**** IZHAAR *****

by salil2002 on March 17, 2009, 08:39:23 AM
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hey dear yo buddies ...........hope u all like it......i jst tried to write a love proposal in the form of poem

ho agar izazat toh ek baat kahoon
tu chal sake mere saath toh main tere saath chalun
door neele gagan k paar chand kii dharti par
aa beith mere saath toh mein tujhse izhaar karoon
yoon tere aashiq hazaaron honge
mujhe oonse alag kar toh mohabbat kii shuruaat karoon
dil main bhi doonga tujhe tere dil k badle
jo manjoor ho na yeh sauda, toh phir main mere yaar chaloon

keh gaya tu jo woh mere dil ne sab suna
par tu jo sun sake toh main bhi ek baat kahoon
dil dhadakta hai yeh mera kissii k naam se
yeh bhi chahta saathi jiske main hardum saath rahoon
na le chal mujhe chand kii dharti par
main chahti hoon tere seene par rakh k sar tujhse baat karoon
mohabbat toh mujhe bhi thi tujhse mere dilbar
aa beith mere aagosh mein main ji bhar k tujhe pyaar karoon
 
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2009, 09:50:29 AM »
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Waah, Yaar Kya Khoob Love Letter Banaaya Hai, Bohat Achcha Hai,

Great Job, Yunhi Likhte Rehna,.

Khush Raho,.
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2009, 10:08:41 AM »
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hey dear yo buddies ...........hope u all like it......i jst tried to write a love proposal in the form of poem

ho agar izazat toh ek baat kahoon
tu chal sake mere saath toh main tere saath chalun
door neele gagan k paar chand kii dharti par
aa beith mere saath toh mein tujhse izhaar karoon
yoon tere aashiq hazaaron honge
mujhe oonse alag kar toh mohabbat kii shuruaat karoon
dil main bhi doonga tujhe tere dil k badle
jo manjoor ho na yeh sauda, toh phir main mere yaar chaloon

keh gaya tu jo woh mere dil ne sab suna
par tu jo sun sake toh main bhi ek baat kahoon
dil dhadakta hai yeh mera kissii k naam se
yeh bhi chahta saathi jiske main hardum saath rahoon
na le chal mujhe chand kii dharti par
main chahti hoon tere seene par rakh k sar tujhse baat karoon
mohabbat toh mujhe bhi thi tujhse mere dilbar
aa beith mere aagosh mein main ji bhar k tujhe pyaar karoon
 

Very very nice n written wid full of love Applause Applause Applause

Badi muddat se jo dil me dabaye rakha tha,
Aaj us ehsaas ko zubaan se mai bayan karun,

Yun to bahot dawe sune hai Mohabbat ke maine,
Jee karta hai ek tujhpe aitbaar karun,

Jo kehna payi zubaan meri kabhi tujhse,
Aa tujhse jhukaye palken mai izhaar karu,

Sambhale na sambhle chubhan ye mohabbat ki,
Aa baith mere paas mai tujhe pyaar karun,

Yun to jaan dete hai kayi ashique mujhpe,
Par tujhpe hi meri jaan mai jaan nisaar karun!!

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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 10:13:19 AM »
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Nice One Salma
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«Reply #4 on: March 17, 2009, 10:19:40 AM »
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Thanks Azeem ji!
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«Reply #5 on: March 17, 2009, 10:50:47 AM »
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Kafi Dino Baad Aapko Padhne ka Mauka Mila Salil Bhai
Bahoot Khoob Likha Is Bar Bhi
 Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Salmaji
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 17, 2009, 11:02:55 AM »
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Shukriya Pank ji!
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«Reply #7 on: March 17, 2009, 11:08:51 AM »
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Very very nice n written wid full of love Applause Applause Applause

Badi muddat se jo dil me dabaye rakha tha,
Aaj us ehsaas ko zubaan se mai bayan karun,

Yun to bahot dawe sune hai Mohabbat ke maine,
Jee karta hai ek tujhpe aitbaar karun,

Jo kehna payi zubaan meri kabhi tujhse,
Aa tujhse jhukaye palken mai izhaar karu,

Sambhale na sambhle chubhan ye mohabbat ki,
Aa baith mere paas mai tujhe pyaar karun,

Yun to jaan dete hai kayi ashique mujhpe,
Par tujhpe hi meri jaan mai jaan nisaar karun!!


salma ji shukriya mujhe padne ka aur jo aapne reply kiya hai oos ka kya kehna.............qasam se aapne bahut dil se likha hai


kar na paaye hum izhaar apni mohabbat ka
kii jab bhi chahakehna woh labon ko choon lete thay
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2009, 11:14:15 AM »
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Waah, Yaar Kya Khoob Love Letter Banaaya Hai, Bohat Achcha Hai,

Great Job, Yunhi Likhte Rehna,.

Khush Raho,.
Kafi Dino Baad Aapko Padhne ka Mauka Mila Salil Bhai
Bahoot Khoob Likha Is Bar Bhi
 Applause Applause Applause
Nice One Salmaji
 Applause Applause Applause
shukriya azeem bhai, pank ji,
itni taref k haqdaar toh nahin samjha tha maine khudko

mohabbat kii kahaani ban jaati
jo kabool kar leti mera izhaar
ab toh yeh zindgi hai bojh nazar aati
maut hi de deti mujhe na karti inkaar
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2009, 11:21:50 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha hai salil .

Very nice reply Salma
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2009, 12:33:01 PM »
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salma ji shukriya mujhe padne ka aur jo aapne reply kiya hai oos ka kya kehna.............qasam se aapne bahut dil se likha hai


kar na paaye hum izhaar apni mohabbat ka
kii jab bhi chahakehna woh labon ko choon lete thay

Shukriya Salil ji !
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2009, 12:34:40 PM »
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bahoot khoob likha hai salil .

Very nice reply Salma
Thanks Sophi Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 18, 2009, 07:34:53 AM »
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Bohat khoob Salil and Salma tumhare bhi kya kehne..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2009, 09:12:38 AM »
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Bohat khoob Salil and Salma tumhare bhi kya kehne..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya Sajid ji!
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«Reply #14 on: March 21, 2009, 06:09:51 AM »
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bahoot khoob likha hai salil .

Very nice reply Salma
Bohat khoob Salil and Salma tumhare bhi kya kehne..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
thanks sophi and sajid bhai
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