Intzaar...

by neelgold on March 31, 2010, 10:37:54 PM
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Tumreh intzaar main hum youn nazrain bichae bethe hai
Nazre kya hai hum to apna dil bichae bethe hai
KAbhi to ayonge iss aur bhool se hi sahi
Isse aas pe hum aaj taak apni duniya bhulai bethe hai..
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2010, 10:53:47 PM »
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Bahut achche Neel Ji... bahut achche...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhoole se hi sahi jab unki nazar pad jaayegi,
patjhad me sawan sa asar kar jaayegi,
jinke intezaar me aap nazre bichhayen baithe hain,
unki mohabbat tab asar kar jaayegi....
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2010, 11:00:02 PM »
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good n keep writing.
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«Reply #3 on: March 31, 2010, 11:03:55 PM »
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Kya baat hai kapil ji, bhoot khoob..

Unka jana kuch kyamaat se kum na tha...
Paar unka aana shyd khud kyamat na ho...
Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 10:53:47 PM
Bahut achche Neel Ji... bahut achche...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhoole se hi sahi jab unki nazar pad jaayegi,
patjhad me sawan sa asar kar jaayegi,
jinke intezaar me aap nazre bichhayen baithe hain,
unki mohabbat tab asar kar jaayegi....
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«Reply #4 on: March 31, 2010, 11:05:23 PM »
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Thanx a lot Nazar ji..
I read sum of ur posting ........ relly gud work..
very deep thought.......

Enjoy writing!!!!!!!!!
Quote from: nazar ghouri on March 31, 2010, 11:00:02 PM
good n keep writing.
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«Reply #5 on: March 31, 2010, 11:16:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob Neel Ji...!!! Applause Applause

Qayamat na unka jaana tha na unka aana hoga,
Milan to bas mohabbat ka fasana hoga ...

Quote from: neelgold on March 31, 2010, 11:03:55 PM
Kya baat hai kapil ji, bhoot khoob..

Unka jana kuch kyamaat se kum na tha...
Paar unka aana shyd khud kyamat na ho...
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2010, 05:08:24 AM »
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Bahut achhe Neel ji. Bahut sunder poem likhi hai. Good work.
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2010, 08:45:54 PM »
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Thanx Riyaz ji .... Relly appriciate...
Quote from: riyaz106 on April 01, 2010, 05:08:24 AM
Bahut achhe Neel ji. Bahut sunder poem likhi hai. Good work.
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2010, 09:04:21 PM »
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Fasana to fasna ho gaya aab us main kuch baki reha nahi
Dost Jo tha juda ho gaya aab to dosti main kuch baccha nahi
Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 11:16:04 PM
Bahut khoob Neel Ji...!!! Applause Applause

Qayamat na unka jaana tha na unka aana hoga,
Milan to bas mohabbat ka fasana hoga ...
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2010, 10:56:30 PM »
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Khoob likha aapne... par sach nahi hai.. dosti kabhi khatam nahi hoti Neel ji...!!!

Dosti kabhi khatam nahi hoti, zindagi khatam ho jaati hai,
Saanse saath chhod jaati hain, par dosti yaaad aati hai...

Quote from: neelgold on April 01, 2010, 09:04:21 PM
Fasana to fasna ho gaya aab us main kuch baki reha nahi
Dost Jo tha juda ho gaya aab to dosti main kuch baccha nahi

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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2010, 11:11:17 PM »
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Yeh its true... no commnt on dis...
Quote from: klaskar on April 01, 2010, 10:56:30 PM
Khoob likha aapne... par sach nahi hai.. dosti kabhi khatam nahi hoti Neel ji...!!!

Dosti kabhi khatam nahi hoti, zindagi khatam ho jaati hai,
Saanse saath chhod jaati hain, par dosti yaaad aati hai...
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«Reply #11 on: April 01, 2010, 11:14:08 PM »
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Usual Smile

Quote from: neelgold on April 01, 2010, 11:11:17 PM
Yeh its true... no commnt on dis...
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«Reply #12 on: April 02, 2010, 10:28:06 AM »
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wah wah bahut khoob . icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: April 02, 2010, 08:50:13 PM »
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Quote from: neelgold on March 31, 2010, 10:37:54 PM
Tumreh intzaar main hum youn nazrain bichae bethe hai
Nazre kya hai hum to apna dil bichae bethe hai
KAbhi to ayonge iss aur bhool se hi sahi
Isse aas pe hum aaj taak apni duniya bhulai bethe hai..



Good one Neel Ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 02, 2010, 08:53:46 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on March 31, 2010, 10:53:47 PM
Bahut achche Neel Ji... bahut achche...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bhoole se hi sahi jab unki nazar pad jaayegi,
patjhad me sawan sa asar kar jaayegi,
jinke intezaar me aap nazre bichhayen baithe hain,
unki mohabbat tab asar kar jaayegi....

Nice response Kapil Ji
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