Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega

by deepika_divya on June 18, 2007, 07:19:56 AM
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Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega…

Bana lungi teri yaado ko, apne maang ka sindur
Meri mohabbat se tu inkaar na kar payega

Main teri Diwani hun, tub hi mera diwana hai
Tadpega jab tu mere liye , is Dil pe Dastak dene jarur aayega

Chan chan chankegi jab kisi ki payal
Uski ghunj mein tu meri pukar  paayega

Chukar ghujregi jab tadi pawan tujhe
Tab uss ehsaas mein tujhe mera aks nazar aayega

Beet jaaye bale hi kitni hi saal sanam
Apni har mazil , har rrah mein mujhe kada paayega

Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega.....(2).
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2007, 09:26:17 AM »
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Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega…

Bana lungi teri yaado ko, apne maang ka sindur
Meri mohabbat se tu inkaar na kar payega

Main teri Diwani hun, tub hi mera diwana hai
Tadpega jab tu mere liye , is Dil pe Dastak dene jarur aayega

Chan chan chankegi jab kisi ki payal
Uski ghunj mein tu meri pukar  paayega

Chukar ghujregi jab tadi pawan tujhe
Tab uss ehsaas mein tujhe mera aks nazar aayega

Beet jaaye bale hi kitni hi saal sanam
Apni har mazil , har rrah mein mujhe kada paayega

Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega.....(2).


bhoot khoob likh hai aapne divya ji,

bhoot tadfata hoo kisee kha khyal dil me ayaa hai
chod kar aya tha jise uski yado ne darde-dil jagaya hai

jana chahta hoo lot kar unhi haseen vadiyo me
magar ghoomte hai hamdam mere kisi or ke hee khayalo me

kisiki khta n thee, ishak bejubaa ho gya that mera hee
ham samjhte the jis haseen ko apna wo hogaye kisi or ke hee

lot aya the ham jajbaat  dil me hee liye apne
chahte the baya karna juba se, hoot tak see liye hamne

wo ho gaye the kisi ke, jo hamare the hee nahi kabhi
ham to yoo hee pyar karte hai, bhoole nahi unhe bhee kabhi

aaj kuch dard sa mahsoos hota hai kise anjane ahasaas se
lot sakta nahi chah kar bhee mai uswayee unki hone ke dar se

netra...
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«Reply #2 on: June 18, 2007, 01:02:50 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai Divya ... Bahut Hi Mohabbat Bhari Pesh kash Hai aapki.. Maza aa gaya Padh kar.... Usual Smile Usual Smile

& Too Good Netra Ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2007, 05:49:35 PM »
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Nice & interesting one Divya..

Netra ji.. you wrote good..
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«Reply #4 on: June 19, 2007, 05:44:10 AM »
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Another Lovely Post by You.... Divya
Very Positive Approach... Liked it... Usual Smile


Also, Nice Addition...  Netra... =D>
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«Reply #5 on: June 19, 2007, 09:05:11 PM »
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bahoot hi khoob Divya, bahoot acha likha hai... good one Netra ji!!!

Good job Both!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2007, 04:16:28 AM »
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Thank u so much Netrapal ji, Vicky , Ricky JI, Shikha di & Pooja Di..
thanks all of u for ur feedback!

Good one netrapal ji...

jao tumhe jaane hai tho, ak din tum laut aaoge

kisi baho mea dhoo kyun na jao,
mere aanchal se khelne tum laut aaoge

ho jao tum kitne bhi vyast sanam
kisi na kisi pal meri yaad mea tum behak hi jaoge

chalo jab kabhi tum akele kisi raah mea
mere saaye ka haat thaam tum apni mazil hi paaoge

jab miljayegi kamyabhi tumhe
uss kamyabhi ki kushi tum mere sang hi manaoge

barsaat mea bigoge jab kabhi tum
bini bini mitti ki kusboo mea tum mera ehsaas paoge

jao tumhe jaana hai tho, ak din tum laut aaoge
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«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2007, 04:23:11 AM »
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very nice divya
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2007, 04:34:58 AM »
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Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega…

Bana lungi teri yaado ko, apne maang ka sindur
Meri mohabbat se tu inkaar na kar payega

Main teri Diwani hun, tub hi mera diwana hai
Tadpega jab tu mere liye , is Dil pe Dastak dene jarur aayega

Chan chan chankegi jab kisi ki payal
Uski ghunj mein tu meri pukar  paayega

Chukar ghujregi jab tadi pawan tujhe
Tab uss ehsaas mein tujhe mera aks nazar aayega

Beet jaaye bale hi kitni hi saal sanam
Apni har mazil , har rrah mein mujhe kada paayega

Ja tujhe jana hai tho ,Tu laut kar jarur aayega.....(2).



Touba, Badaa Krantikari pyaar hai!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2007, 10:49:27 AM »
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sweet Divya...
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2007, 11:31:23 AM »
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thank u paani
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«Reply #11 on: June 21, 2007, 08:16:08 PM »
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nice divya ji..........


Mai laut kar aon ga a kar us ko galay se lagaon lon ga.
door reh kar bohat tarpa hon us k bina.
us ko sab dard aur dil ki tarap dekhaon ga.
Aj dil mai arman hai kuch jaghay kuch totte sapne hein fir se jorey.
Aj kiya hai deedar us ka sapne mai us apne ki tabeer us ko sunaon ga.
Bittta nahi tha ek ek lamha us k bina.
sambhal nahi tha dil us k bina.
Roya hon kitnna us ki yaadon mai.
ek ek ansoo gin gin kar dekhaon ga.
mai laut kar aon ga a kar us ko galay se lagaon ga.
door reh kar bohat tarpa hon us k bina.
us ko sab dard aur us ki tarap dekhaon ga.....!!!! sad5
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«Reply #12 on: June 21, 2007, 08:31:39 PM »
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Nice one.............

Shukar hai Khuda ko b mere pe Tars aya hai.
Jo US k Dil mai mere liye Pyaar jaghya hai.
khayal aya hai hai dil mai k.
meri yaadon ko us ne galay se lagaya hai.
Jo meri taraf dekhna b pasand nahi karte they.
aj unho ne apni nashiili nigahon se jaam pilaaya hai.
Us k chehre ki wo lali wo madham se us k honth.
us k chehre ki roshni se mere chehre pe b Noor Aya hai.
Jis dil mai Dard hi Rehta tha Tanhaii ka saya mein hasu rehta tha.
Aj dard meri zindagi se door khushi muskuraii hai.
Shukar hai Khuda ko b mere pe tars aya hai.
jo us k dil mai mere liye pyaar jaghya hai....!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: June 21, 2007, 08:33:59 PM »
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netra ji Jawab par lijiye ga ap k shair ka
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«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2007, 03:29:21 AM »
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wonderful hasu  . really very sweet reply... Keep writing !

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