ishq me dil ki kuch aisi halat hoti hai

by @kaash on April 07, 2010, 01:05:06 PM
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this is mainly written for the feelings of love.the only request is that pls see poem as a poem



ishq me dil ki kuch aisi halat hoti hai
dil me dard jo uthe,meethi chahat hoti hai


ishq me ishq ki rawaani yun rahti hai
dil me dastak dil ki rawani hoti hai

ishq ek ehsaas hai aisa jisse dunia ho haseen
ishq me dunia se koi shikayat nahi rahti hai


kabhi husn ka jalwa kabhi adaaon ka pehra hi
kya kahen unki aakhen bhi bahut kuch kahti hai


ishq koi shart nahi koi ikraar nahi maangta
mohabbat ki dunia izhaar se aage bhi hoti hai


khyaalon me jhoomen kabhi khyaalon se jhoom jayen
aankhen band ho palken rumaniyat ki zuba hoti hai

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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2010, 03:01:42 PM »
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Bahut ki khoobsurat shabdon me aapne ishq ko pesh kiya hai Kaash ji... bahut khoob...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2010, 04:30:54 PM »
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bahut accha likha kaash ji.....mohabbat k khoobsurat aehsaas ko bakhubi utara hai aapne inn alfaazon mein..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2010, 05:13:17 PM »
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Behad Khubsoorat Khayalaat Likhe Hain Kaash Bhai.. Mohabbat Me Doobe aapke Yeh Alfaaz Dil Ki Geharaaiyon Ko Chhoo Gaye.. Bahut Khoooooooooob Bhai.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2010, 05:37:04 PM »
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bahoot khoob likha hai kaash ji.....aur sach bhi. daad kabul karen..but aapne poem likhne se pahle jo line likhi uska matlab mujhe samajh nahi aaya
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2010, 06:07:15 PM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji bade kamaal ka kalaam hai aapka. Bhavpurn evam asardaar. Is rachna ko padhkar man mein kuchh khyaal aaye jo yahan likh raha hun, mulaheza farmayen :

Ishq ho jaaye to din raat badal jaate hain
Neend aati nahi par khwab nazar aate hain

Ye matle ka ek sher ho gaya, main koshish karunga puri ghazal likhkar Yo par post karun.
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2010, 09:02:46 AM »
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this is mainly written for the feelings of love.the only request is that pls see poem as a poem



ishq me dil ki kuch aisi halat hoti hai
dil me dard jo uthe,meethi chahat hoti hai


ishq me ishq ki rawaani yun rahti hai
dil me dastak dil ki rawani hoti hai

ishq ek ehsaas hai aisa jisse dunia ho haseen
ishq me dunia se koi shikayat nahi rahti hai


kabhi husn ka jalwa kabhi adaaon ka pehra hi
kya kahen unki aakhen bhi bahut kuch kahti hai


ishq koi shart nahi koi ikraar nahi maangta
mohabbat ki dunia izhaar se aage bhi hoti hai


khyaalon me jhoomen kabhi khyaalon se jhoom jayen
aankhen band ho palken rumaniyat ki zuba hoti hai



Bahut achchhi peshkash hai Kaash Ji
Lagta hai bahut anubhav hai ia chhetra mein aap ko
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2010, 01:27:30 PM »
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achhi peshkash umda...


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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2010, 05:06:57 AM »
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Wah wah Kaash ji,bahut achi lagi aapke kavita fantastic creation.keep it up. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2010, 11:27:53 AM »
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Wah Kaash ji very nice
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«Reply #10 on: April 11, 2010, 11:33:43 AM »
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bahut khooooooooooooooooooooob kashji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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