02, 2008, 07:26:15 AM
Waah Waah... Masha-Allah... Applause

Bahut khoob.. Bahut alag andaaz aur soch..
Kamaal likha hai aapne Khalid J.Rawat ji..
Yun hi likhte rahiyega...  Thumbs UP

bohut shukriya
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2008, 05:15:20 AM »
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title padh-kar andaaza tha ki hogi koi ghazal..thodi funny si...lekin jab padha..to kahna padega...khalid sahab...bahoot badiya tareeke se likha hai aapne...bahoot behtreen....kamal ki soch aur shabdon ka satik mishran...aane wale yug me birha ke geet ab kuch aise hi hua karenge shayad...21vin sadi ki ghazal hai ye..badhai.. Applause Applause

bohut shukriya janab,
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«Reply #13 on: August 05, 2008, 05:18:14 AM »
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Quote from: natural on August 02, 2008, 08:11:10 AM
Wow.... Bahut achha likha hai Khalid J.Rawat ji....  Keep it up..

bohut shukriya rehan sahib,
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«Reply #14 on: August 05, 2008, 05:19:52 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on August 02, 2008, 03:00:33 PM
wow bahoot khoob khalidrawat

bohut shukriya
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