Ishq Ek Aisi Aag Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on April 05, 2011, 09:10:51 AM
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Tere Labon Ko Chuu Loon
Aur Tujhe Mehsoos karoon
Mere Aise Naseeb Kahan Hai!!!!

Jahan Sirf Main Aur Tu Ho
Aur Koi Paas Naa Ho,
Kya Aisa Bhi koi Jahan Hai!!!!

Tujhko Dekhoon,Tujhko Chaahoon,
Tujhko Samjhoon, Tujhko Paaon
Dil Mein Sirf Mohabbat Ke Nishaan Hai!!!

Tere Saanson Ki Garmaahat Se
Jahan Pighle Mera Tan-Mann,
Machalti Tammanayon ka Yeh Karvaan Hai!!!

Tujhko Paalun Mere Aise To Naseeb Nahi,
Par Ishq Ka Nasha,
Inn Ragon Mein Toot-Tootkar Ravaan Hai!!!

Tere Husn Ki Tareef "Khwaish" Kin Lafzon mein Kare
Tere Husn Ke Aage....
"Khwaish" ka Har Lafz Be-zubaan Hai!!!

"Khwaish" Khwaabon Ki Duniya
Haseen Bahut Hai Par Yaad Rakh!!
Ishq Ek Aisi Aag hai Jisme Sirf Dhuaan Hi Dhuaan Hai!!!!
 
              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: April 05, 2011, 09:15:12 AM »
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Wow kya baat hai Khwaish ji,very romantic n mindblowing creation,keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 05, 2011, 09:29:05 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh khumaar me dubi aapki ye tehreer laajawab hai...
itna pyaar itna romanch itni bekhudi ..ye nasha....uffffffffff kaise likh lete hain aap in sabko iss tarah .....
excellent poem khwaish ji......
aisi hi khumar k rang me rangkar kuch likhenge iske jawab me ...just wait for sm time ji........
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«Reply #3 on: April 05, 2011, 09:47:06 AM »
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Waah ji waah ki gal hai bahut hi wadiya likheya tusi sach kavaan te bada acha lageya tuadi ae kavita padh k..sach vich lajwaab hai ji...
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Wow kya baat hai Khwaish ji,very romantic n mindblowing creation,keep it up. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Thanks A Lotttttttt Madhu Dear..

Thanks a Ton For Appreciating!!! icon_flower

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«Reply #5 on: April 05, 2011, 10:40:55 AM »
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mast mast mastam he khwaish ji....

har baar ki tarah lajawab zazbaat baya kiye he apne.......
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«Reply #6 on: April 05, 2011, 10:58:35 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhhh khumaar me dubi aapki ye tehreer laajawab hai...
itna pyaar itna romanch itni bekhudi ..ye nasha....uffffffffff kaise likh lete hain aap in sabko iss tarah .....
excellent poem khwaish ji......
aisi hi khumar k rang me rangkar kuch likhenge iske jawab me ...just wait for sm time ji........


Anuji, Aapne Isse Yakeenan Dil ki nazro se padha isliye aapko yeh kalaam itna khoobsurat mehsoos hua..kuch baatein thi dil ki jinhe Lafz mil gaye aur main likhta chala gaya..

Aapka humesha Ki tarah bahutttttttttt bahuttttttttttt shukriya

Aapke Poetry ka besabri se intezaar rahega..shukriya icon_flower


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«Reply #7 on: April 05, 2011, 12:41:57 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: April 05, 2011, 01:11:34 PM »
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Waah ji waah ki gal hai bahut hi wadiya likheya tusi sach kavaan te bada acha lageya tuadi ae kavita padh k..sach vich lajwaab hai ji...

Geetji,Tuada tehhh Dilll To shukriya

Mainu Eh Jaankar Bhaut Khushi Hui hai Ke Kalaam Tuanu Inna pasand aaya..

Inj hi saath Dende reha karo..Thankyou icon_flower

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«Reply #9 on: April 05, 2011, 01:13:02 PM »
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bht bht khoob khwaish ji...
Sply last one...
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«Reply #10 on: April 05, 2011, 02:17:18 PM »
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Incredible !!!

Wow Its really beautiful and Very Romantic creation Khwaish Ji... Mann Bhavuk ho gaya Isse pad kar... pata nahi Kyun ... !!

Thanks for sharing ur wonderful creation with us !!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #11 on: April 05, 2011, 06:34:56 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khawaish JI
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2011, 07:13:40 PM »
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Dil khushi kita Khwaish dost..
Kitni romantic aur khubsoorat nazm..
Lekin akhri shaer toh tamam haqeeqatein bayan
kar gaya..
Pehle do shaer, mere dil ki arzoo the ek zamane main
mager ab dhoor dhoor lagta hai..
Khair, bahaut zada acha likha hai..!
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #13 on: April 06, 2011, 04:07:34 AM »
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bahut bahut khub....khwaishji.....

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«Reply #14 on: April 06, 2011, 03:27:50 PM »
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Oye Hoye Khwaish Bhai.. Behad Rumaaaaaaani... Khwaish Bhai aapko Padhna Humesha sukhad Hota Hai.. Aur aapka yeh Qalaam to Uffffff.. Yaaaaaaaaar Bahut Bahut Pyara aur Mohabbat se Bhara Likha Hai Bhai....!!

Ek ek Lafz Mohabbat Bikherta Nazar aaya.. aapki yeh Thread Ne Khumaar-e-Ishq Me Chaar Chaand Laga diye Hain.. Daad hi Daad.. Applause Applause

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