Jaal(CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on January 29, 2013, 05:39:45 PM
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jaal apne husn ka tune is kader faila rakha hai
hakim ko bhi tune apna deewana  bana rakha hai

chotti ho ya badi kadar hai mujhe teri har ek chij ki
gumo ko bhi tere hamne khud ke seene se laaga rakha hai

hai ummid aayoge ek din tum meri jindgi mei
diya tere aane ki ummid ka dil mei jala rakha hai

aayi hai mahak bahut tej, tere, mere pass aate hi
perfume shayed aaj jarurat se jyada laaga rakha hai 
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«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2013, 05:46:54 PM »
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 Giggle Giggle bahut khoob bahut khoob.........
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«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2013, 05:49:41 PM »
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Giggle Giggle bahut khoob bahut khoob.........
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THX
HASE KIS BAAT PE JARA HAME BHI BAATA DO
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«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2013, 06:47:52 PM »
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Manoj Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob, bade achche ashaar kahe hai aapne..
Waise toH sabhi ashaar achche rahe par hume yeH quoted ashaar behad
khoob lage.. Usual Smile


Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Quote from: MANOJ6568 on January 29, 2013, 05:39:45 PM

hai ummid aayoge ek din tum meri jindgi mei
diya tere aane ki ummid ka dil mei jala rakha hai


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   icon_thumleft icon_thumleft
aayi hai mahak bahut tej, tere, mere pass aate hi
perfume shayed aaj jarurat se jyada laaga rakha hai


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«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2013, 06:50:34 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 29, 2013, 06:47:52 PM
Manoj Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob, bade achche ashaar kahe hai aapne..
Waise toH sabhi ashaar achche rahe par hume yeH quoted ashaar behad
khoob lage.. Usual Smile


Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye.. aate rahiye..
Bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
SALAAM WALEKUM
HAUSLA AFSAI KA BAHUT BAHUT SUKKRIYA
IS NACHIZ KO LIKHANA KUCH BHI NAHI AATA BUS JO MAN KARTA HAI WAHI LIKH DETA HU
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«Reply #5 on: January 30, 2013, 05:56:30 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 30, 2013, 06:05:04 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: January 30, 2013, 06:23:42 AM »
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kya baat hai manoj jee behad khoob andaaz raha
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«Reply #8 on: January 30, 2013, 10:04:49 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on January 29, 2013, 05:39:45 PM
jaal apne husn ka tune is kader faila rakha hai
hakim ko bhi tune apna deewana  bana rakha hai

chotti ho ya badi kadar hai mujhe teri har ek chij ki
gumo ko bhi tere hamne khud ke seene se laaga rakha hai

hai ummid aayoge ek din tum meri jindgi mei
diya tere aane ki ummid ka dil mei jala rakha hai

aayi hai mahak bahut tej, tere, mere pass aate hi
perfume shayed aaj jarurat se jyada laaga rakha hai



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Quote from: nandbahu on January 30, 2013, 06:05:04 AM
very nice
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«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2013, 03:39:15 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 30, 2013, 06:23:42 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai manoj jee behad khoob andaaz raha
Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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