Itna Pyaar Kyun Hai......!!!

by Talat on May 18, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
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This is the longest poem, I have ever written....Don't know how much justice I have done to the feelings of a girl on finding her love in her life....!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 11:00:50 AM »
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Tallu,

Kya baat hai Winking

Itna khumar ! Oye hoye ! Applause Applause Applause

Jaane Tum Pe Aitebaar KyuN Hai
Hume Tumse Itna Pyaar Kyun Hai Usual Smile Both Thumbs Up
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2009, 11:09:33 AM »
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celmira ji,excellent,mindblowing,very very nice etc,
bahut dil se aapne likhi,keep it up. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2009, 11:14:04 AM »
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very nice and sorry
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2009, 12:35:42 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 18, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
This is the longest poem, I have ever written....Don't know how much justice I have done to the feelings of a girl on finding her love in her life....!!!




ZABARDAST DR SAHIBAA....KAAFI DINOON BAAD AISAA KALAAM PADNEY KO MILAA.....VERIII VERIII NAAAICE...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2009, 01:23:37 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 18, 2009, 11:00:50 AM
Tallu,

Kya baat hai Winking

Itna khumar ! Oye hoye ! Applause Applause Applause

Jaane Tum Pe Aitebaar KyuN Hai
Hume Tumse Itna Pyaar Kyun Hai Usual Smile Both Thumbs Up

Thanks so much for your comments...It's always very encouraging and nice to see your comments on my threads....!!

Thanks a lot Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2009, 01:48:21 PM »
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Arey wah kya baat hain, Sabse pehle to its beautiful and very cute work. And thank you so much for writing so frequently...Its always a pleasure to read you.
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2009, 02:46:17 PM »
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Talat Ji... Yeh Poem waqai Behad Khubsoorat ehasaas aur Jazzbaat Liye Hue Hai.. Ek Ladki Ke Pyaar bhare Khayaalaaton ko Bakhoobhi Bayaan Kiya Hai aapne.. Very Touching Poem..!! Bahut kHoooooooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #8 on: May 18, 2009, 03:05:29 PM »
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TALAT DI
IS POEM KI JITNI BHI TAREEF KARE KAM HAI
PADHTE PADHTE AISA LAGA APNE HI EHSAAS
AUR JAZBAAT HAI
MASHAALLAH YUNHI LIKHTE RAHIYE.
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«Reply #9 on: May 18, 2009, 05:03:03 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2009, 11:09:33 AM
celmira ji,excellent,mindblowing,very very nice etc,
bahut dil se aapne likhi,keep it up. Applause Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Madhu...Your comments are very pleasing....Thank you for the lovely encouragement !!
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2009, 05:18:04 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai Aapne Talat Sis,.
BOhat Achche, Jo Koi Bhi Ise Padhega Ek Pal Ke Liye Apni Mohbat Ka Khayaal Karega,.
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2009, 10:34:22 AM »
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Quote from: amarhellboy on May 18, 2009, 11:14:04 AM
very nice and sorry

Thanks...and dont worry be happy !
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2009, 10:35:53 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 18, 2009, 12:33:57 PM
SubhanAllah..waah bahot khoob behad khumaari se bhari poem likhi hai aapne   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley can make neone speechless... emotions r so pious..a splendid composition..behad ache jazbaat..ek koshish                                                                                                                                                                                                    kashti-e-ehsaas tufaano se bhi rahti beparwaah,umadti lahron me bhi saahil ki nahi darkaar kyun hai..aasmaa ka raz-e-ishq subah-o-shaam se Khuda ke paas hai,taaron ke darmiyaa jo dekhe hum to roshni ki kataar sadabahaar kyun hai

Thanks so much Kaash Ji...It is always very nice and pleasing to see your lovely comments......Thank You....and you wrote a very nice couplet...Bohot khoob !
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2009, 01:19:38 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 18, 2009, 12:35:42 PM

ZABARDAST DR SAHIBAA....KAAFI DINOON BAAD AISAA KALAAM PADNEY KO MILAA.....VERIII VERIII NAAAICE...!!!

Thanks for such a nice comment, Khamosh Ji Bohot shukriya !
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2009, 03:23:21 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 18, 2009, 01:48:21 PM
Arey wah kya baat hain, Sabse pehle to its beautiful and very cute work. And thank you so much for writing so frequently...Its always a pleasure to read you.

Thanks a lot Sajid Bhai for reading this nazm....and for your kind words.....Yeah I am writing more these days...Hope to continue this way !  icon_thumleft Bohot shukriya !
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