Itna Pyaar Kyun Hai......!!!

by Talat on May 18, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
Pages: 1 2 [3]  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 5307 times)
vikas2210
Guest
«Reply #30 on: May 21, 2009, 12:07:02 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Celmira on May 18, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
This is the longest poem, I have ever written....Don't know how much justice I have done to the feelings of a girl on finding her love in her life....!!!




Wah wah bahot acche se dil ke ehssas utaar diye aapne shabdon se.


Jaane tum pe aitbaar kyun hai

very nice.  keep them comming
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
Itna kyun chaha use ke bhula na sake by fairy2633 in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai
*Kyun itna tarpa rahi ho tum mujhko* by Rajesh Harish in Miscellaneous Shayri
Kyun Yaad Aa Rahe Ho Itna Aaj by deepika_divya in Shayri for Dard -e- Judai « 1 2 3 4 5 »
--- Kyun Itna mai Chahun tujhe --- by killbill in Share: Poetry of Pain « 1 2  All »
Naahaq itna pyaar diya kyuN ! by shara63 in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai « 1 2  All »
aaina
Guest
«Reply #31 on: May 22, 2009, 08:21:22 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Celmira on May 18, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
This is the longest poem, I have ever written....Don't know how much justice I have done to the feelings of a girl on finding her love in her life....!!!



such a nice nzam celmira ji............yaqeenan aapne apni is nazm ke sath insaaf kya hai aur bhut inkesaari ke sath......you.n hi likhti rahiye bhut acha likhti hain..god bless u
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #32 on: May 26, 2009, 11:58:55 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: {Angel} on May 20, 2009, 05:01:04 PM
Not sweeter than your lovely poems Usual Smile

Cho Chweet Usual Smile
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #33 on: May 26, 2009, 11:59:25 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: vikas2210 on May 21, 2009, 12:07:02 PM

Wah wah bahot acche se dil ke ehssas utaar diye aapne shabdon se.


Jaane tum pe aitbaar kyun hai

very nice.  keep them comming

Thanks so much Vikas Usual Smile
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #34 on: May 26, 2009, 12:00:14 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: aaina on May 22, 2009, 08:21:22 AM
such a nice nzam celmira ji............yaqeenan aapne apni is nazm ke sath insaaf kya hai aur bhut inkesaari ke sath......you.n hi likhti rahiye bhut acha likhti hain..god bless u

Thanks so much Aslam Ji...Aap yunhi hausla dete rahiyega humesha !
Logged
SARVESH RASTOGI
Guest
«Reply #35 on: May 26, 2009, 12:37:10 PM »
Reply with quote
Very sound very perfect, Celmira Ji
Start me aapne poem ki lambai ka jikr kiya hai.  Hame rachna ki lambai nahin, uski gahrai naapni hai.  Aapki is rachna me doob gaye hum sachmuch. 
Ek filmi geet yaad aa gaya:
Main tumhi se poochhti hun mujhe tumse pyar kyun hai
kabhi tum daga na doge mujhe aitbaar kyun hai
SARVESH RASTOGI
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #36 on: May 27, 2009, 01:39:49 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 26, 2009, 12:37:10 PM
Very sound very perfect, Celmira Ji
Start me aapne poem ki lambai ka jikr kiya hai.  Hame rachna ki lambai nahin, uski gahrai naapni hai.  Aapki is rachna me doob gaye hum sachmuch. 
Ek filmi geet yaad aa gaya:
Main tumhi se poochhti hun mujhe tumse pyar kyun hai
kabhi tum daga na doge mujhe aitbaar kyun hai
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thanks a lot Sarvesh Ji.... getting comments from a senior person like you is an honour itself....Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya aapne is gehraayi se ye nzm padhi.....itna saraha....Thanks so much  notworthy notworthy notworthy
Logged
sawant serswal
Guest
«Reply #37 on: July 25, 2011, 02:32:44 AM »
Reply with quote
love your friend
Logged
adil bechain
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 161
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
31 days, 18 hours and 24 minutes.

Posts: 6552
Member Since: Mar 2009


View Profile
«Reply #38 on: July 25, 2011, 08:33:18 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: Celmira on May 18, 2009, 10:50:55 AM
This is the longest poem, I have ever written....Don't know how much justice I have done to the feelings of a girl on finding her love in her life....!!!



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
Pages: 1 2 [3]  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq > Topic: Itna Pyaar Kyun Hai......!!!
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 14, 2024, 02:55:32 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Hifazat - a thriller love...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]
INTEQAM - A sequel to "Hi...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.118 seconds with 24 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8508 Real Poets and poetry admirer