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Anushka
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chaand maddham hai aasmaan chup hai
niind kii god men jahaan chup hai
Meri subhau ko teri shaamo ka intezaar hai...
aduuri vaadii men duudhiyaa baadaal
jhuk ke parbatko pyaar karate hain
dil men naakaam hasaraten lekar
ham teraa intazaar karate hain
Meri shamamo ko teri subhaa ka intezaar hai...
in bahaaron ke saaye men aa jaa
phir mohabbat javaan rahe na rahe
zindagii tere naa-muraadon par
kal talak meharabaan rahe na rahe
Meri ratoon ko teray khawabo ka intezaar hai...
roz kii tarah aaj bhii taare
subah kii gard men na kho jaayen
aa tere Gam men jaagatii aankhen
kam se kam ek raat so jaayen
Meri neendo ko teri baahon ka intezar hai...
chaand maddham hai aasmaan chup hai
nind kii god men jahaan chup hai
Ek baar ajaa apni jhelak dikhlaja..
Ke meri ankho ko teri nazar ka intezaar hai...
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #1 on: May 14, 2006, 04:56:15 AM » |
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Very good Anushka..Appreciate your efforts....
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Anushka
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«Reply #2 on: May 14, 2006, 04:59:56 AM » |
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Shukriya shayardildarji....
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«Reply #3 on: May 14, 2006, 05:39:36 AM » |
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Awesome Anushka! Mai to kho Gaya Isko padhtey padhtey :smile:
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #4 on: May 14, 2006, 05:44:31 AM » |
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Good good..Very good..Kho jao tum.. Awesome Anushka! Mai to kho Gaya Isko padhtey padhtey :smile: |
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Anushka
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«Reply #5 on: May 14, 2006, 05:45:46 AM » |
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Nibhayji.... aapnay aap ko sembhalay please....... thx for the compliments
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«Reply #6 on: May 14, 2006, 05:46:18 AM » |
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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2006, 06:24:50 AM » |
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adbhut anush... dil bhar aaya...
aankhon mein teri aagaman ka intezar hain
in adharon ko teri chumban ka...
dil ko teri dhadkan se milan ka intezar hain
in baahon ko teri aalingan ka...
kaanon ko teri meethi baaton ka intezar hain
aur teri kadamon ke aawaaz ka...
saanson ko teri khushboo ka intezar hain
aur indriyon ko sparsh romanchan ka...
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2006, 06:30:32 AM » |
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roz kii tarah aaj bhii taare
subah kii gard men na kho jaayen
aa tere Gam men jaagatii aankhen
kam se kam ek raat so jaayen
Meri neendo ko teri baahon ka intezar hai...
bahut khub Anushka............
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nirbhay
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2006, 07:17:11 AM » |
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Good good..Very good..Kho jao tum.. Nibhayji.... aapnay aap ko sembhalay please....... thx for the compliments Kya karun kambakht IsQ ka Nasha hii aaisa hai! Nashe mein Khumar ke Galaa kar Gira dena Aasaan hai SaaQi
Main too uss dinn ke intezar mein hoon ke tum girtey hue ko sath do SaaQi :wink: |
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Anushka
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«Reply #10 on: May 14, 2006, 07:55:23 AM » |
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Thank you ranjanaji.... most apprecited.
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2006, 08:03:24 AM » |
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great effort anushka.i really loved the fourth stanza.roz ki tarah...
u have poured in lot of pain in ur words.keep going.
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Anushka
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2006, 08:20:01 AM » |
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Shukriya majidji, ranjanaji .. and all
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«Reply #13 on: May 14, 2006, 08:30:14 AM » |
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hmmm good anushka
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #14 on: May 15, 2006, 01:52:29 AM » |
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Anushka...Once again similar lines from the following website:
http://www.hindilyrix.com/songs/get_song_Chaand%20Madhhaam%20Hai.html....
No hard feelings...Just try to give credit to the rite person  chaand maddham hai aasmaan chup hai
niind kii god men jahaan chup hai
Meri subhau ko teri shaamo ka intezaar hai...
aduuri vaadii men duudhiyaa baadaal
jhuk ke parbatko pyaar karate hain
dil men naakaam hasaraten lekar
ham teraa intazaar karate hain
Meri shamamo ko teri subhaa ka intezaar hai...
in bahaaron ke saaye men aa jaa
phir mohabbat javaan rahe na rahe
zindagii tere naa-muraadon par
kal talak meharabaan rahe na rahe
Meri ratoon ko teray khawabo ka intezaar hai...
roz kii tarah aaj bhii taare
subah kii gard men na kho jaayen
aa tere Gam men jaagatii aankhen
kam se kam ek raat so jaayen
Meri neendo ko teri baahon ka intezar hai...
chaand maddham hai aasmaan chup hai
nind kii god men jahaan chup hai
Ek baar ajaa apni jhelak dikhlaja..
Ke meri ankho ko teri nazar ka intezaar hai...
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